Emperor's Shadow Chapter 10
Added 2021-10-29 20:20:48 +0000 UTCIn which an escape is had, hopefully a most thrilling one.
I solved an issue with a character not running into the characters logically, I solved it by rocks.
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WOW that transformation of the queen, i love the details behind it. My only recommendation is to add more curiosity to the queen when she smells a male instead of a female, because unless she knows of Cordenth this just magically allows her to figure it out which doesnt flow well so making so shes more questioning about Cordenth and then maybe thinking it through logically then does she deduce that she has a nephew.
Cryodrake
2021-10-31 04:20:38 +0000 UTC
