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My Cage "Classic" 10/05/2008

This is the strip that started me on the road to not using animal pun names in the final panel. I'm running both just in case. Also, my uncle and cousin are both name George Carlin. Not an interewsting fact, but a fact none the less! :D 

Originally run Oct 5th 2008.

-Ed 

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My Cage "Classic" 10/05/2008 My Cage "Classic" 10/05/2008

Comments

It's definitely better without the pun in the final panel. I always enjoy the puns, but part of the fun is stopping to mull them over. That completely distracts from the punchline and keeps it from landing sharply.

FilloryCitrus

I guess you worried that the puns would either distract from the main punchlines or make them harder to get.

Stephen Gilberg


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