Quick Update
Added 2018-07-17 03:49:12 +0000 UTCHey all,
In the interest of clarifying some in the last four chapters, I added a bit of text to the scenes. Not enough to change the outcomes, but it shifted the character of what happened.
For example, I made it more obvious that in my mind, Randidly's real struggle in the fight was a mental decision. I also added a bit more detail to the image. Etc.
I'll be back with some wrap up and explanation chapters tomorrow!
Comments
Wow, I didn't read until after the update, so I was a bit surprised at some of the comments. This makes more sense now.
ElectricintheForest
2018-07-17 06:50:29 +0000 UTC
