Book 2 (61-124)
Added 2024-05-10 16:18:43 +0000 UTCBook 2 has ended in chapter 124. I had a few comments so far about it, namely the dragging union arc or the jumpy transitions and broken images. If you have any comments or feedback about the overall feel of the book compared to the old book 2 (if you read it) or Book 1 (1-61). Was it too slow? too fast? too many new characters? boring? confusing?
Do let me know how you feel it about it, it helps me to refine future chapters as well as focus correctly on the right things moving forward.
As a side note, chapters will not be grammarly edited nor image populated until 17th May, which is when I return from my overseas trip. I still write 5k-6k words a day during the tour, but I don't have a lot of time to edit and modify URL links.
Comments
Is there an epub for this?
Prince Hakeem
2024-11-05 23:23:11 +0000 UTCthanks man, glad the remake was worth it.
M.GDriver
2024-05-20 11:04:05 +0000 UTCLove the progression, the old one were dragging and jummble around too much, love the remake, the pacing is nice, cant wait until kyle reach the galaxy
m e e s a
2024-05-17 19:34:45 +0000 UTC
