Flipping Out, Part 1, Chapter 12
Added 2023-01-23 01:15:25 +0000 UTCEnd of the Penny Handful arc! I love these dweebs!
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Sure like your writing style, it's quirky, clever, deep, and fun. In this story, though, I admit I'm having trouble following who's-who in the characters, or for that matter how many are there exactly, 5 or 6? Even after scrolling back to the beginning, which takes place 5? years in the future, and rereading the place where they all adopt nicknames. It's because of all the name-changing and body-shifting. Which of course does challenge normal use of English, doesn't it? Maybe this is a don't-care, and I should just drift along as if I were watching a confusing but entertaining movie?
Day Dreamer
2023-01-24 20:55:47 +0000 UTC
