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Straight!? Revamp v0.15 Patreon Release!!

EDIT: Android Links Posted

(Queue the Kill Bill music for the promo image)

Hey all,

Friggen finally! Revamp v15 is here. This is Chapter 7 part 2 of 3. It's no secret that this update has been tough and that I underestimated the workload but I hope you like it. I've played through it a few times and this is so much better than the original section was.

Following the emotional events of Chapter 6, Chapter 7 was a struggle to write and it always felt flatter than I had liked. This version does exactly what the story needs to do: it doesn't try to 1-up Chapter 6, it simply goes in a new direction and I think this version just feels inherently more comfortable. It's fun, quirky, lots of teasing and banter, some pretty serious moments, and more skin than we've seen in a long time. Plus we just get to see more of the world-- a lot more of the world.

For those of you that never played the original: i hope you enjoy the day away from campus. For those of you who played or liked the original story here, I hope there's an entirely new light to this part.

I know it took me longer than usual but I hope you see that it was worth it.

PC:    MediaFire      Mega     GDrive

MAC:  MediaFire      Mega     GDrive

Android: MediaFire    GDrive

(If you're unable to get the Android before March and your subscription ends, just message me here or on Discord and I'll send you the link)

Straight!? Revamp v0.15 Patreon Release!!

Comments

Been a busy week but oh my god! What an update. Love the colors and new perspectives. Even the subtle changes are great!! "Night Zack" at the end just melted me. Love what you have done!! Kudos to you Aaryn and your team!!!!

Afees700

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Kolby Newland

I just have to say, YOU DID IT AGAIN.! I love it.! Beautiful story.!!! I can’t wait for the next update.! I hope that you continue because I am so invested in it. ❤️❤️❤️

Alejandro Meza

hope you enjoy the revamp. it sorta hit the spot for me after finishing the original

Aaryn

Just finished the original, now to continue the revamp! Any idea when the android version will be posted? Thanks for all your hard work!

Angel Navarro

you're awesome too! thanks as always for the support. hope you enjoy both it and the bottle of wine :)

Aaryn

And my Saturday night is booked up. Gonna settle in with a bottle of wine and enjoy the update! Thanks Aaryn you and your team are awesome!!!

Afees700

this is amazing and thank you so much for the help. you mind if i promote the link you send on my socials? maybe give you some traction back

Aaryn

Done! Yeah had to call it out. The show was live, but we release it as a podcast on Thursdays so ill let you know where to find it end of the week.

Kolby Newland

well a ton of major visual changes and stuff but yeah, the small things were just a few extra lines here and there and the facial expressions imo. i feel like at this point, i should've just called the game Braden's Face cause it tells half the story. the short zack space out scene in the bar was completely rewritten though. the old one was meh and it just felt way more impactful. everything else i think was just banter cause i really enjoy writing characters that tease the fuck outta each other :p

Aaryn

It may have felt like small changes, but the impact on the vibe was huge. The flow was so good, the subtle emotions. It's been a long time since i went through the original story, but i remember clearly that this level of feelings wasn't generated for me. I'm absolutely obsessed!!! And unfortunately desperate for the next one now lol

Ty

aww. thank you. there are some emotional moments here-- additions that weren't included in the original but they really felt necessary. i'm seriously glad you enjoyed it. thank you so much <3

Aaryn

Wow, this update did everything it needed to do and more! In so many ways this is just as big as chapter 6, not in the grand scale of the events, but in the way you can feel the deeper emotional connection and the change in the relationship throughout this whole section. I was moved to tears at one point!!

Ty

omg holy crap, i can't believe you waited that long. i always worry about people just sitting there waiting. i think about it less now with the revamp because the demand is lower since a ton of people read the original. but i'll take this as a huge compliment that you feel it was worth waiting all that time on. i'm extra glad you enjoyed this. thank you so much and go get some rest :p

Aaryn

I stayed up for 15 Hours STRAIGHT after the update announcement! 3 of those was due to an internet outage in my area, one was due to download, and unzip time holy hell I'm proud of myself for this one. and I was blown away from start to finish. the textures, the lighting, the scenery. I see why this update took longer and it SHOWS! you made huge improvements by absolute leaps and bounds. I could CRY right now!

Navi Jay

That would mean the world to me. I’d be honored if you did a shout out for me. And hells yeah DM me the link here or discord or whatever. I can’t wait and thank you so much 🙏

Aaryn

We do a queer videogame show on a queer radio network and we like supporting indie games, plus I'm a producer so we good. I'll DM you where to find the audio end of next week in case you are interested.

Kolby Newland

i hope it's worth the wait. i wish you safe travels :)

Aaryn

hey, thanks so much. honestly: i'm with you. if i'd never played before: i think the waits are worth it. it ends up feeling more like episodes and i really do try and stop the updates at a spot that makes sense just like an episode would. the quality of this one is far superior to the original. buuuuut i also know that some have a hard time waiting when the ending is just right there! but thanks so much and just so you know: we have a ton of story left

Aaryn

well, first off: i hope the story takes even a fraction of your stress away. i'm grateful that you'd use it to help decompress. and also, wow, thanks for the shout out. i really depend on word of mouth from the readers. i'd really appreciate you recommending it. just dont get in trouble since it's technically an adult game

Aaryn

yo, thanks a lot . im really glad you liked this one. i think the banter is fun to write anyway and it does give us additional examples of how these two continue to build a bond. also glad you like the music. music is a tough one and i kinda take some risks with it sometimes but i try to make it fit the mood thats in my head

Aaryn

Another masterpiece of a chapter. Great work Aaryn, definitely smooths out the right notes and feel. Perfect pace and extra humour was great. Also loving the music, fitting very well to mood.

Warren

Can't wait to check this one out. Perfect timing - after a rough week. Might even call this game out on a radio show I do tomorrow

Kolby Newland

I am deeply taken with this, it’s not my usual go to and I must admit I downloaded Patreon for this. Again just to reiterate my appreciation. I am refraining from checking out the original as I’m so deeply in love with this version. Thanks 🫶🏻

Liam

I cannot wait to get home.!!

Alejandro Meza


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