Chapter 2048
Added 2022-04-15 07:06:47 +0000 UTCComments
I am getting tired of delaying all this emotional stuff.. he literally has to deal with it and he is being a baby. It’s annoying.
BuhDussy
2024-12-13 19:50:58 +0000 UTCI honestly think it's good, to use the writing style to match and strengthen the emotions the readers feels while reading, during this kind of chapters, this writing style fits pretty well, in my opinion the switch in writing style depending on what happens really adds depth and emotions in the chapters. This works on every kind of chapter, if it's a fight, a choppy, blocky, back and forth, fast paced writing style following the climax of the battle would in my opinion create a really good effect. If the character is in a dream-like state, ethereal, surreal, you can try use both long and short paragraphs, not following the same style all the time, use punctuation in a slightly different way etc. The writing style matching the state of mind or the scenes is something I always found fascinating But it's terrible when overused, if a whole novel was like that it would probably suck, but on some key moments it's really good
Luca Franco
2022-04-17 07:50:33 +0000 UTCI thought it was pretty great honestly
ElectricintheForest
2022-04-16 22:36:42 +0000 UTCThis pain is raw.
Fullfirewall
2022-04-16 02:22:12 +0000 UTCDude, this writing style isn't you.
Qrystof
2022-04-15 14:16:54 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2022-04-15 09:20:11 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2022-04-15 07:59:25 +0000 UTC" The electromagnetic ravaged ..." - missing noun (?)
Slendylovespie
2022-04-15 07:34:24 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2022-04-15 07:06:58 +0000 UTC
