Chapter 1515
Added 2020-09-10 04:47:03 +0000 UTCComments
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Will, of the convictions forge.
2024-06-10 06:40:30 +0000 UTCThanks for the puddleling
Will, of the convictions forge.
2024-06-10 06:40:13 +0000 UTCVery good question. Puddles can you explain things like this more in depth. I think this is what you call plot-holes.
Will, of the convictions forge.
2024-06-10 06:39:51 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2020-09-10 10:29:09 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2020-09-10 07:55:39 +0000 UTCThe thing I've been wondering about for a couple of chapters is how RG is handling the Aether allotment. I mean, is he just given a certain amount of Aether to do with however he wants? Or is his camp's area (or maybe the entire Fifth Cohort Rally Station) regulated to contain a set amount of Aether and the higher concentration means the recruits are expected to progress at a faster rate? So far RG has basically just ignored all Aether costs and as Lady Iellaya pointed out he's got to pay a lot more attention to that as it is a driving impetus and determining factor for basically all other leaders in the Nexus. Did RG setup everything in his camp using the Aether allotment or did he use his personal Aether and would Commandant Wick notice it? I guess his Yggdrasil domain would help to hide his non-system Aether but if there's too much Aether in the area compared to the allotment then that'd be a big red flag. Another aspect would be if RG was given a lump of Aether, can he fake using it through his own Aether and then smuggle it for something else? Like tiding over the Nemesis worlds? And if so would it be 5th cohort Aether or just generic System Aether as the cohorts are supposed to be poisonous to each other. When someone "sends" Aether to their homeworld does it have to be exchanged to the correct cohort type?
Jonathan
2020-09-10 07:51:19 +0000 UTC"Those thin trails of emotion became the guild that drew the Nether down the paths of least resistance". 'Guild' (organization) seems incorrect did you mean 'guide' or more metaphoric 'gild' (gold overlay)
Jonathan
2020-09-10 07:06:56 +0000 UTC"So now it was time to get a little aggressive with Randidly’s training methods." I believe you need a comma after the, "so"
Palton Hammerad
2020-09-10 05:02:33 +0000 UTC"efficacy, keeping outside actors form being able" its from, not form.(5th paragraph)
Palton Hammerad
2020-09-10 04:59:54 +0000 UTCAlso...thank you for the puddleling. :3
Palton Hammerad
2020-09-10 04:52:59 +0000 UTC"as he" instead of "as raised" (first sentence.)
Palton Hammerad
2020-09-10 04:50:25 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2020-09-10 04:47:20 +0000 UTC
