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Book 4 - Chapter 41

"Really, Aeron? I thought better of you," said Cid, exasperated.

"Do not seek to order them to surrender, or the Rite of the Crucible is invalid," warned Caradawg.

"I'm not ordering him to surrender, as much as I'd like to," said Cid.

"With my apologies, I just want to know if I can beat him," said Aeron.

"Don't apologize. It wasn't fair of me to put this on you guys," said Brin, though he was starting to worry. Aeron had [Blade Mastery]. He'd be a tough nut to crack, especially if Brin wanted to save some Mana for Hedrek.

Cid said the words. "Take heart and fight bravely! Remember always that the eyes of Anshar are upon you. Let the light cast away darkness. Let truth prevail and let justice be done."

Brin pressed in first, hoping to end things quickly, but Aeron defended perfectly, always putting his body in the ideal position to avoid Brin's strikes.

Still, Aeron wasn't used to fighting with a top-heavy mace, and Brin was able to find openings to poke a few scratches on his armor and nick the skin at least once.

Battle Fury: 55%

Aeron dropped the mace and drew his arming sword, and immediately his defense improved. Brin fought, using all of the new power that [Battle Fury] was giving him to try to overwhelm the [Squire], but Aeron fought economically, using the perfect parry every time to redirect Brin's strikes while not using too much of his own energy.

Brin's arms were starting to burn, his breath starting to come in heavy. If he was this tired, shouldn’t Aeron be wearing down as well?

Brin changed up his moveset, using the unusual moves that he’d learned that day with sir Crost. He struck from the side, moved in directions that shouldn’t be possible, reversing his momentum in ways that only someone with hundreds of points in Strength could be capable.

This finally made Aeron start to sweat. He gave up completely on any counter attacks and put his whole energy into defending. Where before he parried carefully and preserved his strength, now every swing of his sword carried his full strength.

No one could carry on like that forever. His hands started to shake, his movements lost their refined edge, and Brin got a few more lucky cuts in.

Aeron stumbled, and Brin thought he finally might have the surrender.

He stepped back, and watched Aeron fall down to one knee, gasping for air. He wedged his sword into the ground to keep himself from falling to his face.

“Give up,” said Brin.

“No. I don’t think so,” said Aeron.

“You can’t seriously think you can keep going,” said Brin.

With titanic effort, Aeron pushed his leg up, and then rose to his feet. “This… is your… fault you know.” He gasped with every word. “Without… all that training you made us go through… I never would’ve lasted this long.”

Aeron seemed to recover in real time, and by the time he finished speaking, he was almost breathing normally again.

He lunged. Brin put his spear into place, but Aeron lurched unnaturally, copying one of the moves he’d just seen Brin do. Brin missed his parry. Aeron's sword flashed, and Brin didn't move fast enough to stop it from slamming against his breastplate. It clanged and bounced off, but the result was clear; if Aeron had a better weapon, he would've won just now.

Brin backed up and Aeron didn’t press. He noticed the [Squire] favoring a leg. Had he sprained an ankle or something by doing a move his body wasn’t ready for?

Brin had wanted to win this with pure hand-to-hand, to make sure they knew that he was more than his magic, but now he decided that Aeron deserved better than that.

He summoned his magic, casting four Mirror Men in a circle around Aeron.

Aeron was quick, even favoring one foot. He shattered his way through the glass Brin's in a matter of seconds, but that's all the time Brin needed.

He summoned a ball of glass and threw it like a shot put, empowering it the way that he normally would a javelin. “<Biting Sphere, Enemy, Destroyer, Hurting Blow, Flashing Wind. Seek and Destroy. Fire!>”

The ball of glass slammed into Aeron's breastplate square on. It didn't shatter when it hit, but created a huge indent in his armor and drove him to the ground.

Aeron still hadn't moved when Brin stood above him, holding him to the ground with his spear.

"I surrender."

You have defeated: Aeron

Opponents remaining: 4/9

Battle Fury: 70%

Brin was startled by the sudden eruption of cheers from the surrounding townsfolk. He supposed now that they'd seen Brin spare four knights, they were losing their fear that they were going to see one of the heroes who'd saved their town die today. Also, that had been quite the spectacular finish. In the pure light of Eveladis, all the quick movements and strong blows seemed even more epic than normal. While he couldn't use light magic, he could still do things like paint his glass to make a splashy burst of color when it exploded.

He helped Aeron off the ground and said, "You would've had me if not for my magic."

Aeron laughed. "I would've had you except for your entire Class? Well fought, Brin."

Cid said, “Tell me that you at least–”

Anwir was next. "I'd like to try," the archer said simply.

Cid didn't bother to argue further, just shook his head and spoke the words of the ceremony.

Instead of squaring off nearby like all the others had done, Anwir elected to back way, way up, starting the duel from nearly twenty yards away. Brin didn't know if there was anything in the rules that said he couldn't do that, but no one complained so apparently it was fine.

Anwir, then Rhun, then Hedrek. He was tired, and bleeding, but still doing good on Mana. He could do this.

Anwir loosed an arrow as soon as the fight started, and since Brin was expecting it, he dodged easily. He returned a javelin, which Anwir promptly dodged.

The obvious solution was to try to close the gap, but what fun was that? He wanted to beat Anwir at his own game.

What followed was a high-stakes version of dodgeball, with the both of them sending projectiles and stepping out of the way of their enemy. Anwir tried to lead the shots, but Brin stayed on the tips of his toes and moved in unpredictable directions. Brin tried to use homing glass javelins, but Anwir was seriously agile and slipped out of the way of them all.

Brin split his mind, and while half worked on dodging, the other half prepared a trap with glass. He created a flat piece of glass on the ground, and then used the remains of his missed javelins to ready a Mirror Man behind Anwir.

Anwir loosed three arrows in quick succession, and Brin only had an instant to register what was happening. The first two were to hem him in, and the last had a Skill behind it: [Power Shot], strong enough to break through his armor and then some.

Brin flipped up the glass shield he'd prepared, letting it block all three arrows, though the last one shattered both shield and arrow, and a few fragments of the explosion pierced straight through the cloth portion of Brin’s armor.

Anwir put another arrow to his bow, and gave Brin a look like he was giving him a chance to surrender.

Brin pointed at something behind Anwir. At the same time, the Mirror Man that Brin had summoned there reached over and tapped Anwir on the shoulder.

"Gah!" The [Squire of Arrows] jumped a foot in the air and dropped his bow in surprise. He reached to pick it up again, but both he and Brin knew that Mirror Man could've stabbed him in the back just then. Anwir cleared his throat. "I surrender."

The crowd laughed a bit, and Anwir smiled, too, seeming unoffended by their reaction to the result of the match. 

You have defeated: Anwir

Opponents remaining: 3/9

Battle Fury: 95%

Ninety-five percent. Just a bit more and he’d be at full power. That last five percent didn’t mean much, but it was aggravating.

"You're great with a bow, but you need an answer for when your enemies get close," Brin told Anwir.

"That's why I have all of you," said Anwir.

Everyone's amusement soon quieted as Rhun stepped forward. He didn’t make any overt displays to put a damper on the mood, but there was a weight to him today. 

This man was different from the others. Everyone could see that, and it wasn't just a matter of levels. He was more serious than the rest, and walked with purpose. He walked like a man.

"I need to know how far I've come," Rhun said simply.

"You're all using me as a yardstick, but who am I supposed to measure myself against?" Brin whined, but his heart wasn't in it. He’d already resigned himself to this.

He pulled away the shards of glass and arrow that had lodged in his armor. A large chuck of wood in his stomach had a bit of blood on it, but nothing too bad. Compared to the 95% [Battle Fury], his wounds were nothing.

Brin pumped his arms to keep his pulse up, and jumped on his toes to keep limber. "Whenever you're ready."

Cid said the words.

Rhun [Charged].

Brin went all out against Rhun from the beginning. He created Mirror Men as quickly as he could, summoned javelins in mid-air and fired them using Split Minds to enchant the power. His Mouth Manager never ceased in filling his voice with the sounds of Language, and every time Rhun drew close, he lashed out with his spear, putting every ounce of his strength into his attacks.

Rhun was relentless. He spammed [Charge] over and over, methodically destroying the Mirror Men as fast as Brin could make him, leaving no chance that he'd get surrounded. He [Charged] shield first, destroying the Mirror Men and leaving his sword arm free to parry counter attacks or press his advantage. 

It was stunning that Rhun didn’t have [Blade Mastery] because he was as smooth as Govannon and as perfect as Anwir. No wasted movements, no hesitation, just smoothly flowing from defence to attack, from one move to another. He blocked every spear thrust and javelin with his greatshield, and his sword always seemed to be where Brin least wanted it.

This wasn't even a Skill, nothing but the result of discipline and practice.

Soon, the glass remains of Brin's broken javelins and Mirror Men littered the ground. Brin hadn't managed to score a single hit against Rhun, but neither had Rhun managed to tag him, not even his armor.

Still, he couldn't do this forever; he was running low on Mana.

He made six Mirror Men, making his Mana pool drop dangerously low, but gaining himself a few precious seconds. The directed threads guiding the mirrors fought as well as they could, but Rhun's flesh was faster than Brin's magic, and he soon broke them to pieces.

Brin used that time to harden all the glass on the floor, making it flat and smooth. Especially smooth.

Rhun and Brin met eyes, and Rhun nodded, sensing that the fight was nearly through. He [Charged].

Brin feinted left, then moved right. He prepared to trip Rhun as he passed, but Rhun ended his charge early. He readjusted his shield and then put his leg back like he was going to [Charge] again.

Brin swung his spear like a baseball bat with desperation-fueled strength. He struck Rhun, who easily blocked with his shield, but Brin kept pushing. Rhun moved a foot to stabilize himself, and his metal-clad foot slipped on the smooth glass.

He fell on his back, hard, and Brin jabbed his spear under the armor of Rhun's stomach until he felt flesh, using the magic in the glass to prevent it from penetrating.

"I... surrender," Rhun said, still stunned.

Brin helped him up like all the rest, and Rhun said, “Is that my last weakness? My footing?”

“The last one I can think of right now,” said Brin.

You have defeated: Rhun

Opponents remaining: 2/9

Battle Fury: 100%

Brin honestly didn’t know where that last five percent had come from. Had he hurt Rhun somewhere? Had he gotten injured? It didn’t matter. His physical stats were fully doubled now.

Hedrek was tough, but he fought like a wild man. Good against lots of enemies, but bad in a duel. All Brin had to do was–

“I surrender,” said Hedrek.

All Brin had to do was stay fast and light, wait for an opening, and then… wait, what?

“What?” he said aloud.

“Thank you! If I had been the only one to surrender, I would’ve felt like a right coward,” said Meredydd.

“That’s not why I did it. Did all of you forget what we’re doing here? This Rite of the Crucible is to determine if Brin is an [Illusionist]. Well, I’ve never seen nor heard of an [Illusionist] that can fight like that, not under the light of Eveladis. Brin is no spy, he’s no deceiver, and he’s certainly no [Illusionist].”

Opponents remaining: 1/9

“Thank you, Hedrek. That’s very mature of you,” said Cid.

Brin looked around. Had he actually done it? Had he really finished the crucible? He’d started this because he had no choice, but it was hard to believe he’d really done it. And not a moment too soon. His hands were shaking, bruised from repeated strikes. His magic was near empty and his brain felt foggy from pushing his limits for so long.

All that was left was Cid, and he would definitely… he would…

Brin met Cid’s eyes. Oh no.

"Brin isu Yambul. You have defeated my Lance and now only I remain. Take heart and fight bravely! Remember always that the eyes of Anshar are upon you. Let the light cast away darkness. Let truth prevail and let justice be done."

“You’re really going to fight me?” asked Brin.

“Our duel has already begin,” said Cid. “But by all means, take all the time you need to gather yourself and prepare. Let me know when you’re ready.”

Brin wanted to sit down and sob. Cid? He had to fight Cid? He’d never seen him fight anyone; he had no idea what his moveset was. The only inkling he had was when he’d seen Cid execute that gangster. How was he supposed to counter that?

Well, if Cid wanted a fight, Brin would give it to him. He’d come too far to give in now. He didn’t waste Cid’s offer to take some time to prepare. Using the last dregs of his magic, he pulled glass from the ground and formed them into Mirror Men. He split his mind into five, so that each Mirror Man would have a conscious mind guiding it, all of them working with perfect coordination. 

His Mana was empty, but he pushed, giving as much power as he could to his weapons. “I’m ready.”

There was a tinkling sound like the ringing of a bell. A disorienting moment as his split minds all retreated and came back together in his body.

As soon as it began, it was over.

Cid was standing in front of him, sword pressed against his neck. Behind him, four glass heads split off their bodies and fell to the floor.

Cid smirked. “You asked before, who you might use as a measuring stick. I volunteer myself for that position.”

Brin’s mouth was suddenly dry. He didn’t respond.

“Well?” asked Cid.

“Well what?”

“Are you going to surrender?”

“I surrender,” Brin said numbly.

Alert! The Rite of the Crucible has ended.

You have failed to defeat all other members of your Lance.

Opponents defeated : 8/9

You have proven yourself and brought glory to your Order. Your honor is boundless this day. Knightly has grown.

Alert! You have upgraded Hide Status. 22 -> 25

Alert! You have upgraded the achievement: Knightly (Epic)

Knightly will now upgrade one of your Skills.

Athletic Training becomes Advanced Knightly Training

Advanced Knightly Training

Increases your ability to learn the duties of a knight, including combat, armor wearing, and riding.

+100% [Advanced Knightly Training] Skill growth

+3% increase to physical attribute growth rate per level of [Advanced Knightly Training]

Upgradeable.

Level up! 39 -> 40

+5 Strength +1 Dexterity, +2 Vitality, +2 Magic, +3 Mental Control, +1 Will, +2 free attributes.

You have two new Class Skills available. See the options now? Y/N

You have two free General Skill points. Spend them now? Y/N

That was an incredible advancement. If he was reading that right, he had basically just gotten [Riding] for free, without needing to spend a Skill point for it. Not to mention that he now had the combat learning Skill that had turned Govannon into such a monster.

But none of that mattered if he was still going to be arrested.

“The Crucible has ended and Brin has failed. But be not dismayed; I’m exceptionally proud of each and every one of you. Now, does anyone have anything to say before I render judgement?” asked Cid.

Govannon spoke up first. “Whatever else he is, Brin is a true man.”

Cowl nodded in agreement.

“Brin has the soul of a warrior,” said Brych.

“Brin is innocent,” said Meredydd.

“Agreed,” said Aeron.

“Not a warrior, though. A knight,” said Anwir.

“I once thought as you do, sir Caradawg. That he had a few Commoner tricks, but couldn't truly be called strong. I learned the truth many months ago, before I ever came to the Lance,” said Rhun.

“You all know what I think,” said Hedrek. “Brin stays with us.”

Cid said, “There you have it. If you mean to take my man, you’ll have to go through all of us. I have no doubt that you could. After all, with your strength, sir Caradawg, the only thing stopping you is your honor.”

Brin had to blink several times to try to catch how Caradawg was reacting to all this. His vision was blurry for some reason. It was so annoying that the Eveladis was still in the air, because he couldn’t do anything about it. He was sweating from the eyes; that was it. He was just sweaty and tired. He definitely wasn’t getting weepy because a bunch of idiots were stating the obvious. 

He blinked a few more times, and finally Caradawg’s face came into focus. The man looked a lot more solemn than he had when he arrived. All bluster was gone, and Brin thought he could finally see hints of the kind of man that knights would follow into battle.

“At the very least, I can say that Brin isu Yambul is not at all the way he was described to be. You there! The big one. Come, lend me your back,” said Caradawg.

When Hedrek realized Caradawg was talking to him, he walked forward and Caradawg spun him around. The [Grand Master] of the Order of the Broken Stone pulled a piece of paper and a pen from his storage bag, and then used the plate of Hedrek’s armor to write out a letter.

When he was done, he folded it up and handed it to Cid. “Please give this to sir Galan the instant you return back to your Order. Within, I have requested that Brin immediately be questioned by your Order’s [Interrogators]. I have also included an apology for my conduct today.”

He gave Brin a single nod, and then strode away. His armor shone in the sunlight as he retreated, showing not a single speck of dust.

His departure was like a dam breaking, and the people of the town rushed forward to celebrate the heroes of their town. Omhar got them all out of their armor to check their injuries. No one was more injured than Brin, and when he admitted that he had a Title that would heal his injuries on their own, Omhar had decided to use his limited magic to focus on the horses instead. Eneuaw took that as an invitation to dote on him instead, and always seemed to need to lean all over him while dressing his wounds.

Brin let the day happen, resting and recovering, and decided that he’d deal with his Skills and everything else later. He was excited to choose them, but his brain was feeling a bit weird after splitting his mind so much, so he decided to wait until he had a clear head to look at them.

They rested in town again that night, and departed the next day.

It wasn’t until they were far away from town, walking beside their horses, that Brin finally asked the question that was on his mind.

“Gurthcid, sir, I need to know. Why didn’t you surrender?”

“Because these things still mean something to me. I am the son of a Count; I had many paths open to me, but I chose to become a [Knight]. So no, I won’t surrender against your accusations when I know them to be accurate. Even if I’m the last person in the world to do so, I still care about the truth. You’re obviously an [Illusionist].”

Comments

“It’s the magic scars. Huge bonus to charisma,” said the Scarred One.

Kevin O'Malley

Not sure if this has been discussed before, but since illusions are lightwaves and sound is vibrations in air, could Brin learn to use Gamma rays and supersonic air blasts? Or to watch the infrared spectrum or feel vibrations in the air?

Andreas Kristensen

I think that was Miles fudging the evelatis. Otherwise it would be hard to create a silver bullet for everything illusionists can do, which is what it’s pitched as. Since Hog called it game over for Illusionists, you have to assume it works for all magic a pure illusionist can do, including pure light and sound magic. I’d like it if Brin actually spent time trying to figure it out though.

Douglas Lilley

With lasers, I kind of wonder how illusionary light magic is…

Kevin O'Malley

Illusionary Glassbound Knight

Kevin O'Malley

I’m not sure that has to be true. I’d be curious if Brin could overcome the evelatis (if he used his light magic inside his enchanted armor or through fiber-optic cables, maybe?). I kind of wish Brin would buy a bunch of evelatis’s to see if he can bypass some or all of the effects, similar to his training with the armor plate.

Douglas Lilley

You’re right that he primarily got Illusionist because he wanted magic. The thing is though, that Miles brought up the tech advantage that Brin has when combined with glass and light/sound. It would just be so disappointing if he left all that to pursue a class that was more traditionally powerful, especially since it’s the underdog class when it comes to magic, which makes it a worthy challenge for Brin.

Douglas Lilley

I genuinely wonder if he'll always be an illusionist. Half the time he feels more like a standard (if glass attuned) mage or martialist. Like the initial reasoning Brin chose illusionist was because he just wanted magic first and foremost right? With a little dash of seeing Hogg work his skills.

BubblyGhost

It's the scars, chicks dig scars. Lmao

BubblyGhost

@wanderer117 miles be like: First of all, lower your voice

bananaphone

I've been wondering if the conversation he's about to have with Cid is what'll be the catalyst for a class evolution. All of the other guys got Squire after becoming "fully dedicated to the Lance", and I can't imagine anything that'd solidify that an Illusionist has truly committed to being a knight more than admitting he's an Illusionist. It'd explain why the level 40 Skill selection got put off for a while, too.

Ferrin

It's more then just Evaladis. Not knowing illusions are in play is a massive tactical disadvantage. Once your opponents realizes you are an illusionist everything becomes much more difficult. And in a world with countless unknown information gathering abilities in play the best way to pretend not to know something is not to know it.

Hadriex

Was hoping to see the witch hunter again before Brin left.

Hadriex

I was thinking his next class might be something like Prismatic Knight or maybe even something like Prismatic Paladin of Solia. Certainly it will be a minimum of epic, but he needs to retain the magic aspect to justify the trip to the tower, if that is still a planned arc. A tower / mage training arc might be a little slow paced after he fights in a war though. So maybe he is headed another direction. If he were to go Paladin, or Knight for that matter, and Prismatic was in the name it probably does give away the illusionist abilities, unless he gains a way to do it that isn't countered by Eveladis, or perhaps at least gains some resistance to it. It might need to be some kind of unique class if it does have resistance to Eveladis.

Eric M

We also haven’t seen Brin fight against pure physical powerhouses before, except against Hedrick and Rhun. As someone said, knights beat mages beat mobs beat knights.

Kevin O'Malley

We haven’t seen Cid fight at all until now, he was always doing something else during the goblin fight. Now we know, he is a badass.

Kevin O'Malley

At some point he was taking to Hogg, and Hogg said something like, “Most people never get to level 60” about class upgrades.

Kevin O'Malley

This is more of a warrior culture thing, I think. They respect only physical strength and straightforward bravery. What could be less than a caster that depends entirely upon illusion and deception? Mages at least beat you by blasting you physically. Brin has always been the kind of mage that fights from up close, and uses illusions that lead to the truth as it were. Sort of like how the ancients thought of art, lies that exposed the deep truths.

Kevin O'Malley

I didn't see it before, but you make perfect sense. Brin IS becoming paladin-adjacent. And this is a bit meta, but as the mc it is a bit expected that he will get a legendary class before the end of the series.

Nil

Paladins (on Bog world) get self healing, which is what I was thinking of for Scared but healing. Battle Fury is a kind of generic tank / DPS power and maybe not Paladin specific. It would need a reflavoring light, Last Light, or Righteous Fury.

wanderer117

It is hilarious that Brin is unintentionally becoming a ladies man. One is a coincidence, two is a pattern, three is a trend.

Dakay

Throwing the kettle ball at him was amazingly appropriate.

Kevin O'Malley

Cid pretty much said it, not respecting the sanctity of the crucible would make it a lie. If the squad hadn’t opposed him it would have been meaningless. As it stands, Caradawg knows that something is up, but that it is over his head.

Kevin O'Malley

Battle Fury and Scarred but Healing are really not super Paladin like. He has spoken directly to at least two gods however and has blessings from at least one.

Kevin O'Malley

I am pronouncing it like the Shakespearean “enow” an archaic word for “enough”.

Kevin O'Malley

Nah, illusionist becomes less powerful the more who know about it. Better for only Cid to know

Nathan

The reason Brin demanded the Crucible was that Caradawg was demanding the "right" to take him into some secluded place within his order, and interrogate him. That extreme measure matches better with "traitor" than "illusionist".

Abbi

I see what you mean, but I'm almost envisioning more of a jedi route. Obviously not exactly a jedi, because mind powers, but spell knight-ish? Still paladin-esque, but not strictly Paladin.

Infamous.Goose

Honestly while reading, it felt not in sync with the story up to now. Even against much stronger opponents, Brin could always react if not keep up with them. Now here he is higher level, has a lot of extra stats with all of his achievements, which you never would get from just training and he still isn't even close to Sid. To me that just doesn't feel right. It would be fine if he loses, especially without mana and his illusions, but like this it just doesn't make any sense from what the rest of the story was up to now.

Tobias Nick

Now that’s the stuff! These were the fights I was hoping for in the last chapter. I do kind of wish Brin got to say the “Oh, I’m absolutely an illusionist” line at the end, but it does make way more sense with Cid calling him out. Hopefully he can come clean to the rest of the Lance and chuckle as they lose their minds at the realization that they got their butts handed to them, one by one, by an illusionist who couldn’t use his illusions, and is also younger than them.

Douglas Lilley

You are correct that Caradawg was accusing him of being an Arcaena spy, but the reason Brin demands the Crucible was the accusation that Brin was an illusionist. I think that’s also why Caradawg doesn’t let the spy accusation go, even though he apologizes for the way he handled the confrontation. It’s Prinash, so being accused of treachery is probably less insulting than being accused of not being a “true”man.

Douglas Lilley

Yep -- he showed himself to be a fair fighter deserving of his position in the Lance. Caradawg's claim is that he got there by trickery, using his illusionist powers. Clearly that isn't the case. @Blackjack: It's a battle of honour. Cid couldn't honourably surrender knowing he *is* an illusionist, whereas Hedrek could, because the evidence he observed says Brin isn't.

Nathan

More wordy, though strictly true. I think Cid's clarification in the next sentence makes his previous sentence more targeted/clear

Nathan

Typo: Baseball back => baseball bat

Nathan

Achievements really are the best source of power. [Knightly Training] is a pretty insane upgrade for Brin to stay relevant as a melee combatant when necessary I’m curious how much influence the gods have over skills/achievements. It definitely paints an interesting picture if we imagine someone behind the scenes pushing forward some of these skill evolutions!

Jentry Lange

so was I

Sam

I was expecting hom to go into class evolution at 40, especially since his Knightly went up a tier.

Hell 5pawn

I wanted Brin to say, “Oh no, I am totally an Illusionist.” but I guess it is important that he still keep it hidden due to the Eveladis weakness. I am glad Cid picked up on it though. Thank you for the most excellent chapter.

Kevin O'Malley

I actually put the name into an anagram website just in case Miles was trolling us haha It’s not an anagram of anything from what I saw!

Tom C

lol. BUSTED haha. Awful Cliff though. It’s a weekend too damn TFTC!

Tom C

I love that Cid still know it tbh

Andreas Kristensen

I got the name from DnD as a multiclass Paladin/Warlock. https://www.reddit.com/r/3d6/comments/13dengy/the_witch_knight/

Dakay

Witch knight sounds cool. Maybe Wyrd knight even. Spellblade seems most likely.

Halfcrzy

Oh my gosh, yup I re-read that. Says class skills, not 2 new classes available.

Halfcrzy

I really feel like Brin is going to get both a [Good] and [Evil] class for his options. I feel like [Witch Knight] is appropriate due to his [Witch] and [Knight] training. It would probably even be [Epic] if not [Legendary] just to really tempt him. I am thinking the other would be a [Spell Blade] or [Mage Knight].

Dakay

He didn’t get a new class. Just got some new class skills

Sam

Thank you!

Andrew

Nah, he got some new skills. Didn't get a class evolution

Sam

Thanks for the chapter :)

Lacey J.J.

Dude! How can you leave us on a cliff hanger for another week! He can evolve his class, I want to know so bad!

Halfcrzy

@John Koor Or the next time we see her she'll have her real name https://media1.tenor.com/m/HFSzdKD66AgAAAAC/what-nani.gif

wanderer117

Speaking of which, where did that name (not even gonna try lmao) come from? I can usually find etymology for the weirder names in this series, but I haven't been able to find anything for *that one*.

Ferrin

So she's never coming back! Rip Eneauw!

John Koor

Witches gain power in both direction. Brin could gain power over his lance by building up slights against him but he gains power to protect them by making them his. Eg Brin didn't slight his God Mother (The Great Witch something) but she gained power in the [Wyrd] by claiming Lumina was taking Brin away from her. Her claim over Brin was greater than Lumina's in the eyes of the [Wyrd].

wanderer117

Things Brin has that make him Paladin Like Know What's Real Warbound Battle Fury Battle Sense Scared but Healing Inspect (to discern the truth of things) Advanced Knightly Training Amazing situational awareness through his invisible eyes Prays every day Things in the story that might hint at Paladin or Paladin like class (eg Shining Glass Paladin) Lothar sees Brin as his twisted reflection. We know that Lothar is a broken doll pretending to be a Paladin, so it's twisted reflection would be... Brin took over the body of a child fated to be a paladin in some sort of rebalancing in the eyes of the gods. Arcanea became Arcanea when her coven defeated a Paladin. What would be more appropriate then her being defeated by a Paladin she accidentally created.

wanderer117

I seriously hope I never have to spell that name ever again.

Miles English

That was a great chapter. Poor Eneuaw left to pine away for her savior. I am glad she's gone though, because every time I saw that name my brain broke trying to mentally pronounce it.

John Koor

Definitely but it'll probably take forever and will be shortly before the ending right? I definitely think he is set up to be the counter underdog hero against the paladin and will be offered the class eventually

julian hu

The crucible’s purpose is to allow a knight to defend himself from dishonor. The act of fighting is what gives Brin the chance to show he has honour, and demonstrate skill in non-illusion magic. Therefore the squad is helping him out by putting up some resistance.

whistler

Any hints at paladin specifically? I don’t see how illusionist would lead there without a hefty detour. I do think we are going in a direction similar to that though.

whistler

How is he becoming a paladin. I don’t see brin ever going that route.

Adunn

Witches take power from being offended against others and Brin is almost doing anti-witch by choosing to be not offended by team

RJD

Yeah, that's fair. It was somewhat anticlimactic, especially since we haven't really seen Cid in combat before. It might've been fun for Cid to hold the Knight's Charge for a bit, just to see how Brin holds up when Cid doesn't press the "I win" button, but I get the feeling Cid just wanted the whole debacle to be over with as quickly as possible. Poor guy.

Ferrin

Fair point I guess the abruptness got me. It feels like after everything he’s been through he should have a chance against something like that. Though it makes sense.

Baconwargod

Nice! Also, good for it to finally be in the open with Cid. Wonder what will happen with that, though.

Lycaon

The chapter was simply great. The last 2 duels were the opposite of what I expected. Can't wait for next chapter.

Nil

Tyftc! Really liked the screen time for Cowl and Cid between this and last chapter. The entire framing of the Crucible more or less being the guys letting off some steam and seeing how far they've come in a relatively friendly way rather than being adversarial (sans Govannon, of course) was very enjoyable. I'm looking forward to the next set of chapters for sure. Cid seems like the kind of guy that Brin both could and would potentially want to speak more openly with. Good potential for character development over the next few conversations.

Ferrin

Seems like the 20th, 40th, etc levels are standard spots to get class upgrades. But upgrades can happen without level-ups or round level numbers, and it's possible to pass one without getting an upgrade. Eg I think most squire/knight upgrades in the Lance happened on levels in the teens or mid-20's, and Brin's rescuers got class upgrades as soon as they got Skill evolutions.

Wiggles1

Sure, Battle Fury doubles all of Brin's stats, but Knight's Charge triples Cid's. Plus he has four years worth of training and stat ups over Brin, a Class optimized for this exact circumstance, and (presumably, since he's a noble) a good enough pre-System Day spread to have some pretty solid stats himself. If Brin could use his Illusionist abilities, I think he'd stand a chance, but if Brin couldn't follow Hedrek's slower Knight's Charge, I don't think it'd make any sense for him to be able to keep up with Cid's.

Ferrin

Think that maybe: So no, I won’t surrender against your accusations when I know them to be accurate Should be: So no, I won’t surrender against your accusations when I know at least one of them to be accurate If only because he has no reason of suspecting Brin of being a spy

Sam

I actually absolutely agree. This was a weird switch of the stakes. It was my understanding that brin was fighting for all the accusations leveled against him, which was primarily that he was an agent for arcaena. Which was why I was so angry that most of the members of the lance decided to try and fight him for BS reasons. Like Rhun wanted to test himself against Brin, like dude, we can duel later when I'm not fighting for my life against an unjust arrest. Additionally, I find Cid to be a big fucking hypocrite that he seemed annoyed that others weren't surrendering, but then he decides to fight lol like what? Hedrek was the only one who got it. Furthermore, I find the entire switch at the end weird. If the ritual was to determine if brin was an illusionist, then by brin losing, that was proven true under the rules of the duel, and therefore he is subject to arrest. Emotionally I got whiplash, because if I was brin, I couldn't trust anyone in the lance anymore who decided to fight me. But he seems to be grateful to them...

Blackjack

Great chapter. Looking forward to seeing what is next

Sam

Tbh, brin should've expected this, he should've saved his mana for after cid did the charge then fought with everything when he was weakened. It would be risky, but he really needed to win.

Blackjack

Anyone else noticing how Brin is becoming a Paladin? Plus all the hints that he'll be a stronger Paladin because he took the class that built into it rather then jumping right into Paladin?

wanderer117

Knight's Charge is super OP in duels. It's weaknesses only kick in against groups or the dishonorable (eg Illusionist they get them to charge a fake target)

wanderer117

Everyone *says* that the accusation was that Brin's an illusionist. That's obviously not the case; the accusation was that he's working with Arcaena. Caradawg just took "he's an illusionist" to be sufficient evidence of "he's an agent of Arcaena who lured the goblins here". This in no way evidences anything about Brin being an illusionist (let alone a glassbound illusionist like he is), but it DOES disprove the actual accusation; he's stronger than any member of the lance except Cid, his direct commander. With actual backup - like even the goblins, before the broke due to the loss of the panther familiar but especially that panther familiar - he likely could've made up that gap. Hence, he isn't an agent of Arcaena, as he could've won this engagement for Arcaena if he was.

Abbi

MORE!!!!

Penned

Sure he has. We’ve seen him do one thing, and that was executing that one dude with huge power.

Adunn

TFTC! I mean... yeah. Cid had to have known. Very cool that he felt the need to uphold the rite because of his conviction. I bet Anshar would be pleased.

Karnevale

Yeah but to defeat brin in one move with full battle fury still feels inconsistent especially since he has a lower level. And I know level isn’t everything but still.

Baconwargod

Cid was the other knight besides hedrik, and was chosen to lead the lance over him.

Kevin Neely

I mean we all knew that Cid knew, Brin did too.

Adunn

LOL That's hilarious on Cid's part. He knows whats at play, knows he has good reason to hide himself. We've seen him flustered with Sir Galan and other aspects, but now that things are coming together in a way he feels is more understandable we get to see exactly why someone so young is in charge

Pariah

Thanks for the chapter

Coindragon

Is level 40 his new class?

Arkzs

Well that felt ….odd. I don’t know it doesn’t feel like we’ve had Cid built up as someone that could pull that off. Maybe just me but with the level and training disparity Brin even while tired should have been able to react to that. Maybe with split mind it just wasn’t possible.

Baconwargod

Thank you for the chapter!

Max W


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