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Chapter 1482

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Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little

So the lesson is dont trust anyone even supposed friends and allies?

James Heney

To try and prove he’s not all powerful as he seems I suppose

Subliminary

Guessing that the dossier making it so clear how he has a bad habit of never staying prepared for an ambush, they decided to teach him a lesson to remedy that and help him survive the Nexus...

Adam Roundfield

Dont understand what they gain from this?

Choboman

the ambusher's hesitated -> the ambushers hesitated

Grammarmelade

Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one and I really hope Randidly teaches them a lesson on their stupidity and how bad they have treated him as a friend in particular

Killer Pickle

Awesome fight 🤩🤩🤩

Idan tal

'would from Hank’s bullet' would -> wound

Corwin Amber

'Alana was their' their -> there

Corwin Amber

I’m enjoying this battle.

Kevin Mendoza

Lmao randidly really bout to fuck them up 😂 they think they know everything he been through Helen wasn’t on the front lines so she has no idea about any of that or really about anything leading up to the fight woth the auto arch dude she only really knows about the competition and she might know he was strong enough to survive against the fire speared dude but other than that she only knows that randidly is strong. Even if he just uses grim chimera I can’t see him losing this fight at all, especially since nether is a huge part of grim chimeras power too

Demitrius Fogle

Maybe that a little unrealistic, maybe that “is” a little unrealistic instead.

Kevin Mendoza

Which meant the would from hanks bullet. Wound instead of would.

Kevin Mendoza

Drops of blood fell from the Ghosthound. Ghosthound’s instead.

Kevin Mendoza

In the dirt ground. Correction pick a noun using both is almost gibberish.

Kevin Mendoza

Flames flared to “an” even greater. Missing “an”

Kevin Mendoza

Alanas holy image stuck, struck instead.

Kevin Mendoza

Then Alana was thier, there instead.

Kevin Mendoza

Above his glendal, delete the word his

Kevin Mendoza

"well, maybe that a little unrealistic right now." --> "maybe that is" or "that may be"

Cadastral

Thanks for the chapters! Great fight so far

David C

Corrections

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