Chapter 1482
Added 2020-08-03 22:08:28 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2020-08-21 08:33:43 +0000 UTCSo the lesson is dont trust anyone even supposed friends and allies?
James Heney
2020-08-07 20:18:07 +0000 UTCTo try and prove he’s not all powerful as he seems I suppose
Subliminary
2020-08-05 12:32:47 +0000 UTCGuessing that the dossier making it so clear how he has a bad habit of never staying prepared for an ambush, they decided to teach him a lesson to remedy that and help him survive the Nexus...
Adam Roundfield
2020-08-05 08:35:42 +0000 UTCDont understand what they gain from this?
Choboman
2020-08-04 21:42:46 +0000 UTCthe ambusher's hesitated -> the ambushers hesitated
Grammarmelade
2020-08-04 17:25:17 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one and I really hope Randidly teaches them a lesson on their stupidity and how bad they have treated him as a friend in particular
Killer Pickle
2020-08-04 12:20:56 +0000 UTCAwesome fight 🤩🤩🤩
Idan tal
2020-08-04 07:14:32 +0000 UTC'would from Hank’s bullet' would -> wound
Corwin Amber
2020-08-04 02:03:24 +0000 UTC'Alana was their' their -> there
Corwin Amber
2020-08-04 01:56:50 +0000 UTCI’m enjoying this battle.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-08-04 00:36:02 +0000 UTCLmao randidly really bout to fuck them up 😂 they think they know everything he been through Helen wasn’t on the front lines so she has no idea about any of that or really about anything leading up to the fight woth the auto arch dude she only really knows about the competition and she might know he was strong enough to survive against the fire speared dude but other than that she only knows that randidly is strong. Even if he just uses grim chimera I can’t see him losing this fight at all, especially since nether is a huge part of grim chimeras power too
Demitrius Fogle
2020-08-04 00:33:18 +0000 UTCMaybe that a little unrealistic, maybe that “is” a little unrealistic instead.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-08-04 00:30:47 +0000 UTCWhich meant the would from hanks bullet. Wound instead of would.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-08-04 00:28:01 +0000 UTCDrops of blood fell from the Ghosthound. Ghosthound’s instead.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-08-04 00:22:10 +0000 UTCIn the dirt ground. Correction pick a noun using both is almost gibberish.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-08-04 00:20:10 +0000 UTCFlames flared to “an” even greater. Missing “an”
Kevin Mendoza
2020-08-04 00:15:23 +0000 UTCAlanas holy image stuck, struck instead.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-08-04 00:13:54 +0000 UTCThen Alana was thier, there instead.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-08-04 00:11:28 +0000 UTCAbove his glendal, delete the word his
Kevin Mendoza
2020-08-04 00:10:45 +0000 UTC"well, maybe that a little unrealistic right now." --> "maybe that is" or "that may be"
Cadastral
2020-08-03 23:42:52 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters! Great fight so far
David C
2020-08-03 22:22:55 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2020-08-03 22:08:48 +0000 UTC