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Behind the Neighbor's Door - Part 10

So I accidentally deleted Part 10. No wait,

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I kept waiting for Grace to give in. I can't wait for her to succumb . Maybe not tell Nolan untill after.

John Lewis

You have a great mind there, buddy

Antarctica77

I think Nate needs to be very careful not to be the one cockolding Nolan, by that I mean not talking shit about him. He needs to lead her into doing it, especially when they are in the middle of having sex by saying things like “You love how I feel inside you” “Can Nolan touch you, fill you like I do” Getting her to think of him as lesser as a lover, not able to give her what she needs to feel fulfilled and desired as a woman. Keep planting seeds of desire for him and what only he is capable of, but it has to come from her not him. I would love to see her use the Boss to make Nate and Nolan think that maybe she is doing something more than just his landscaping, especially to keep Nate in a constant state of flux. So many possibilities and directions to take this story forward. It’s great so far, but it could be spectacular if done correctly.

FU

Eh yea. I’m not ok with the drugging part but I do look forward to Nate dressing her up in public and maybe turning that into more….

Mira NM

I love reading Antarctic77’s stories — they’re entertaining, but honestly, they’ve become pretty predictable. For someone with such strong writing talent, it’s a shame he doesn’t throw in more twists. And now he’s drugging Nolan? Why? It’s starting to feel like Neighbours Chronicles all over again. Here’s how I imagine the next one will go: Nolan keeps getting pushed around at work and at home, never finding the courage to stand up for himself. Nate and Josh grow bolder, and Gracie becomes increasingly caught up in their world, willing to cross line after line just to stay in their orbit. Before long, she discovers she’s pregnant and eventually leaves Nolan for Nate. Meanwhile, Nolan — poor guy — still hasn’t learned how to fight back or reclaim any part of his life. And Gracie? Whatever self-respect she once had is long gone. So… who thinks my predictions are going to be right?

Tony Midwood

Fantastic! Can't wait to see what develops with her and Josh.

Chescojoe

reads very well with many possible scenarios, keeps the reader guessing also

Bunny

I agree that would have been totally HOT...but wasn't in the vein of this chapter's story arc.

Jay Muney

Really enjoyed this chapter...I'm not a fan of Nolan being drugged...the love of his life getting fucked by a 13 inch cock is stressful enough...even if he asked for it. I also enjoyed Grace's ability to toe the line while keeping in control as hard as it was for her...pun intended! Nate seemed to be cut down a peg or two in this chapter which I think was totally necessary for the viability of a long running story line. Keep up the good work!

Jay Muney

Another slow burn but oh so hot. Can't wait to see Nate's rage when he finds out she fucked Nolan's boss by the pool.

Speechless

I really enjoyed this chapter. And for now, I consider Behind the Neighbour's Door to be Antartica77's best work. Unlike others, I'm not really interested in the possibility that the main theme of this story will be Nolan's humiliation. It's obvious that he will be the big loser in this love triangle. But it would serve no purpose to make him a weak and ridiculous character.

Pascal

I'm not against Nolan slowly getting impotent. Naturally due to stress and anxiety, or otherwise. Could add a nice dimension with Grace's mounting frustration towards Nolan and the increasingly difficult task of trying to mask the feeling while also comparing to Nate

James

It's barely different than My Neighbor. Same pace and nonsense. I shouldn't have checked to see if this was different. It rarely is

TD_Stowe

I enjoyed the chapter. It might have been slow and long, but I think we are now set up for the sexual pace of the story to increase significantly. Nolan and Grace have talked everything out and the lines have been drawn that they aren’t going to continue to rehash everything I suspect we’ll see an increase in pacing soon.

Chinookfan72

I agree...great writing and a good slow burn...would love to see and read more about them sooner..any chance of you getting us a new story of these guys a little bit sooner? I think grace and nate will end up having sex behind Nolans back....and will turn into an affair for too long....looking forward to it....I appreciate your hard work...more please soon 🙏

Ronnie Blankenship

I think things would have been more explosive if during the shower scene, Nate just pulled back the curtain just before grace climaxed and stepped in for round two. Grace submitting to Nate in the shower willingly and intensely.... only for partial regrett after, but her lusting after the feeling of Nate taking her forcefully added to her new mental playlist

Fuzzy Shark

Amazing as always! I don't have much constructive to add but agree with the other commenters about the drugging arc. Maybe his impotence can come from only being able to get hard after Grace has fucked Nate or tells him her stories?

Jay

I agree, the drugging for impotent route isnt the wat. If anything the drugging to make him seem like he drank too much to make grace mad at him is a much better tactic, but he doesnt need nolan to be impotent to make grace want him, but if he wants to steal grace away making her mad at nolan is a better route

Mondo36

Unsubscribed i ain't paying 20 dollars for this Shit every month

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Mark Albright

Great chp and love the slow burn buildup but I will say I’m not a fan of the drugging Nolan and making him impotent tactic I feel like it would much more in line for Nate to prove his superiority over Nolan naturally without needed to make him have ED. Nate strikes me as a old school man’s man and would consider beating Nolan that way cheap I will say Nate should slowly suggest to Grace that Nolan gets way more excited being cucked rather than having regular sex. Grace could feel offended that Nolan gets harder reactions hearing abt her escapades with Nate more than actually having sex her which in turn makes her more willing to ramp up the cuckolding cycle to eventually letting him see her and Nate fuck in person I’m also loving the power dynamic that is going between Nate and Grace. Grace obviously is naturally dominant and wants to exude being the one in control but clearly subconsciously likes getting dominated and bossed around by Nate but is trying her hardest to not break. It will be so hot when Nate eventually breaks her and makes her become subservient to him Also like the angle where Nate wants Grace to view Nolan as a less of a man. Having her boss Nolan around or even have him catch her in one of Nate’s clothes where she immediately tells Nolan to close his eyes and that he doesn’t have permission to see her in Nate’s clothes You can Nate eventually surpass Nolan at his workplace giving Nolan orders that turns Grace on. Also noticed how Grace was quick to come to Nolan’s defense when Nate called him an idiot but I hope as their plot progresses Grace becomes more lenient with how Nate gives Nolan jabs here and there it would be so hot Most importantly can’t wait to see the up in humiliation on Nolan’s part. Nothing is hotter than seeing Grace take Nate’s and subconsciously humiliate and degrade Nolan as the story continues Anyways that’s everything for my review and yeah I hope the drugging Nolan angle is dropped cause there’s way hotter scenarios that can come from Nolan getting hard at situations where he’s being humiliated and cucked

Near River

You're a good writer, and this is a good story. I just don't have the patience to wait a whole month for the story to progress so slowly. I'll wait for it to come out in novel form. Peace out. Be well.

Mark Albright