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PUDB preview 2

Time for another preview! We've fast forward a few pages in and since I haven't caught up to here yet with inking, they're all gonna be sketches from here on out. Anyway I'd like to hear some feedback on this page, especially the layout and readability. I'm sure you can tell what's happening but can I do better? Thanks as always!

PUDB preview 2 PUDB preview 2

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Hm...it comes across well enough to me, but I do wonder if there might be a way to improve the panel layout. I still think it reads fine, but having it go from left to right then down and left again isn't the most intuitive order.

Kinnikufan


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