CH94
Added 2023-08-05 23:19:44 +0000 UTCHello everyone, please see the next chapter!
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2) not sure yet. I was thinking maybe a few weeks or a few months before the first chap. 5) I hope that all my stories are as great as odyssey! Ultimately though, it is up to you to determine if you like it or not. I don't know if I'll have the retention of readers as i do now because ultimately my stories, I hope will be different from one another. Odyssey was a power story whilst Ammortamento will be more intrigue and manipulation. Ultimately, I can only say that I hope to continue to make good stories that are enjoyable to read. Thst is enough, I think. I will post a poll soon after the last chap of Odyssey to let you guys determine which story i should finish next. Have a read through Hohenheim, Ammortamento, the eternal pharoah, tartered dragon and see which ones you like. 8) def not rasputin. Rasputin only had eyes for the squib romanovs. 9) he had intermittent visions. The first vision about the romanovs was about him eventually causing their extermination. The second was finding Yasha
Mosef
2023-08-12 01:56:09 +0000 UTC2) Will you post the timeline before or after your break? 4) My bad, that was actually a new chapter. 5) On chapter 41. Do you think any of those stories will as great as Odissey of a mage? Now I'm happy get so much high quality entertainment in the foreseable future. Any chance you reveal what those stories will be about, that coul make miracles in retention of readers.8)I was about to think that Rasputin was Raven's father in the middle of the chapter. 9)Also, was Grindelwald’s dream mentioned in this chapter to make scions of royal /noble families into tools? So that was basically Grindelwald’s version of endoctrinating scions of powerful bloodlines like Raven and Cullaica had done?
pedr5ke
2023-08-07 17:29:07 +0000 UTCThis made me cry, very well done. I hope they all got to be together in the end. Maybe it's cliche, but every death is a tragedy of vain love, broken dreams and lost potential, and its easy to forget when reading about war or other disasters. Chapters like this takes the story to another level, thanks! It's great that you managed a little humor at the end though to balance the grimmness, I love the idea that Atticus leaves small traces all over, to mess with future historians and flex on the UNSC. Imagine historians playing a version of "wheres waldo" with Atticus in the background of important historical photos of the 20th century :p
Stressed Alpaca
2023-08-07 17:02:03 +0000 UTC1) Mantle of responsibility is a belief. One that can be summarised as : 'We are the guardians of life'. Different people have different interpretations to it. The Precursors believed something very differently to the Forerunners and the ancient humans believed it to be different than the Forerunners. Magicals will see it differently too. 2) Yes. I will post a timeline of what will happen in the centuries in between. 3) Amelie Cantona was created by some frankenstein sh** no chance that can be replicated for like thousands of vampires. Werewolves on the other hand are much easier to change because they would want to change. Vampires are much more difficult to group together 4) I checked - the post on the 1st of July is quite fine? the chapters are correct. 5) Remind me when I made the comment? I have like six different HP stories that I've got in mind 6) The Raven and Cullaica didn't mind control everyone...just a lot. Maybe half or so? Perhaps more. In any case, It was largely done to show that scars of wars take a long time to heal. More so when the victims lash out because of unhealed wounds. 7) The pendants had been to hide the connection the vampires had to their souls until it was time to show the Vampires
Mosef
2023-08-07 16:23:18 +0000 UTC1)Is the Mantle of Responsibility just magic or it is magic plus something else? Maybe magic with a greater connection to the universe's layer of counciousness. 2)Will you post the timeline of what happened between the Exedus and Halo before or after your break? 3)I'm quite surprised at how you handled the vampires. By having Grindelwald find a way to make vampirism manageable and Amelie Cantona you were showing signs that you were going to deal with them the same way you dealt with the werewolves ,all Atticus had to do was copy and paste. 4)I don’t know if it was intentional but in the Hohenheim Ch1 &Ch2 post the Ch 2 was of the Ammortamento story not Hohenheim as the post sugested. 5) What will that story that you had thought it was going to be funny to do in the HP world be about? 6)Did Raven and Cullaica had to mind control wizards to their cause to be that much of a threat or you had it done just for them to be worse than Grindelwald ? 7)What was the purpuse of the pendants the hibrid vampires had in the meeting between Grindelwald and Drakul?
pedr5ke
2023-08-07 14:32:02 +0000 UTCA suitably lonely grave
Mosef
2023-08-06 13:22:19 +0000 UTCI considered it. But I think this ending fits better with both the raven and atticus. The trial will be the next chapter and a bit of a time skip. I'll be scrambling to watch a lot of docs about thr nuremburg trials
Mosef
2023-08-06 08:34:05 +0000 UTCSo no second chance, huh... a tragedy this whole thing and from the 1st war too. Here's hoping for a world wide trail similar to rl for a better quality of understanding and closure. Also on mars lol
Monzter E
2023-08-06 03:43:06 +0000 UTCLol. A grave on Mars.
PolyPloy
2023-08-06 01:00:41 +0000 UTC
