Take Heed and Beware, part 2 #6
Added 2022-10-28 17:06:59 +0000 UTCThis page features a cameo from Elizabeth and her dress shop, by RosieBRS.
I've always liked the character and the setting of the dress shop, so when I needed a dress shop in here, I immediately thought of it, and Rosie was kind enough to allow it. ^_^
Check out her work at Patreon or DeviantArt!
If you'd like to read what came before, check this! (But start at the bottom if you want to read from the start!!)
Comments
Thank you so very much!! ^_^ Sorry I didn't reply sooner, been swamped. :-) But glad to hear it's working, as well as you've enjoyed the comic!! :-D Means a lot!! ^_^
2022-10-31 09:02:23 +0000 UTCFor me, it actually worked pretty well. It is clear that it is kind of "flashforward" if that is a thing. I'm not a native speaker. What would be the opposite of flashback? :D Anyway, thank you for the great work. It was this comic on DA that convinced me today to register on Patreon and subscribe. I love how much the witch is enjoying the punishment. There is something magical about her mischievous facial expression. :-)
2022-10-28 22:24:33 +0000 UTCWhat WILL come. ^_^ But the final page will show that anyways. 🙂
2022-10-28 21:32:51 +0000 UTCIt's.... complicated. 😀 And a bit of an experiment for me as well. Really, it's all one big flashback. This chapter opens with the sissy ringing the witch's doorbell, after all. So Julie talking to the witch happens MONTHS before. The 'visions' kinda flash forward to how the witch's tips play out. They jump all over the timeline, really. 😁 The fact that this isn't clear means my experiment failed, in a way. But I'm pretty sure the final page would have explained it to everyone's satisfaction anyway. 🙂
2022-10-28 21:32:24 +0000 UTCA very fun and interesting way to show what may come
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2022-10-28 18:17:05 +0000 UTC
