A Young Couple's Journey part 12 / TNT 21
Added 2025-03-20 20:33:24 +0000 UTC*
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Came back to this story after a long hiatus and god I forgot how much there is going on here - maybe too much. Sick of the whole Kim-Toby redux - he should kick that bitch to the curb and let her fuck that fat pig in his crappy little apartment to her hearts content. Josh has sooo many options available to him. The unfortunate thing is once that happens the story is over - Kim is the glue holding this thing together and the moment she’s out I think it becomes rather dull, even with the transgender elements.
Vinny
2025-06-12 00:08:37 +0000 UTCI love where this appears to be going !!!!!!
Ron
2025-05-25 08:15:38 +0000 UTCThank God Amanda finally admitted something terrible about Kim, please Josh have some self agency and realize this woman isn't for you. If he goes to Florida and decides he needs to cut Linda dry, I think I might go insane over how stupid he is. Everyone including himself is telling him Kim isn't right for him, but the simple word of marriage keeps making him hold on for whatever reason. Kim is once again just so utterly deranged, goes from one thought of needing to ignore Toby so she can be happy and then immediately is like "but what if I fuck toby" and gets horny beyond belief. All of this while thinking she can manage to keep Josh and Linda, as she doesn't even think of them as humans really, just things that she can use and have fun with. Insane considering she knows how much Josh hates Toby.
Keen
2025-04-23 02:12:06 +0000 UTCPersonally I don't get the critisism in the previous comments. To me this was a superb chapter, touching several of the key elements nad vibes, while setting up all the major players for what may come. I absolutely LOVE that Amanda is pregnant, and it would make for a very happy end of season 2 with Linda, Amanda and Josh hashing it out together. The angsty dynamic added with Alex and Toby gives the characters a wonderful depth, and it opens up for this to get significantly more dicey.
Shando Fenindra
2025-04-21 20:54:06 +0000 UTCI like where this is going, I like that Kim is about to completely submit. I like that the idea of Josh and luna fucking is being foreshadowed. I like the idea of him and luna sharing Linda's cock between them while Kim gets fucked by Toby and watches. I just wish it would happen already. The Alex stuff last few chapters was good, but for a paid story I jjst wish the buildup chapters would have a little more juice to bridge the gap yaknow? I like that we are slowly building to something great here, but I just wish we coupd get something in the mean time. This chapter while good at promising future scenes and getting me excited for those still ultimately left me disappointed. Didn't even get a good nut off because the few sex scenes were too short and a little too vanilla for us to be 21 chapters in.
Dbop
2025-04-12 11:08:40 +0000 UTCYou can have your preferences but you can’t dictate the story and set qualifiers. I disagree that one thing needs to be decided on about cuckolding and intersex. I also disagree with how you generally want the story to go. If you want this much control over a story, maybe you should write one.
Genaro Duran
2025-03-29 14:23:37 +0000 UTCReady for Kim to finally submit to Toby and his group of big dick friends
anonymous208849
2025-03-24 18:30:00 +0000 UTCToby and Kim are made for each other and there's nothing Josh can do to change that.
Pascal
2025-03-22 23:05:50 +0000 UTCOverall I loved TNT and the sequel so far has been less so. My biggest issues are that I think this street is trying to be two things at once. Is it an intersex love story or is a cuckold story. Personally I’d rather you pick one or the other idea and just run with that. My hope is you’d bag the intersex stuff, but if you bagged the cuckold parts then I could move on to another story. The other issue is Josh’s handling of his kinks and fetishes. Like I get the reluctance to accept being a cuckold or into intersex people, but eventually don’t you have to have a come to Jesus moment and decide if that’s the way you want to go or not. We are 21 chapters in and so atleast the cuckolding bits should have been figured out. However he’s still sending mixed signals to his wife and then bashing her behind her back like she’s suppose to read his mind. Every telling him she doesn’t deserve him is a crock of crap I think Kim is the only one that truly knows how Josh wants to be treated but for some reason isn’t willing to accept that he gets turned on by being dominated and seeing his wife fuck other people. If he truly is discussed by his wife’s behavior then fucking tell her and stop reacting every time she brings up fucking him by getting hard and fucking her enthusiastically. You can see how that could cause some confusion. This isn’t to say Kim is perfect..the cheating part of the story makes pretty terrible. I’d prefer for Josh and Kim to discuss and Josh to agree her to see other people like Kim has allowed Josh with Amanda. I find it strange he is upset that Kim may be sleeping around behind his back when he too stepped over the line when he fucked Amanda and it was only supposed to be oral. Seems somewhat hypocritical to me. But yeah my hopes are Josh goes to Florida and ends it with Linda. While he is away Kimmy starts fucking Toby again. When Josh comes back he and Kimmy have a heart to heart and lay everything on the table including Kim’s new relationship with Toby and how she had fucked Alex. And Josh can either end it or accept his wife needs this and he doubles down on the cuck life. If he kicks her out the story ends here. or If he doubles down he agrees to allow Kim to fuck other dudes including Toby. At first it’s only behind his back so he doesn’t have to deal with it other than her telling about her better lovers during sex. This would build until Josh agrees to allow Toby to move back in, where Toby can dominate both Josh and Kim and ultimately climaxes with Kim having to make a decision to stay with her husband or go off with Toby.
Chinookfan72
2025-03-22 11:46:59 +0000 UTCExcellent story chapter ! I can’t wait for Tony to claim his. Team Toby and Lester all the way
Chris N
2025-03-21 14:26:06 +0000 UTCFirst !
Chris N
2025-03-20 23:58:48 +0000 UTC
