CH53
Added 2025-05-29 22:46:12 +0000 UTCHello All,
Please see the Corlys-Aegon scene. The rest of the scenes will follow tomorrow night.
Update: Alicent scene added.
Aegon scene to be tomorrow night (yes definitely tomorrow night as it is a smaller scene and simpler - oddly enough - than this one)
Update: Slightly delay, will be tomorrow night :( Will still be writing till late but I've got work tomorrow so cant stay up
Update: Last scene added!
Update: changed the red banners to black banners!
Comments
No it would be boring anyway. The harvesting probably wouldn't have been
Mosef
2025-06-16 21:51:22 +0000 UTC@sukhraj please share the discord link
Lazybeep
2025-06-09 17:22:54 +0000 UTCWill you show cannibal clash next chapter?
TyrantGod
2025-06-07 11:41:59 +0000 UTCNot entirely out of pettiness but definitely a strong point.
Mosef
2025-06-03 19:19:40 +0000 UTCNo. Sheepstealer has a soul and it's gone now into the ether
Mosef
2025-06-03 19:19:15 +0000 UTCWhat do you think of her fate ITTL?
Mosef
2025-06-03 19:18:37 +0000 UTCWait no more (t minus -1 day )
Mosef
2025-06-03 19:17:59 +0000 UTCI already posted what I thought about Alicent's p.o.v. on discord so I won't repeat here but Aegon's p.o.v. was a treat. I am curious to learn more about this new magical development that Aegon has encountered on Dragonstone as well as what it was exactly that Aegon learned when he felt the Spiritual Energy flow into him without help of the Staff. So Aegon has decided to take all the dragon eggs found in the volcano of Dragonmont so as to ensure that the Targaryens of Westeros have less dragons as well as a way to protect the dragons and keep them safe from the COTF, The Raven and The Old Gods. Just to clarify, all of Baelon's surving children have dragon right, though as I undertsand it, they are still very young dragons, closer to hatchling, with Zaraxes being the oldest, correct? I have to say that I am really shocked that Aegon would kill Sheepstealer for a reason as pettiness because Baelon really got on his nerves. Sheepstealer did not deserve to be killed because of Baelon considering he mostly kept to himself and fed on sheep and probably never harmed any humans. Killing him to spite Baelon and not allow the Westerosi Targaryens to bond with a mature dragon is a low that I personally would not forgive Aegon for no matter how much I like him. Sheepstealer did not deserve to die the way he did. At least we know for certain that Sheepstealer's soul has departed for a better place. It looks like Aegon and his staff have gotten another huge power up. I also feel a bit cheated that we did not see Aegon kill Cannibal, that would have been more interesting, given that both Misaragorn and Aegon have debt to settle with Cannibal for trying to kill them when they were younger, but I am guessing you chose to show us Sheepstealer being killed by Aegon because we would all know that it was no fair for Sheepstealer to be killed for the sins of others that he had nothing to do with. I'm guessing you will at least tell us what happened when Aegon kills Cannibal, by way of recollection, given that the next chapter will be a timeskip. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Sukhraj Singh
2025-06-03 02:17:37 +0000 UTCI get having a mature flying dragon under their control might have emboldened Baelon to try something rash or go back on their agreements but it is sad that sheapstealer must be killed.
Lazybeep
2025-06-03 02:05:08 +0000 UTCA soul left? Was someone reincarnated? I'm a bit confused
Omgitsbakon
2025-06-02 23:28:40 +0000 UTCI thought he was going to nab sheepstealer for someone. I was not expecting him to go for the kill π . I do appreciate that he did it for petty reasons though.
Lictor Magnus
2025-06-02 23:17:43 +0000 UTCYes. Ish. Yes, timeskip after this chap.
Mosef
2025-06-02 23:11:27 +0000 UTCSo is the staff is like a power/essence absorption that stores energy together to create a stronger force that channels the magic? What would Aegonβs lifespan be and how long would he live? Will there be a time skip after this chapter?
Don Dieta
2025-06-02 23:07:58 +0000 UTCPercentage? Like 5%. I draft out scenes ahead but it's just like those memory paper card things to help stimulate memory. I do most of the writing literally after I finish a chapter.
Mosef
2025-06-01 19:51:03 +0000 UTCHow many percent youβve done on CH.54? Considering how long this took to write and still finishing this chapter? Also, How many chapters left for you until this one is finished?
Don Dieta
2025-06-01 01:48:27 +0000 UTCAh Alicent, you girlbossed too hard and became a girlfailure. Probably the best conclusion to Alicent's time in Westeros. No torture, murder, super breakdown or wasting away. She seems willing to change for the better for the sake of her remaining family, that's something.
Yesman
2025-06-01 01:17:24 +0000 UTCOof will correct tomorrow
Mosef
2025-06-01 01:17:00 +0000 UTCβRed banners the colour of blood with the black three headed dragon hung proud.β No one ever expects a Blackfyre rebellion ππ―π―
Moronic_Dishpit
2025-06-01 01:10:15 +0000 UTCJust waiting
Luci alarri
2025-05-31 00:02:07 +0000 UTC
