Survivor
Added 2020-08-10 06:26:55 +0000 UTCthank you for Proofreading!
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ゴリラさんの満面の笑みが爽やかすぎる……！ これは惚れますね（錯乱）
オパイ（お仕事募集中）
2020-08-10 22:41:14 +0000 UTC>Monkey bestiality is not common. That's true. Someone need to keep drawing apes.
あぶぶ
2020-08-10 17:51:55 +0000 UTCNice! I missed your bestiality stuff. Monkey bestiality is not common. Glad you did this.
scorpionius
2020-08-10 10:56:04 +0000 UTCoh thank you ! I'll fix.
あぶぶ
2020-08-10 08:16:48 +0000 UTCthanks! I'll fix
あぶぶ
2020-08-10 08:16:31 +0000 UTCI'm up pretty late, but this is what i can find to fix. "Oh, thank my child. But I already have the clothes given by this monkey." should be "Oh, thank you my child. But I already have clothes given by this monkey." "He taught us where to find the food and water, so it is not good to say that way." should be "He taught us where to find food and water, so it's not nice to say that" "There are no girl monkey, so you never saw it?" should be "There are no girl monkeys, so you have never seen it?" "A new member will joined our family soon, so look forward to it!" should be "A new member will join our family soon, so look forward to it!"
ice ninja
2020-08-10 08:03:30 +0000 UTCThis looks great! Thank you. These are my suggestions for the text: >Oh, thank my child. But I already have the clothes given by this monkey. >Oh, thank you my child. But I already have clothes given by this monkey. >He taught us where to find the food and water, so it is not good to say that way. >He taught us where to find food and water so that isn't a good thing to say. >Ah don't touch it, There are no girl monkey, so you had never saw it? >Ah don't touch it. There aren't any female monkeys here so you never saw one? >Can you fetch us water? >Can you fetch us some water? >Leaving that aside, a new member will joined our family soon, so look forward to it. >Leaving that aside, a new member will join our family soon, so look forward to it. There may be something else but this are the ones I could think of. Looking forward to see more!
AQA
2020-08-10 07:36:41 +0000 UTC
