Massive improvement. This is amazing. Definitely better facial expressions overall. If there’s anything I think can add more spices to future works, it would be the girl desperately begging for the cock when the man is turning away and she will do anything shameful thing to get it. Slowly transitioning to rougher and more aggressive sex should be fine too, as long as it’s within Patreon limit. But it definitely depends on the character personality. Some naughty girls need discipline. While prideful or high-and-mighty lady need to fall from grace, etc. No blood needed to be shown but I think the glory of breaking the hymen and claiming virginity during the first thrust should be more sensational and euphoric, right?