the Prison Carceri
Added 2024-12-30 11:45:00 +0000 UTCA scholar travels to the Prison Carceri to answer ancient questions, but he is not ready for the revelations he receives...
Not all my short stories are about Carceri, I promise! Carceri and Vorropohaiah were two of the first major aspects of the world that I created, and though the world went on to grow around them, leaving them less important to the overall scheme of things, they remain two 'unique' aspects of the world that I still love, so I wrote quite a bit about them in the olden days.
PLEASE let me know what you think, even it its bad! I know a lot of you have been asking for fiction in Elyden for some time, so I'm happy to start sharing more off my writing.
The text can be cumbersome in places. lots of history (I cant not!) and I've seen the term purple prose being banded about too.
I know my writing style might not be for everyone, though I hope not to turn too many people off. When reading this, I have noticed that I have mellowed in my style over the past 20-years - my writing is now easier to follow and hopefully less heavy on the descriptions. So please follow me on this journey through the years!
