Book 5 - Chapter 14
Added 2025-08-05 16:54:49 +0000 UTCSorry for the delay, it took me longer to shake this thing off than I expected. Next chapter will be Thursday, and then I'll aim for another on Saturday.
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The fall of night affected Brin's Lance just as strongly as the rest of the army, and their newly donned armor started to squeeze them as their bodies began to swell again. He saw it hit a breaking point in Hedrek who ballooned until the cysts began to burst and trickles of yellow fluid came through the gaps in his armor.
The chorus of groans was even louder, loud enough to disguise the few alarmed shouts of the army watchmen. The armies of Arcaena were crossing the illusion barrier and charging towards the undefended army at high speed.
Few people seemed to have even noticed the threat, and fewer still were doing anything about it, which made it even more important that Brin's Lance get there in time. Naturally, they were taking the horses. Cronby had relented and let them use the horses for the joint exercises and would probably throw a fit when he found out they were riding them into battle. Well, let him. Brin wasn't going to make his men run.
From horseback, Cid led them towards the front and Brin's horse knew how to follow, so he had a minute to think. No, there wasn't much to think about. It was time to decide. No, there was nothing to decide. It was time to act.
He reached for his magic, and panic made him withdraw his mind like a hand from a sudden flame. They'll know it's me. They'll see this and know what I am. He knew that was stupid; he'd never heard of an ability that let someone identify an [Illusionist] just by seeing one of his illusions.
He tried again, and again [Delusionist] pulled him away. If anyone could do it, Arcaena could. You can't let her see [Say What's True].
That might've been true, but what did it matter? If he didn't intend to use this power, then he should've taken the [Mirror Knight].
He firmed his mind, and cast. "<Blazing, Burning Light. Sphere of Brilliance. Shine!>" He put a good amount of power into the spell, enough that he'd need to be careful with his Mana in the fight ahead. The rows of reclining soldiers were revealed in all their misery as if the entire battlefield were lit up by a giant otherworldly spotlight. No, as if it were lit up by the sun.
It would have been better if he knew the Language word for "Sun", but he knew enough to make the light into real, bright ultra-violet radiation-producing sunlight. And he was only half done. With [Say What's True], he gave the light an opinion. I am daylight. This is day. All nocturnal creatures must sleep now, the sun is up.
His magic clashed against the disease, and the sudden influx of mental stimulus was nearly overwhelming. He could feel his light hitting the sickness all across the plain, his awareness stretched thin like a giant blanket. He split a tiny portion of his mind off to deal with it or else lose himself in the overwhelming mental input. With his mind freed, he was able to see the broad picture: it was working. His fake sun was valid enough for the disease and it had reverted back to the less deadly, more contagious version.
The groans of the army were reduced, and just in time. A scattering of men with leadership Classes, each surrounded by a heavy bodyguard, were riding out fast from the barricaded Commanders Camp. The instant they were in range, they shot off Skills that made whole lines of soldiers snap to their feet, shields and weapons ready. They formed up into perfect lines, some groaning or screaming piteously as they fought with their disease-wearied bodies, but they obeyed the mental compulsions. The soldiers formed up just in time to make a shield wall against the first lunging charge of undead.
Looking from above with an Invisible Eye, Brin saw that the light didn't reach far enough to hit everyone on both edges of the army, so he created two more on either side, balancing the strain on his Mana between the three of them.
Suddenly, something hit his magic, and the three suns blinked in the air, growing dim. It wasn't a new spell or counterspell, it was an argument. The [Witch] who had initially cursed the army was reforming her argument in the Wyrd. Go back, invaders. You have violated our home, our only sanctuary. You are putrid. Let your bodies perish, rot away and nourish the grass and flowers which you have burned!
Brin fought back, not countering the arguments but superseding them. I am the sun. I care not for this war. I burn. I shine. It is day.
The suns returned to their previous intensity. The argument was even more effective than he'd expected, and now he could feel the light magic start to burn away the disease itself, cleaning off exposed surfaces and even driving it out of the bodies of a few of the less-effected soldiers.
The counterargument was obvious and it came quickly. You are not the sun. This is a wicked spell created by a foolish man in a rapacious army.
It was a good argument, since he had to admit it was more or less true. In the Wyrd you could adjust the framing but you couldn't outright lie. At least, not unless you could lie to yourself.
He was already in the process of doing just that. He split off about a tenth of his mind–in this case the stupidier the better–and put it in charge of maintaining the blazing suns. Then with a judicious use of mirrors, Invisible Eyes, and [Mirrored Duplicity], he convinced the split mind that it actually was the sun.
The suns brightened again. Not because he'd actually given it more Mana, but because the new mind worked with a greater purity of purpose. I AM THE SUN.
Now, no matter what arguments the [Witch] tried, Brin's spell wouldn't budge.
You are an illusion. You cannot command my righteous contagion to cease or slow.
I AM THE SUN.
You cannot be the sun. The sun comes at day and now it is night.
I AM THE SUN.
There are three! How can you be the sun when there are three of you?
There is no "how". There is no "three". I care not for such things. I AM THE SUN!
The closer they got to the front, the more the battlefield narrowed in Brin's sight. Though his eyes were still watching from above, now his focus was the men right in front of him. Rather than a long, unbroken line of disciplined soldiers, the allied armies were a hodgepodge of disconnected groups.
A large group of heavy infantry were holding a strong square formation. The enemy in front weren't even bothering with it, and were splitting off to either side.
To the right, empty ground and the enemy had a free way to bypass the army and move further into the camps. To the left, ghouls fought with teeth and claws against a band of lightly armored pikemen. It was the worst possible matchup for the pikemen, who couldn't use their long weapons to full advantage and were having trouble utilizing their Skills. Cid veered to the left.
To his surprise, Cid moved Cowl and Anwir to the front of the wedge, a place that Hedrek normally took with Rhun. The porter and the archer weren't the ones he would've chosen, and [Battle Sense] practically spat with indignation, but again, it didn't matter. His role wasn't to second-guess Cid, it was to make Cid's plans work out.
Then they were in the thick of it. Anwir fought with his arming sword, proving that he was at least familiar with melee weapons even if he tended to avoid them, and laid into the ghouls without hesitation. Cowl fought just as fiercely and they pushed a thin line into the mass of bare undead flesh.
Cid and Hedrek were next, and where the previous two were a precision cut, these two were like a bomb going off. They widened the wedge through the enemy army, cutting through the monsters like they were made of paper. The rest of the Lance passed through, each cutting and gouging where they could. Brin followed, in all his magical fury. He pushed magic into the stones set on his gauntlets, and thrilled in the powerful, unrestrained burst of laser fire that followed.
The laser beams shot through the ghouls' bodies like bullets through a wasp's nest and he followed the Lance and finished any wounded they'd left behind. He knew his Mana wasn’t infinite, but with the way that his armor augmented and focused his magic, it sure felt that way.
Marksi stayed ready, not wanting to leave Brin's horse and also not wanting to spend his own laser attack on the riff raff. He got a perfect chance when a high-level ghoul appeared. It was maybe their commander, judging by the near-sanity in his eyes and the fact that he carried a sword. Brin had just swiped through the stomach of a normal ghoul, and when that one bent forward to collapse on itself, the commander jumped off his back and leapt towards Brin.
<Laser>. Marksi's beam of rainbow light caught the commander full in the chest and followed him to the ground.
Then the Lance broke free. In open ground, they moved to turn their horses back around for another sweep, but they'd already done enough. The pikeman had been badly matched against the animalistic ghouls, but now that they'd lessened the pressure, the soldiers were able to fight off the last of them and begin to form a wall.
It was just in time. The Arcaenean army shifted and then belched out a force of fifty giant wolves, charging straight for Brin's Lance.
Cid had the Lance veer off and make for the safety of the newly formed pike wall.
The wolves were faster. Cid had Rhun pulled back to defend their rear, and Brin hung back with him. It had to have been awkward to defend the flanks of a horse with a tower shield, but Rhun made it look easy, passing side to side and batting any wolves back who'd gotten too close. Brin stabbed back with his spear where he could, using the glass magic of his armor to stabilize himself, but he didn't waste energy putting much power into his blows.
The giant wolves were quick like shadows. They had a certain ethereal quality to them; they were almost noble-looking, like ancient forest spirits, and they moved like they'd specifically trained against spear-wielding horsemen.
One dashed up fast beside him, and Brin worried that it would be fast enough to reach one of his Lance's horses while Rhun was on the other side. But no, that wasn't the plan. This wolf had a rider.
A human rider; the first human Arcaenean soldier Brin had ever seen up close like this. His eyes were wide and he grinned in zealous fury.
[Wyrdic Inspect] called him a [Basher], and that's all the warning Brin got.
The man leapt from his wolf and slammed into Brin, trying to tackle him off his horse. He had the Skills for it, too, and hit with a power and weight that should've come from a man ten times his size. Unfortunately for the [Basher], he was up against the full weight of Brin's armor and magic.
Brin stopped him with his shield. The man grabbed it, trying to hang on. Brin pulled back, and then slashed with his arm, transforming the shield to sword and taking the man's head and one arm off in a single stroke.
You have defeated: Arcaenean soldier [27]
They made it to the pike wall, and the wolves retreated rather than test themselves against the defenders. Brin thought they might have time to rest, but a volley of arrows came from the Arcaenean side. They glowed purple in the air--a bad sign. That glow would make them easier to dodge, unless dodging wasn't an option. They fell among the battered pikemen like artillery shells, exploding where they hit on the ground.
Rhun stopped one of them, and Aeron cut another out of the air. The Lance started to spread out, intent on shielding as much of the pikemen as possible, but Cid called them to stop. "This way! With me!"
Then Brin saw it, too. A tall [Knight] on horseback was holding a banner high while a [Knight Captain] nearby rallied a scattered force to him. It was a hundred man commander, and while it wasn't their hundred man commander, Cid wanted to follow his directive to form up.
Many of the pikemen gave audible cries of alarm when the Lance abandoned them, but soon after Brin looked back to see the larger force of heavy infantry absorbing them into their number.
Brin's Lance joined a growing group of knights-at-arms, those who had run to defend the camps without order. They became fifty, and then a hundred, then a hundred and fifty.
All the while, madness reigned. The allied forces sent Skills and Classes that Brin had never even heard of. A band of what looked like musketeers, except they shot living birds from their cannons who flew past the shields of the enemy to slam their sharpened beaks in a suicidal lunge. Groups of Commoner casters flung volleys of flame and stone into the enemy, shooting off all their Mana in one attack and then retreating back again. The great beasts were on the field, and Brin saw Marksi's friend the Handrake rampage through a force of undead with impunity.
When Marksi saw the Handrake, he started pulling on Brin's helmet and pointing. He was asking if he should go and help. Brin hesitated for a second, but he couldn't really tell Marksi not to go help his friend. He nodded, and Marksi darted out of sight.
Arcaena also brought out her horrors. Seasoned undead soldiers in heavy armor drove back the allied infantry every time they clashed. Huge undead monstrosities commanded the field wherever they appeared, forcing the allies to flee key positions rather than be trampled. Skilled human soldiers were mingled among the undead, who fought with a feverish intensity and showed no mercy to any wounded they could catch. Dark casters shot shadowy darts that killed quickly or turned entire limbs to black necrosis.
The force Brin's Lance had joined up with reached two hundred, and the commander apparently decided that was enough. The bannerman went first, and the knights-at-arms followed. Looking to his left and right, Brin could only see seasoned knights, men with decades of experience, and he couldn't help but feel safer than he'd been in a while. That was an illusion, he knew. There were plenty of things that could defeat a [Knight], and many of those things were standing just across the gap in the Arcaenean army.
They charged towards a group of riders, some on wolves and some on giant lizards. It was an oddly mixed force, and he could tell that Arcaena was having trouble organizing them because of the haphazard way that cloaked casters were randomly mingled with armored human lancers. Still, it would be a hard fight, as the knights were outnumbered three to one.
To Brin's surprise, the enemy riders retreated, and their infantry scrambled to push a line of spearmen forward instead. These were weaker in levels and disorganized, much better odds, but the bannerman still turned and broke away. The assault returned to their side without engaging at all. Despite how it looked, Brin's [Battle Sense] told him that had been a pivotal victory. They'd prevented an assault that might have broken the allies spirit, and disrupted the enemy formation in a way that would take a half hour to sort out.
The safety he'd felt when they'd met up with this force hadn't actually been ill-founded, Brin realized. A few other things he'd seen and heard clicked into place. Why so many [Knights] weren't far past level 30, why people insisted [Knights] didn't need to be endurance fighters.
It was because they really wouldn't fight much. Sure, you could defeat a group of knights-at-arms by throwing wave after wave of your men at them, but what kind of commander would ever want to make that trade? And on the allied side, yes, a full out assault of knights could wreak massive amounts of carnage, but why risk them in a real skirmish when just the threat of them was enough to solve most problems?
He didn't know how long he'd been fighting when an excited murmur moved through the allies. Rumor moved faster than orders on a battlefield, but Brin's Invisible Eyes were faster than either. He quickly found the source of the army's newfound optimism.
A man in black robes, attended by red-robed servants, strode towards the battlefield. Brin recognized him; he was an [Archmage]. The Creeping Death had taken the field.
He wondered if the Arcaenean army would retreat now, but he saw similar signs of excitement on their side. He wasn’t sure who it was yet, but he could tell. They had a champion of their own.
Comments
Love this line! There is no "how". There is no "three". I care not for such things. I AM THE SUN!
Tom
2025-08-08 05:06:27 +0000 UTCmost definitely. It would probably be assumed tp be a powerful hidden mage
Sean Shivers
2025-08-08 04:36:47 +0000 UTCBrin might be the worst knight imaginable. Truth? Honor? Fuck no. Hereditary privledge? Not here. But his warbringer only affects his physical stats i thought? So the suns just have to worry about mana.
Sean Shivers
2025-08-08 04:34:24 +0000 UTCWell, it's makes sense that [Knights] would not engage enemy if not need. Though with Brian [Warborn] buffs timer going down with out direct fighting. He and he's lance might need found different things to do. Or thous three "SUNS" he is using would crowing weaker. TFTC
1N7L68E
2025-08-07 03:27:13 +0000 UTCI'm curious as to what the allied army thinks is going on. Random Soldier: "We have someone who can summon the literal sun?" Random General: "We have someone who can summon the literal sun?" Sion: "Since when could Brin summon the literal sun?" THE LITERAL SUN(???): I AM THE SUN P.S. I'm curious if [Say Whats True] could cause some people with low mental resistance to actually think the sun rose at night?
Patron1kj6tz
2025-08-07 03:03:37 +0000 UTCHe only gets the memories if he lets the thread end on it's own. If he forgets to dismiss it then he'll enjoy some temporary sun madness.
wanderer117
2025-08-06 17:49:54 +0000 UTCAlso reminds me of the movie stardust “What do stars do? SHINE!”
Tom C
2025-08-06 13:48:40 +0000 UTCI like Brin’s approach here with the Suns. It’s like, do something that has a great impact on the battle, but fundamentally its purpose is not related to the battle. So to counter it the witches have to come up with a new argument unrelated to their whole attack strategy. Clever stuff, if Brin keeps this in mind for the future it’s a good technique to have TFTC!
Tom C
2025-08-06 13:47:12 +0000 UTCCommunist sunshine for everyone Comrades! 🤣🤣
Tom C
2025-08-06 13:44:14 +0000 UTCClick here to learn this one wyrd trick that ALL witches hate.
Tadas
2025-08-06 06:11:05 +0000 UTCYes please 😂
KollegvomMirgan
2025-08-06 04:56:55 +0000 UTCIf only you could make THE SUN!
Kevin O'Malley
2025-08-06 03:42:01 +0000 UTCTYFTC
Kevin O'Malley
2025-08-06 03:41:07 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, all fun and game until Brin try to dismiss the thread and meet with a "I AM THE SUN" reply. Jokes aside, the delusionist power combine with his multithread processing is the best combination. He does not lose his true self (until the peak chapter, of course) and make best use of the persuation power in Wyrdic argument. This is so much better than any Mirror Knight. Dude turned himself in a strategic asset in mere thoughts.
Chien Do
2025-08-06 01:31:19 +0000 UTCJust something I noticed when re reading the chapter, you refer to the fake suns in the plural before he actually summons the other two
Sam
2025-08-06 01:01:39 +0000 UTCIf he cancels split-mind before reversing the wyrd. New title acquired Sun You're are the sun. Part of you beleives that you are the sun. Decrease the amount of magic needed to produce ultra-violet radiation while producing sunlight.
izzy xl
2025-08-05 23:21:51 +0000 UTC“I am the sun. I care not for this war. I burn. I shine. It is day.” Turns out the best argument is ‘not my problem’. 😆
Grace
2025-08-05 22:35:53 +0000 UTCTypo: "His fake suns were valid enough" -- there's only one sun at this point, the two more are created two paragraphs later.
Nathan
2025-08-05 22:25:56 +0000 UTCPraise the Sun! Y Y Y Y Y Y Y Y Y (darksouls meme)
wanderer117
2025-08-05 21:52:38 +0000 UTCPraise the Sun! Brin should make some illusions posing, for extra wyrdic strength. We Are the Sun!
wanderer117
2025-08-05 21:44:19 +0000 UTC? The army did prepare? They quarantined their officers so the leadership survived the initial attack and there wasn't a breakdown in command. They brought a lot of medical personnel. They had plans in place on how to respond to a pandemic. 'Great pyres were being lit, bigger than seemed reasonable for the amount of fallen, which only meant that the commanders expected this to get much worse.' 'It felt like every healing Class from three nations had been pulled to this army to deal with exactly this situation. There were thousands of them.' 'Then they strode back to the commander’s camp, passing the sentries that separated the leaders from everyone else. It was a real separation, too, with a row of archers who had orders to shoot down every unauthorized soldier who tried to cross.'
wanderer117
2025-08-05 21:38:58 +0000 UTCImagine if she mentions it to queen arcaena, and the queen's response is "that's my great grandson"
Peter Smith
2025-08-05 20:51:19 +0000 UTCOn a side note. That must have been so infuriating for the which lol. I can just imagine her fuming, thinking to herself, What kind of an idiot actually believes he is a sun!
C
2025-08-05 20:28:12 +0000 UTCI mean there is some truth to his word. He is sun because he illuminate and burn. There is many suns and this spell is one of those many suns after all it shines on the sky. Beside wyrd in it self is absurd and unfair. Like what claim does she on making this people sick.
Bookworm bibliophile
2025-08-05 20:10:29 +0000 UTCHey Miles, I was wondering how you felt about the whole "if you can lie to yourself, you can lie to the wyrd" scenario. I honestly love the wyrdic battles of intent and having a stronger argument means you come out on top. It really shows how crafty our MC can be but this specific little wyrdic battle seems a little lazy since the "dumber" you are in believing your own lies, you can somehow mysteriously get the upper hand even though it is not grounded in truth. With all this said, I love your work and just wanted to voice what I think is a flaw in this chapter.
TastyApple
2025-08-05 19:50:44 +0000 UTCdon't care didn't ask because i am the sun
funktorial
2025-08-05 19:44:07 +0000 UTCI AM THE SUN!!!!!
Jasus
2025-08-05 19:35:14 +0000 UTCI hope we get some insight into the strategy informing the decisions here. It seems a no-brainer that witches would use sickness as a weapon; it's practically one of their signature moves. The army was oddly unprepared for it - no uniform training on quarantine procedures or even basic first aid, no instructions on how to deal with the break down of the chain of command, not even local stockpiles of common remedies or even food and water to at least buy the soldiers time for a healer to arrive. And these are not lessons derived from warfare, this is all stuff that could be learned from mundane epidemics in villages. What's more, it seems the hesitancy of the army to progress more aggressively after they entered Arcaena only allowed the witch forces to set up their hex and mass their forces. Witches seem to be most effective when they have time to prepare rituals. From an uninformed perspective, being more aggressive would force the witches to either expend their other forces to slow the army, or fall back even further in order to buy time. But I suspect I am missing something here.
rhekke
2025-08-05 19:27:56 +0000 UTCI read that as Marksi's laser hit the ghoul and the dragon made sure his beam followed the path of the undead as it fell to the ground.
rhekke
2025-08-05 19:18:42 +0000 UTCI feel like you could throw on the Dark Souls themed Visigoth EP “Bells of Awakening” and have that playing behind this chapter and not be amiss.
Bobito
2025-08-05 19:06:08 +0000 UTCLove this! Get well soon - don't push yourself at the expense of recovery. That said, I wonder what Lumina and Hogg are up to.
Hell 5pawn
2025-08-05 19:02:37 +0000 UTCFear, I suspect. I think our beloved author is displaying the fatal flaw of Brin's class: fear of discovery. I think he needs to get over it before we get to see him at his peak (the class selection version).
Hell 5pawn
2025-08-05 18:53:44 +0000 UTCGiving off major WHO DECIDED THAT? Pride vibes
BubblyGhost
2025-08-05 18:42:47 +0000 UTCMan I was annoyed for the the witch. That was how annoying his skill was
Bookworm bibliophile
2025-08-05 18:21:20 +0000 UTCBrin the Scarred? No, BRIN THE SUN!
Heraclitus
2025-08-05 18:18:58 +0000 UTCHow come Brin didn't do the things he saw in his level-up vision and make the enemies fight themselves?
C
2025-08-05 18:12:44 +0000 UTCGlad Brin was able to resist the classes temptation
Gorane
2025-08-05 18:07:50 +0000 UTCThis is the hijinks I was envisioning with this class lol. Aberfa created a monster :D
Matt
2025-08-05 18:00:28 +0000 UTC". Marksi's beam of rainbow light caught the commander full in the chest and followed him to the ground." It sounds like Marksi's laser has a kinetic component that pushed the ghoul? Or did it just lose coordination mid-jump?
Wiggles, Rank C, Level 4
2025-08-05 17:55:40 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter! I am happy for the new chapters, whenever they come!
Xavier Duquesne
2025-08-05 17:49:57 +0000 UTCI really like the tactic of convincing a small part of his mind of something to win Wyrd-fights
Björn
2025-08-05 17:38:58 +0000 UTCTftc!
Kananiio
2025-08-05 17:32:39 +0000 UTC“But you could be fire.” “I AM A STICK!”
Jerkface
2025-08-05 17:32:24 +0000 UTCBrin paranoia magic on enemy when
Kentucky Fried Children
2025-08-05 17:27:45 +0000 UTCHoly shit, now that is a war chapter! Glad to see the illness didnt effect your writing!
Hypnotical
2025-08-05 17:27:07 +0000 UTCSUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESU
Swinter
2025-08-05 17:20:18 +0000 UTC\[T]/ PRAISE THE SUN! \[T]/
Joshua
2025-08-05 17:19:33 +0000 UTCGlad you’re feeling better! Chapter was awesome. Happy to see my fake sun theory actually worked
Sam
2025-08-05 17:16:36 +0000 UTCThis is so hype.
Kaze
2025-08-05 17:08:10 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2025-08-05 17:06:18 +0000 UTCGlad you're feeling better, thanks for the chapter!
Johnathan Teeple
2025-08-05 16:57:14 +0000 UTC