The OT rewrites
Added 2022-08-06 12:13:25 +0000 UTCJust an update.
I think the rewrites are gong well so far. outside of the first chapter, the changes are quite minimal, mostly corrections in the use of tenses to be more consistant.
I just uploaded the first 8/38 a short while ago, so the improvement in consistancy should be self evident. I hope XD
Not every chapter is going to have new 'bonus' segments like I originally planned. This is because I kind of forgot how some of the chapters have perspective shifts already written into the place I would normally be writing that bonus segment, or have significant amounts of word count already dedicated to different perspectives.
I was thinking I might make a list of chapters with the new bonus segments once I am finished so people can checkout just those segments if they want to.
After seven different drafts, I decided to just alter the first chapter somewhat instead. I kept having issues trying to keep it interesting and not infodumping all over the place. I'll attach a PDF for anyone whos interested in the mostl completed version of the draft I hated the least.
Feeling confident that I should be able to complete the rewrites by the end of the month.
