Emperor's Shadow: Chapter 22
Added 2022-02-20 17:58:32 +0000 UTCIn which we get the first little excerpt fro Vishta's little journey.
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So after rereading the chapter in my opinion it felt too..... easy. Hey Cordenth is going over there, well i better go there as well. And the queen of flames still thinks her sister is playing a game against her so im not surprised she doesn't feel discouraged that her sister will get to the Uniter first. One change i thought of was this, Vishta should mention how Cordenth could see the future as well, something that would make sense in the eye of the queen as Cordenth is Emerald lady son and she could lie to her by saying the futures change and Cordenth saw two futures, one where if he gets the uniter he is victorious but also one where if he doesnt he loses everything and the queen of flames rules. Then the queen could say how that's a nice fancy story she came up with but then Vistia could lie again saying how Cordenth told her that the uniters magic makes seeing the future difficult and the queen could believe that seeing how she knows what the uniter is and Vishta could say then that if the future really is decided upon by who controls the uniter then she would want to be with someone who has the strength and power to take it like the queen instead of Cordenth. This would please the queen knowing for once (even though its a lie) that the future might not be decided, that she could finally get an upper hand on her green scaled sister for once and be the true victor in this game. I feel like adding something like that could add more weight to her believing Vishta and leaving.
Cryodrake
2022-03-03 20:33:24 +0000 UTC“Would stick around if the people you reached out to tried to kill you? She’s not stupid Inzetep.” missing you.
Cryodrake
2022-02-28 18:37:22 +0000 UTC
