City of Light Chapter 7
Added 2023-08-04 18:23:31 +0000 UTCHere is the part that was keeping me from working on book three for ages. It has started, the rewriting, condensing and removal of extra elements that I needed to have done.
-you'll notice that I have changed things from the original that I am providing. I cleaned up the original as it had a random, extra NSFW element that wasn't needed.
-This part is moved before the Lyndis part I had in the original, making the time more linear.
-Removed all the teasing with Krotos, it really didn't add anything not already there. Or things I plan to have later.
-Lyndis is added to the breakfast instead of running off. She explains the disguise kit.
-Flirting with Veledar and Arc is still present
-Arc and Vel address they are feeling one another's emotions, the bond, but unsure what it is.
-Veledar instead becomes a gryphon instead of a human again
-Gus and Krotos go to work
-We remove the extra bits were arc is doing erands to visit his son's grave like original. The grave is still going to be there, but I'm fixing what leads them there to better fit with story instead of feeling like random side quest.
-If you want to compare the original to the new one, be warned, I couldn't delete the NSFW part of it (it's two quick paragraphs of Veledar tending to himself) Word was being stupid.
