Most Unusual Plan, page 16, sketch
Added 2023-08-10 08:37:08 +0000 UTCSome heavy dialogue scene here, planned to have more panels but it looked to squished together she said. This was compromise, condensing things.
Thing I think I'll have her change is the "5" minutes thing to just a break, make Darius not a one pump chump xD.
Then for the comment with Arcturus feeling veledar, I think pauses are needed to show the concern or trouble he's having.
Maybe for Darius, having him say, don't worry sugar first? Then have him add, she won't kill him, we'll be gettin your husband back.
-Heracles: We won't rest until that is so. Do you need a moment before we go?
Arcturus: *deep breath* let's go.
