Chapter 1531
Added 2020-09-23 05:15:53 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks for the eggs
Will, of the convictions forge.
2024-06-12 03:46:12 +0000 UTCI am legitimately enjoying reading Rand being a hard ass. Please keep him this way towards the people of the Nexus.
drag0nreb0rn
2020-09-24 02:47:34 +0000 UTC"As he lifted the unfortunate soul of the ground" of to off.
InsaneHyde
2020-09-23 08:00:14 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2020-09-23 07:46:36 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2020-09-23 06:48:32 +0000 UTCHelping the ground stabilize => Helping to ground and stabilize. Or pick one adjective since both are synonymous and using both here is potentially a unnecessary form of repetition.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-09-23 06:47:05 +0000 UTCAnd from the behavior of “the” Nether
Kevin Mendoza
2020-09-23 06:41:52 +0000 UTCWow another Kevin M here on this paetreon, neat.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-09-23 06:36:40 +0000 UTCDrops of preparation => Drops of perspiration/sweat . Instead
Kevin Mendoza
2020-09-23 06:33:41 +0000 UTCone part of the skill was called the shade.... and he produced a black armour... sooo perhaps his skill that let him avoid... lets him become immaterial now... and the armour is probably the result of the emotions he was trapping in his body creating like scales internally from the image that he was doing with the thing in the deep hole
pukeofhurl
2020-09-23 06:32:44 +0000 UTCWhich of us “is” the head drill sergeant.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-09-23 06:30:35 +0000 UTCI have always enjoyed your writing but lately it feels like your writing has really stepped up, especially when describing interactions with Randidly. I can feel the tension as I read and it’s fantastic
Kevin M
2020-09-23 06:20:17 +0000 UTCNow, this is sharp. Heavy. Potent. Not many to match the way the will of the author flows between each and every word.
Palton Hammerad
2020-09-23 05:54:40 +0000 UTCIt isn’t clearly stated, but it is probably either draconian now, or it has started to advance it’s technological abilities alongside it’s evolution
Luke Scheffe
2020-09-23 05:47:50 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters i didn't quite understand what Randidly ended up with. What did the Grim Chimera become?
Alexander Dupree
2020-09-23 05:36:36 +0000 UTCAlso! Keep up the great work!! Can't wait for the next!!
Patrick Short
2020-09-23 05:27:12 +0000 UTCFirst
Patrick Short
2020-09-23 05:26:53 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2020-09-23 05:16:08 +0000 UTC
