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My Neighbor - Part 16

Hey there. Just wanted to apologize for taking

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Also, while sleeping with a student will definitely get her fired, she didn't break any actual laws, so IDK why the police showed up at all, other than writing it served the author's intent to heighten the schadenfreude of seeing her get utterly burnt while John don's a halo and walks off scott-free into the sunset... 🤔🙄🤦‍♀️ There's no reason at all she and John couldn't have reconciled after a bit of time and enjoyed the hotwife/cuckold lifestyle, other than, I suspect, someone's got an IRL revenge-fantasy working overtime in the background...

Arc

So disappointed in the ending. The absurdity of John's portrayed victimization and faux-righteousness, combined with the subtextual delight evident in relating Louise's destruction ruined what had been a pretty decent story until here. Both protagonists deserved similar fates, the disparity shown here is both incongruent, and unjust. Such a shame that a story with so much initial promise turned out so ruinously awful....

Arc

I have been loving this story for quite a while now, and now that it is finished I really believe that this is possibly one of the best stories I’ve ever read on literotica. I especially want to congratulate you on your ending. I want to say that as far as I’m concerned you nailed it 100%. She got what she deserved and John got what he deserved and needed. For me this was the perfect story and touched all of my kinks. You wanted suggestions for something to write next and my only thought is write more stories like this one !!!!!!!!

Ron

I actually liked the story, although not perfect, had me feeling ups and down. As far as a sequel ornthe ending, i think it was a little rushed, and the open end leaves a lot of posibilities. Regardless great job, i for once would like to know what happens to louise and john. Interestingly enough there are plenty of news with teachera getting involved with students. I always critizices the hows and whys would a women do that. There are plenty of guys out there.

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