Cumbunny 13 - Edited Edition
Added 2025-11-08 20:35:35 +0000 UTCGood Afternoon!
Here is the more polished edition of Cumbunny chapter 13. It will also serve as the one dollar tier release.
I plan to bring the series to an end with chapter 15. Won't be long now!
I hope you all enjoy!
Comments
A good job making it clear Gene is a loser. I’ve lost interest in him winning. Let the girls win. Do the feminization in another story.
NewName
2025-11-24 11:10:31 +0000 UTCI’ve just realised that not everyone is going to be satisfied with the ending. I remember once reading a story that handled this really well — it offered alternate endings, which was completed. You had a choice. option A or option B, the reader could choose the one they preferred. Maybe Rab could do something like that?
Tony Midwood
2025-11-15 17:45:27 +0000 UTCI think it would be awesome if Gene pulls a Trojan-horse move—brought down by the very ego he thinks will make him untouchable. He wants Lizzy’s heart, truly believes he deserves it, but deep down he realises she will never love him the way she loves David. So he create a plan: If he can reshape David—turn him into one of his cumbunnys —then David can be the one to convince Lizzy to redirect her love. All Gene needs is to track David down and give him the “oil,” the thing Gene believes will bind David to him. What Gene doesn’t realise is that using the oil on David marks him—like accidentally branding an enemy as an ally. And Gene has no idea what he’s unleashed. Because once the girls taste David’s altered semen, everything changes—. They don’t understand what’s happening; they're still plotting their own separate scheme, completely unaware of the transformation forming beneath the surface. And when everything finally collides, all of them—Gene included—are shocked as they try to figure out what’s happening .
Tony Midwood
2025-11-15 16:23:47 +0000 UTCTrinity: Chapter 9 ???
Keith
2025-11-14 18:53:31 +0000 UTCI would love to see spin offs about other bunnies being broken
master
2025-11-11 14:05:33 +0000 UTCMy favorite part about cumbunny is the cum addiction. I feel like last chapter was the ending and what we got now is interesting but Its not cumbunny core anymore.
DatGuy
2025-11-10 23:17:43 +0000 UTCI forgot to comment on the last one that I'm happy for Beth! She's not fully out of the woods but it seems Curt is treating her more like a girlfriend than a slave at least. Especially since he can argue that she "chose" to be with him.
Laura
2025-11-10 12:55:38 +0000 UTCI really appreciate this comment. The hubris is staggering. The emotional vulnerability and need for love grounding. A very dark Don Quixote type character. Lots of loose ends to tie up. Let’s see what happens!
Bunny
2025-11-09 20:52:15 +0000 UTCThere are no polls for CB. That’s only for The Bet.
Tiggy
2025-11-09 17:48:13 +0000 UTCI’m not gonna comment here again on what direction I think the story is supposed to take. Listen to the polls or take it the direction you want or both. I like the story so far. Keep doing what you’re doing.
Jackfrost
2025-11-09 17:07:52 +0000 UTCI’ll be honest, from how the story has been set up, I’ll be pretty disappointed if this ends in anything other than total collapse for Gene. It’s been really good, and his minor victories are somewhat satisfying, but he hasn’t been given any of the talents he would need to not fuck it all up. He’s routinely going out of his way to show off the felony he committed and not everyone other than David, Kim, Eliza, and Beth can be awful humans with no morals or broken, mindless drones. He also overlooks a LOT, and all of the characters in the story with any real drive are working against him. Yes it’s fantasy, but it’s set in reality, and he has displayed a staggering level of hubris. I know there was a poll, and I know you said that it wouldn’t be the sole decider, but that’s just the impression I’ve been given, and suddenly making him competent rather than just capable would be a pretty big change of direction.
Ragnarok1890
2025-11-09 15:40:10 +0000 UTCI am as well! There are so, SO many ways it could end!
Hannah Baird
2025-11-09 06:31:27 +0000 UTCHopefully he does Expand it To a Multi-part Series ?
Doug
2025-11-09 04:39:46 +0000 UTCI can’t wait for Kimmy and Lizzie to take over and for both girls to give in completely.
Jeffrey
2025-11-08 22:43:36 +0000 UTCSo only two chapters left until the big conclusion. I´m so excited!
F
2025-11-08 21:57:49 +0000 UTCStretch it out more it’s ok lol
Chris N
2025-11-08 21:38:25 +0000 UTC
