Hohenheim's Dream for a Requiem Chapter One
Added 2022-02-13 13:31:13 +0000 UTCHello Everyone, please see the first chapter (might be edited later on) of my next story.
This will be updated once a month, at most twice a month as I will continue to prioritise OoaM.
I've looked at the Poll and it will be a standalone HP fanfic with scope for the sequel to be a Stargate Crossover.
I haven't yet written the summary but it will be a story where the MC will be a Alchemist and a Magi Archeologist and eventually the mentor to Harry Potter.
The MC has memories of someone born in the latter half of the 21st century so he will not know much of magic, especially with the disaster that his Earth experienced. It will play a part somehow, somewhere, but almost all of the main HP story is unknown to him.
Enjoy!
Comments
There won't be much science in this story, it was only to provide a backstory to the man who has memories of a past life. A life that'll give him perspective as he ages.
Mosef
2022-02-14 15:24:59 +0000 UTCMy opinion. (and it's only mine) I didn't understand 1/4 of the chapter and that's a problem, I feel that you put your heart into the explanation like when you explained the runes with Atticus, and sometimes you go way too far and you lose me. For the rest I like it, I'm a little afraid that the Science/Harry Potter aspect will become too similar to the other story. To see the continuation the two stories.
Phobos
2022-02-14 14:55:56 +0000 UTCTuesday!
Mosef
2022-02-13 13:34:05 +0000 UTCDo you have an estimate when chapter 52 for Odyssey of A Mage will be posted?
hz
2022-02-13 13:33:45 +0000 UTC
