Straight!? v0.17.2 (Typos and Continuity Fix)
Added 2020-01-14 04:02:04 +0000 UTCYo,
Here's the updated version of v017 with the typo fixes. I want to thank all the supporters who gave feedback and suggestions on fixes. I also want to invite all of you over the next time I'm studying for a fucking spelling test. There's also a short wording change in the car scene at the beginning that was recommended to make things flow better.
This updated version also has the continuity fix for the beach scene. This fixes the previous version that had a bug if you chose "hot" before "volleyball" at the beach. For those who played the other version, this doesn't change the beach scene significantly but it does tweak the order a bit. It definitely doesn't require a replay or anything. This was an incredibly difficult bug fix for my amateur level so it took forever. Let me know if you have any problems or if there's any other continuity errors--specifically during the beach scene. I'm fully prepared to have overlooked something else with it but I'd like to be extremely confident that it's fixed before we drop the free version to the public. I also appreciate anyone commenting if they don't see any errors either. Both are helpful.
PC: Google Drive Mega MediaFire
MAC: Google Drive Mega MediaFire
Change Log v0.17.2
-Lots of typo fixes
-Slight rearrange of dialogue in the final car scenes on the way to the beach to improve the conversational flow at the suggestion of a supporter
-Corrected a beach CG where Zack and Mikhail's shorts suddenly changed from trunks to their normal outfits during the beach intro conversations
-Made adjustments to the beach activity choices. There was a continuity error here where, based on the order of your choice, certain objects appeared in game before they were retrieved. The order has been reworked while still allowing the player to choose which beach activity they want to do first
Comments
Thanks man :)
Aaryn
2020-01-26 14:44:25 +0000 UTCI can understand that. You're doing such an awesome job with this whole thing! Just waiting now while the motorized track pulls us to the top of the next hill of the roller coaster! :) Keep up the awesome job, team!
Fishhook
2020-01-25 22:32:46 +0000 UTCIf the repetition was removed, we would definitely keep the essence of these exchanges including the awkwardness and relationship building. It just wouldnt be a puzzle on how to figure it out, allowing the reader to concentrate more on the story and less on remembering what choices they havent picked yet. I have some ideas for it that feel like a happy medium. It's just going to take time to recode it
Aaryn
2020-01-25 18:14:22 +0000 UTCAaryn, I know what you mean about the repetition part, and I kind of get it, since the rest of the story is so linear. But, all of that repetition is kind of fun, too, trying to get the different scenes, and experiencing all the awkwardness as they gradually get to know each other. It works great for helping us get to know the characters better, in other words. I wouldn't necessarily eliminate the repetition, just find a way to build it in. That slow reveal, physical and emotional, is part of the, um, attraction? And actually part of the fun. Just my opinion, for what it's worth!
Fishhook
2020-01-25 15:45:43 +0000 UTCThanks a lot for the love. We havent done translations yet because this is still in alpha stage. I'm also dissatisfied by the beginning of the game so that will change some and we'll likely eliminate the repetition part. We also plan to add more background characters in to fill the school out a bit. But basically the game needs polished when we get done and awhile they wont change the story, it could definitely affect translations. We plan to do translations when it's done but we've avoided it for now because we'd have to redo them. I wouldnt be against a Portuguese version though at all.
Aaryn
2020-01-25 13:53:11 +0000 UTCMy dream is for this game to come out with the Portuguese-Brazil language. I have already indicated it to several friends and I'm a big fan, but the language gets in the way. We Brazilians would be very happy if they were able to translate the game into our language. And if they can't, if they launched a beta translation done by the google translator it would be a great gift. Kisses and all the best for the developers.
2020-01-25 07:08:05 +0000 UTCGood to hear. Thanks for checking in. Appreciate the feedback
Aaryn
2020-01-25 02:25:14 +0000 UTC
