All She Ever Wanted - 18 minutes.
Added 2025-07-07 07:06:33 +0000 UTCFolks! This is a fan fiction of “All She Ev
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Thank you for reading both! I think your sentiment of splitting it down the middle is an interesting combination, one I never thought of. I can say with certainty that when I set out to write it, Brett was never set up to "lose" that last gamble. So this pivoted off that substantially in a pretty significantly darker fashion, which I liked. Either way, it's awesome you read both, thank you for supporting A77!
Hannah Baird
2025-07-21 16:17:29 +0000 UTCI would have preferred a mix of the two versions as an alternate ending. This alternate version was a little predictable and overdone. I like the fact that it was played out in front of the husband, unlike the original where he was unaware as to what had happened. But her becoming a fuck doll slave was not in holding with her character and nature of what she really wanted, money and status, not just another cock and cucking her husband.
FU
2025-07-20 20:12:54 +0000 UTCHello! One of the reasons I was so flattered and excited to see A77's take was how close it was to a lot of commenters on my original work. I think it's interesting that there's been so much contrast between the two, almost equally divided. It's in some ways a lot, lot more brutal compared to mine. But I think the presence of both is so fascinating.
Hannah Baird
2025-07-15 12:18:05 +0000 UTCI liked this version but not as much as the original. I felt that the ultimate rejection of her and being cast away at the end like so much trash was devastatingly effective and really shocking. Being a happy hot wife in this version was fairly routine and more the norm. And the whole episode of him tying up the husband seemed a little unrealistic - I mean how do you get someone to sit still long enough to bind their wrists AND ankles. Especially if they don’t want to be bound.
Vinny
2025-07-13 23:51:57 +0000 UTCI think A77 did an amazing job with their alternate ending for sure. A lot of readers who read my original really wanted this ending, it's split down the middle pretty evenly from what I can recall from comments. But it's awesome to have two separate endings, feels like everyone wins!
Hannah Baird
2025-07-08 20:12:37 +0000 UTCLiked your version better.
John Lewis
2025-07-08 12:23:08 +0000 UTCI think a lot of folks are! It seems inevitable in so many ways. Whether or not that ends up being their fate, or it's subverted, so many layers of possibility are there with those characters. A77 did an amazing job with this alternate ending, can't say that enough.
Hannah Baird
2025-07-07 14:44:38 +0000 UTCFirst I just wanted to say how deeply I am flattered that someone, especially an author who helped influence me, wrote about my story. I take it as the highest form of praise, and it is genuinely heart warming to me. Secondly, I think this is an amazing "Ending B" idea for ASEW. One that had things gone differently, might have actually happened in some capacity. There's an element of ASEW throughout that continues building towards a really extreme finale, and even at that time I wanted it to be open enough, but also scary enough that anything could happen after. I wanted to congratulate A77 here for also completely understanding Roy. A77 tapped into his mindset completely as an Ugly Bastard but also as a vulture, predator, and walking nightmare of a person. It's really hard to place your mindset into a character like that, but it happened here flawlessly. So, thank you again A77, and thank you to everyone who reads this, I sincerely hope you all enjoy it!
Hannah Baird
2025-07-07 12:45:15 +0000 UTCFuck that was awesome. This is what I’m hoping for with Kim and Toby !!!
Chris N
2025-07-07 11:57:36 +0000 UTC
