The Dragon's Prize
Added 2022-11-06 23:08:22 +0000 UTCFinished piece by Blown-ego
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Attatched is the short story/ lewd scene of Zovradet capturing and starting to tame his new prize. Richard Crystalwind
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Freshfaced he’d (word says freshfaced can be changed) To his surprise the dragon was true to his words, waking to find that his wounds had been bound. (OK so at most he has a concussion but nothing else, as in nothing to describe other wounds. If you want him to have more wounds have him trip and fall down a hill or small cliff hitting things along the way.)(Also both now and in future scenes there's no mention of using potions for either healing or preparing him for what's to come, unless he just uses spells to do it but that's not mentioned) Come morning the man had awoken, his bindings gone (so there was no sentence describing him naked or being stripped. Recommend adding him being stripped because that's a fun dom thing to do to a sub)(it also gives a good transition period instead of sleep to fucking in an instance) A man f twenty five (of) onto Richard’s lips as (your lips) as I make him mine (make you mine) I want to hold you… (missing " at end) He blushed, wanting it there, knowing there was no denying it (I know this is too soften the reality of what's actually happening but he is a virgin and this is his "first" time so I expect a more mixture of lust and worry for what's coming.) He flopped back into the dragon’s belly, cooing as his powerful cock continued to contract within him, pulsing the human with thick, druggy cum into his yawning ring, drowning Richard’s mind in bliss and their conjoined groins with alabaster. (This sentence swaps perspectives between Richard and Zov. He flopped back into the dragons belly, sounds like Richard's perspective, but it then says, powerful cock continued to contract within him, sounds like you're talking about Zov.) This is a very lustful beginning and I look forward to seeing any future installments from this.
Cryodrake
2022-11-08 00:25:23 +0000 UTCI've been told they sweet looking, if you didn't know context. XD
Justin lee
2022-11-07 23:56:22 +0000 UTC"Taming" XD
Justin lee
2022-11-07 23:56:04 +0000 UTCFantastic story, loved his seduction.
ghostman
2022-11-07 22:02:22 +0000 UTCThese are just lovely <3
Cryodrake
2022-11-07 01:19:31 +0000 UTC
