Emperor's Shadow :Chapter 21
Added 2022-02-02 23:04:40 +0000 UTCLyndis recovers from a harrowing ordeal. What she finds is...most interesting...Another dragon, one far sillier than the last.
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“What are you going about scaring woman for?” She pushed herself up, face red. “And I ruddy don’t need the bed, not with the uniter off and gone.” Several typos involving Ruddy. When Lyndis receives her gift it feels like Ossais message was just a sticky note, i feel like the message should be longer and more emotional. Go into more detail how this was suppose to be a gift for her wedding but its use is needed now more than ever. Maybe throw in another apology for the disaster she has brought upon the world and how its up her and Arcturus to succeed in bring about a new dawn for the world. And then have it get darker and explain what will wait the world should she fail, and as it gets closer to the end of the letter Lyndis starts seeing the writing get less refined and maybe a smudge from the ink as if Ossai is leading up to something she doesnt want to say. And then near the end of the letter says, and should all attempts fail to save my Cordenth.... then see to it you or the Lund use this final tool to bring this madness to an end and set Cordenth free. And then Lyndis unwraps some clothe to find the dragon slaying arrow. After she finishes getting dress Rev should spy the arrow and maybe have a frightful response to such a weapon being so close to him.
Cryodrake
2022-02-12 23:36:25 +0000 UTC
