Nina - Revenge
Added 2022-07-16 14:56:25 +0000 UTCAccording to the last Poll, most of you are interested in longer stories. I will do my best to deliver.
The first page (of 3) continues Nina and Amber's story.
I will also do my best to improve in the field of suspense.
Let s see how that works out :D Perhaps not everyone will know how it ends immediately
Edit: forgot Ambers socks, fixed that...
Comments
I can't wait to see Nina do some *damage*
herpderpOOO
2022-07-17 07:26:04 +0000 UTCAgreed! If one really wanted to nitpick, a few more close-ups of Nina's big foot in a cast would have been just right! That’s a 'vision' of which one simply cannot get enough...
Fabio - Scarponata
2022-07-16 18:47:06 +0000 UTCWish we got to see more of Nina’s casted foot in that second frame! Such a tease! 🤤
Beastcaster
2022-07-16 17:22:15 +0000 UTCSimply wonderful! Well worth the wait, no doubt about it. So far, it really seems to me that you have managed to create the right suspense.... Nina at first lashes out - as usual, after all - at Amber whom she considers the cause of all her ills, even though the 'tentative' tackle with which she broke her leg was only due to her clumsiness, without being in any way intentional (unlike the one with which Nina had sent the talented Kei to hospital just some time before...). Nina appears ready to strangle Amber for what at first glance seems to her to be a decidedly malevolent comment to a post of hers about her plastered leg and something Amber should say to her in person that would 'fix her leg'... but such nasty comment doesn't come from Amber... 'Pinkmouse' is, in fact, tied up like a salami and the author of the messages invites the crippled Nina to take her revenge on her for her broken leg. But not only that: she also invites Nina to recompense her 'services' by breaking Amber's other leg as well. Whether "GL" simply stands for good luck or is in some way related to the author of the messages, who knows why she's so displeased with Amber to the point of leaving her at Nina's mercy... That said, it won't be an easy task for the statuesque Nina, who can barely stand on crutches, to be able to successfully 'work on' Amber without being seen by her...
Fabio - Scarponata
2022-07-16 16:32:41 +0000 UTCFinally! So excited for the other pages! 😍
Beastcaster
2022-07-16 15:07:32 +0000 UTC
