Beastforged - B3 Prologue
Added 2025-11-24 13:00:14 +0000 UTCComments
so now is he going to have togo on the run?
Crazyone47
2025-11-24 16:02:42 +0000 UTCNo idea how I didn't notice that. I probably rewrote that section while editing and forgot to delete the first draft. Thanks for pointing out.
HideousGrain
2025-11-24 15:45:05 +0000 UTCHey I think you wrote pretty much the same thing twice "The insult was ignored. Xadrak continued, “We didn’t know either. Kazriel picked him up when the Katrak was announced. A nobody, but he was close to the Caldera – and he survived the phoenix fire.” His insult was pointedly ignored, his question answered by Ruler Xadrak, “We didn’t know about that either. Kazriel picked him up when the Katrak was announced. He’s a nobody, but he was close to the Caldera and survived the phoenix fire.”
GloinJr
2025-11-24 14:14:52 +0000 UTC
