Cumbunny 13 - Rough and Raw Edition
Added 2025-10-31 01:47:49 +0000 UTCSurprise!
I pushed hard tonight to get this done, because I have a busy weekend coming up and didn't want to leave you all hanging.
Thanks to getting a little sick, this is once again a raw rough draft of the final chapter, since I didn't have the time I would have liked to smooth it out with my normal editing process. That means I used machine-assisted spell-checks, but didn't go through it carefully like normal. If that bothers you, I hope to have the polished chapter out soon.
I wrote some of this while pretty sick, so if anything feels off, let me know so I can workshop it before the final version! I took some big swings this chapter, some of which I am sure will be controversial. But I do hope you all enjoy it!
Thank you for your support!
Comments
A while ago you did a poll on how people wanted the story to end. The majority voted for gene to fully win. I hope you are still keeping that in mind!
Space
2025-11-08 06:34:09 +0000 UTCA little of both, I think. Plus she wants out one day too. After she gets the one on one attention...
Laura
2025-11-06 00:53:30 +0000 UTCReally enjoyed this one. To me it's unclear exactly what Kim's motivations are for helping Lizzie. Is she doing it to help her brother or is she doing it so Gene pays more attention to her.
Ross
2025-11-04 10:23:19 +0000 UTCTake the story in the direction you want it to go. You are an amazing writer and I love most of your stories lol. Reference David. They is an old saying. Be careful when a good man goes to war.
Tony Midwood
2025-11-01 17:58:59 +0000 UTC
