A Young Couple's Journey Part 9 (TNT 18)
Added 2024-11-20 20:07:07 +0000 UTCAn extra big thank you to Anora / MorbidOrd
Comments
OK, fine. I'll jerk off to it, but I'll feel bad about it after.
Czoftw
2025-01-21 02:00:06 +0000 UTCThe original TNT was a little hit-or-miss for me with an ending that didn't work for me, so I was a little reluctant to start on this story. However, Kim's slow slide back into cheating (and an even worse version of cheating where she enjoys that would humiliate and hurt Josh), plus the wonderful addition of the Josh/Linda relationship (and just everything about Linda) has made this a wonderful story. I'm uncertain about an entire 3rd arc to resolve things. I get that Toby is coming back and Kim will get back with him, but how much more page time does Josh need before he 1) realizes Kim doesn't love him in a sustainable, healthy way, 2) being with Linda at least gives him a chance at a really good substitute, and 3) he can get his submissive kinks met with Linda without going the risky cuck route that ruined his marriage in the first place.
Your Best Supporter
2025-01-08 02:02:40 +0000 UTCBeautifully complicated! Excited about Toby getting back into things. If only Amanda could get knocked up by Josh, then things would be perfect <3
Shando Fenindra
2024-12-22 01:37:56 +0000 UTCDefinitely felt the door open for Toby with the Alex scene going on, very interested to see where we go from here :)
Edger Allan Poe
2024-11-23 15:14:05 +0000 UTCI love this I hope the bad guy wins
Chris N
2024-11-22 04:37:30 +0000 UTCI love this story so much
i miss JeriShow
2024-11-21 18:25:20 +0000 UTCMy Neighbor has been in repeat mode for ages. I wish he would put them all out if their misery. There isn't one redeemable character in that story. This one has interesting characters. Louise is just a delusional douchbag. Kim is dumb as shit too, but the writing is just better. I don't know how to explain it. I wish Strange House would come back. I was enjoying that one too.
Elfy
2024-11-21 13:15:07 +0000 UTCPerceptions on Kim varies to everyone's liking. Her fall was beyond hot. Excited for what you have in store with Toby returning. Great chapter. As with Louise, I hope that you will rather finalize it cleanly than going into repeat mode. A cheating arc is a perfect way to initiate an ending. Great setup with Alex's subpar performance, leaving her yearning more for Toby. A little loose end on Amanda from last chapter, curious to see what the warning/worry from her pov, at that time, was
Jon Boge
2024-11-21 00:53:06 +0000 UTCI knew this arc would end with him coming back! What will Josh do? He was getting continuously weaker throughout this arc, kim was getting pushed further into depravity she's too far gone now, I still want Josh to win but at this rate we never know. this story is so good! Leaves me wanting more and more.
David JC
2024-11-20 21:47:10 +0000 UTCI mean she's an idiot. Amanda is totally right. Kim doesn't deserve Josh. They clearly don't belong together. I feel any story arc that portrays this would be to forced.
achilles
2024-11-20 20:46:19 +0000 UTC
