Bring on the Leisure! [Chapter 1] (Revised)
Added 2024-02-19 18:35:28 +0000 UTCComments
Pretty generic start. Nothing really sticking out about this book so far.
BuhDussy
2024-12-22 17:59:56 +0000 UTCWell I like where it’s going so far. I was a tad confused from the end of the prologue to the start here. It felt like I missed something, could just be me tho. This has elements from a certain novel I very much enjoyed. Interesting…
Whale
2024-02-19 20:40:49 +0000 UTCSo the CC's are a blank slate. Very Eldritch vibe so far. Promising.
Tsunami
2024-02-19 19:44:32 +0000 UTCGoo!
Conrad Manaugh
2024-02-19 19:38:49 +0000 UTC"When it clicked this interaction wouldn’t well, its main message was ‘time to panic’." Wouldn't go well?
Jake
2024-02-19 18:51:30 +0000 UTCInteresting. Going for a non-human reincarnation. Seems good so far
Jonah Frazier
2024-02-19 18:43:05 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2024-02-19 18:35:37 +0000 UTC
