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Book 4 - Chapter 39

Brin’s rewards were among the smallest in the Lance. Everyone else gained at least two levels, and the last two holdouts had finally hit [Squire]. Rhun was a level 30 [Protecting Squire], Anwir was a level 25 [Squire of Arrows], Aeron was a level 20 [Squire], Brych was a [Watchful Squire] at level 26, Meredydd was a level 24 [Squire of Arms], Cowl was a level 20 [Squire of Burdens], while Govannon had become a regular [Squire], also at level 20.

Brin asked Cid for a rundown on the Class names, and the First was surprisingly insightful. He said, “We can go over the full Skill list later, but the main thing to remember is that if the modifier comes after the Class, then it’s weaker, and if it comes before, it’s stronger.”

“What do you mean?”

“I mean, Anwir is really only a [Squire] when it comes to arrows, while Rhun is a full [Squire] but better when it comes to protecting. Or a [Glass Invocationist] is an [Invocationist] who’s particularly good with devices made of glass. Did you not know this about your Class?”

“No. What? That can’t be right,” said Brin.

“It’s true,” said Cid.

“Then what about [Magus of the Southern Steppe]?” asked Brin.

“To name a completely random example?” asked Cid with a crooked eyebrow.

“Exactly.”

“Your adoptive mother’s previous Class meant that she was only considered a [Magus] because of her heroism at the Southern Steppe. Outside of there, she would’ve been considered an above-average [Mage],” said Cid.

“And the Southern Steppe…”

Cid shook his head. “The area northwest of Gynll? So named because it was once the southernmost region of Olland?”

“Right,” said Brin. “I knew that.”

Cid shook his head again and stepped away to supervise the men. Brin was glad that the conversation had stayed on safe ground. Eventually they needed to talk about how Cid knew that Brin was an [Illusionist]. He had to have figured it out, right? But that conversation could happen later. For now, he should do what Cid was doing and focus on the men.

After the small army of knights from the Broken Stone had passed the town, they’d let the villagers out of the public house, and everyone had gotten right to work repairing the torn down homes. The men hadn’t seemed put out at all when they’d been tasked with helping rebuild, even though it was commoner work. In fact, spirits were high. There was a camaraderie in the Lance now that couldn’t be faked, and for the first time, Brin was really starting to see this group as a real team.

The villagers had been desperate to show their worth to the knights after contributing nothing during the actual fighting, and Cid had quietly told the Lance to let them show off a little. The knights mostly carried stones to and fro, and they made a show of being impressed by the Common Classes’ ability to rebuild the town. Brin pitched in with his magic, replacing windows in the public house with actual glass.

Everyone was working except for Hedrek. Brin had noticed that an armguard had fallen off during the fighting, no doubt due to being fastened incorrectly. Brin had told Hedrek to go fix his armor and not return until everything was done correctly.

But things were different now. Before the battle, Brin had seen Hedrek as a liability, but now he saw Hedrek the way that Cid did, as an exemplary [Knight] who just had a few small foibles. He watched with his Invisible Eyes as Hedrek slinked away.

Surprisingly, Hedrek did exactly as Brin had told him. He found an area behind one of the last still-standing homes where no one could see him, and worked on the strap on his armguard. Brin could see the problem right away, it needed to wrap around behind or there’d be too much length and it wouldn’t tighten correctly. Hedrek worked on it for fifteen minutes, trying to figure it out and failing. Eventually, he tied it in an ugly knot that was definitely going to slip loose and then walked back to the Lance.

He let the men think that he was avoiding work because he was too important for commoner work, which immediately made Govannon drop what he was doing and announce that he was also too tired for this.

Brin went straight to Cid, copying Hedrek’s technique and seeking privacy behind a building.

“Hedrek is stupid,” said Brin.

Cid sighed. “Do we have to do this today of all days? We’ve been over this.”

“No, I mean that Hedrek is a dum-dum.”

“Brin, despite what you may think, Hedrek is–”

“You’re not listening! Arg!” Brin didn’t think that Hedrek was actually stupid, but he had some kind of learning disability. Dyslexia maybe? Could dyslexia look like this? Or something else? Sadly, he hadn’t really learned much on this topic in his old life so he couldn’t make a diagnosis, and in Bogworld you were either stupid or simple; there weren’t a lot of other words for it. “Let me try again. Hedrek speaks well, which is why I didn’t see it before. He’s actually pretty smart in a lot of ways, but he’s just not good at things. He’s not forgetting to tie his boots because he’s lazy or rebellious; he’s trying and failing.”

“What are you saying?” asked Cid.

“We just need to show him how to do things more than once. A lot more than once,” said Brin.

“Really? You think that will work?”

“I do.”

One thing about Cid was that he was a thinker, but he also knew when to act. He went directly to Hedrek, pulled him aside, and demonstrated how to tie the armguard strap correctly. Then he had Hedrek do it. Hedrek was slow, and fumbling his fingers maybe out of nervousness, but after being shown how to do it, he got it right. Cid slapped Hedrek on the shoulder and left without a word.

Hedrek stayed behind and practiced five more times. When he finally rejoined the Lance, there was a smile on his face and he joined in the work with a gusto.

“That’s really all it took. I can’t believe how easy that was,” Cid confided to Brin.

He had to agree. The Hedrek problem was figured out. Now if only they could do something about Govannon, he might actually have a decent Lance here.

As they worked, Brin watched through Invisible Eyes as the twelve Lances from the Order of the Broken Stone descended on the seven hundred goblins. Their journey ended up taking a lot less time than Brin had originally guessed. The horses ran at a full gallop the entire way and seemed to cross ground faster than the hooves were carrying them, no doubt due to some kind of leadership Skill of their commander. He hadn’t met anyone with a real commander Class before but the few history books he’d flipped through all acted like they were the only thing that mattered.

The knights crashed straight through the middle of the goblin horde, breaking their morale in one charge, and then spent the rest of their time running down the goblins as they fled. Any attempts by the [Chieftains] to rally the troops were cancelled by Skills from the knights, and the strongest ones were singled out for a quick death by way of a [Knight’s Charge].

The fighting was quick but the aftermath was slow, and they chose to camp out in the field rather than travel home in the dark.

They didn’t expend any noticeable Skills on the return journey, so they didn’t get to Dustrim until well after noon. When they did approach, most of them opted to simply ride past the town without entering.

They were close enough that everyone could see their shiny, pristine armor, enchanted and made of rare metals. It was a far cry from Brin’s Lance, who wore mostly simple steel that was now bloody, dented and gouged. Comparing the two, Brin could only say that his Lance looked much better.

Only two [Knights] approached the town. Their commander, named Caradawg, and a man in black leather and a wide-brimmed hat. No, that wasn’t a [Knight] at all. That was a [Witchhunter] by the name of Mal Onion. Now why would he be bringing a [Witchhunter]?

Brin walked through town and found the home of Eneuaw Pairs, the young woman that the [Witch] had used as a decoy. She had his armor; she’d insisted on cleaning it for him. For whatever reason, she thought that Brin was her personal savior and had suggested all sorts of ways that she could repay him. He’d refused most of her suggestions, and not because she wasn’t pretty. 

She was beautiful now, in a very female-gaze sort of way. Puffy lips, a small nose, sharp, pointed eyes, and perfectly monochromatic skin. He didn’t know what she’d looked like before, but he knew that she didn’t look anything like her parents and that she definitely needed something to do to keep herself occupied and not dwell on what had happened to her. So he let her clean his armor.

“Oh, but I’m not finished with it yet!” she said when he arrived.

“I know, but I may need it soon,” said Brin.

“Then just one more moment,” said Eneuaw.

She actually took ten more minutes, furiously scrubbing every inch of steel with a wire brush and rubbing the cloth portions with a rag. When she was done Brin thanked her, offered payment which she refused, and then donned it all at once with his magic. That elicited a gasp of amazement from the girl. "A knight, and magical, too? Is there anything you can't do?"

Brin fidgeted with his armor, trying to hide how much he enjoyed the praise. "I think I'll find out soon. Sir Caradawg is here, and if I'm not mistaken he's a bit upset with me."

"But you are Mistaken, sir!" Eneuaw said.

Brin grinned. "Nice."

Eneuaw blushed and fumbled with her words enough that Brin started to think the pun might've been unintentional. "What... what I meant was, surely sir Caradawg will know by now of your bravery defending this town. I'm sure he means to reward you!"

"I hope you're right," said Brin.

He hoped she was, but knew she wasn't. That wasn't the way his life worked. Lothar had spent plenty of time with sir Caradawg; he couldn't expect to have a friend there.

No, he needed to prepare for the worst. The Lance was mending, like a shattered plate mended with glass. It was the perfect time for some new hammer to rise up and smash it again. But Brin knew one thing about glass still warm from the ovens: it was a lot less fragile than it looked.

This was going to be tricky, but he thought he could turn this to his advantage.

He and the rest of the Lance found their way to the front of the town to meet Caradawg and Mal.

Caradawg had a wide face, and was probably a bit portly when not held tight in his armor. His moustache fit so well in with his helmet's faceplate that at first Brin thought it was part of the piece. [Inspect] didn't tell Brin a level, but it did give a Class. [Grand Master].

It felt a little strange to not salute such a senior officer, but they weren't in the same organization. Instead, Cid stepped forward to shake hands.

"Sir [Knight]," said Caradawg. "You are a credit to your Order. You and your men fought bravely and have done us a great service in defending this town, which may well have been lost if not for you. You have our gratitude. Know that the Order of the Broken Stone's doors will always be open to the Order of the Long Sleep."

Brin didn't think that Cid would accept any kind of monetary reward, and Caradawg wouldn't offer. That wasn't the way between knights. Instead, it was honor for honor; the Order of the Broken Stone would come next time that the Order of the Long Sleep called for aid, which was worth more than their weight in gold.

"I thank you, sir, for your words, but I cannot say that we did anything more or less than our duty," said Cid.

"Well put, and truly spoken," said Caradawg.

"It might be that you can settle a matter of curiosity for me, however. How is it that such a large group of goblins can creep so near to your territory?"

Caradawg pursed his lips so that his mustache bulged out even further. "A grim question, and a good one. I fear that to begin to answer that question I must turn to a more uncomfortable topic."

"In that case, then please forget I asked."

"I cannot, though it pains me. Indeed, I impugn my own honor in bringing this up."

"There's really no need," said Cid.

"There is a need. I must sully myself and my honor by casting doubt upon a member of your Lance," said Caradawg.

"If it sullies your honor to say these things, then please say nothing," said Cid.

"I must. I would sully my honor more to stay quiet. Yes, I have accusations to lay at the feet of the one they call Brin isu Yambul," said Caradawg. "My accusations begin with the manner in which he violated our hospitality. Sneaking around and spying."

Brin could almost admire the subtlety with which the [Witches] had woven this web. Had Lothar put Caradawg up to this? If so, when? Or had it been something else, or a combination of things?

Brin spoke up. "I have no interest in any secrets of the Order of the Broken Stone. My purpose in sneaking was to prevent spying. I swear. Fetch Lothar if you don't believe me; he'll know I'm speaking the absolute truth."

"I... don't need assistance in telling truth from a lie," said Caradawg. He rubbed his nose. "Putting that aside. Tell him your grievance, Master Onion."

Mal the [Witchhunter] seemed to preen under the attention of so many eyes, both from the Lance and the villagers who were starting to gather. He strutted a bit as he walked a couple steps forward, swishing his long overcoat like a cape.

"The rumors and your suspicions were correct. He has a Skill of Wyrd. A [Witch] Skill. It's likely that he once had an evil Class."

There were gasps from the villagers.

"What? Come on! I have a [Witch] detecting Skill that I got from killing so many [Witches]! You of all people should know what I'm talking about, Mal!"

Mal grinned. "I withdraw my accusations. How many [Witches] have you killed?"

"Let me think. Let me think. Three? Four, maybe. We didn't finish the one we saw yesterday, though."

Mal's eyes sparkled in delight. "There was really a [Witch] here, then?"

Brin leaned forward, matching Mal's intensity. "A strong one. Maybe even a [Great Witch]. Her blood is still on the floor in the public house. We killed a familiar, too. It was a cat."

"A cat? For real?"

"Yeah. Its body is still there unless Marksi ate it already. Marksi, can you show this nice man that evil monster you killed?"

Marksi skittered around from Cowl's feet where he'd been hiding and approached proudly. He waved at Mal to follow.

"A [Witch]-hunting dragon? What is your life? Switch me places!" said Mal.

Brin glanced at Caradawg who was watching this with a darkening glower. "I wish I could." He grabbed Mal’s shoulder before the [Witch Hunter] could leave. “Hey, there’s a girl here who got her face altered by the [Witch]. Can she be returned to normal?”

“What? I don’t know. Lead the way, little dragon!”

When Mal departed, Caradawg cleared his throat again. "In light of the situation, I would bring this boy Brin back to my Order for questioning."

"You have no authority to arrest my man. You have no grounds, either, not with the scant reasoning you've brought forth," said Cid.

"I have other reasons. Prepare your heart, for this will certainly shock you: Brin isu Yambul is a liar and a fraud. He stands as a sneak and a skunk among true men, though he is no man among men himself. This boy is an [Illusionist]."

And there it was. 

He kept his physical eyes fixed on Caradawg, projecting confidence, but his Invisible Eyes were on the faces of his Lance. He was usually pretty good at reading the faces of people he knew well, but for some reason, right now he couldn't tell what they were thinking. Was that surprise? Anger? Fear or suspicion? Hatred? Ambivalence? He really didn't know.

"What nonsense. We don't need to listen to this," said Cid. Brin wasn't so sure.

"I fear you must. I believe that in light of this and his other lies, it’s likely that Brin was responsible for luring this group of goblins here, or that he was at least coordinating with the one who did. I will take him into my Order to ascertain the truth. If we determine that he is no agent of Arcaena, we will of course release him with our apologies.

There was no other way, then. Brin absolutely couldn't get arrested and questioned with truth-finding Skills, not when there was a chance they'd learn what he knew about Lothar.

"A terrible accusation has been laid at my feet," said Brin. "I demand the Rite of the Crucible."

Comments

I think he has some sort of truth sensing skill - at least related to Witch detection. So when Brin said his Wyrd skill was for hunting witches and that checked out, Mal instantly switched him from 'threat' to 'fellow witch killer.'

Jessica Pepe

I guess the first example did have them fighting intra-squad, with the accuser and accused both being members. I’m sure the rules get explained here shortly!

Jentry Lange

This is why all of the best witches are lawyers.

Quex

I can only come up with childish vaguely homophobic 90s era variants. You were off by a letter (u vs a) but "u wear a penis" is valid if you grant the 'u'. The plot er.. thickens by the day. "pies unaware" "a rape? unwise." "nausea wiper" "supine. aware"

Monadologist

Wouldn’t he be fighting the man giving the accusation? I might be misremembering.

whistler

My impression was that Witch Hunters just want to kill Witches, and don't really deviate from that single-minded pursuit much. Their Class has a pretty heavy influence on their personality (I think this was brought up WAY back in book 2 when Brin was offered a way to get it). So Brin having a Wyrd detection skill from encountering Witches (which Mal presumably has as well) is good enough for Brin to be considered a comrade, and is also why he immediately buggered off when he heard there might still be a Witch in the area. He's got bigger fish to fry. As for the Grand Master, Lothar has either stated or implied that Brin is a spy for Arcaena. Ignoring someone like Lothar telling you that there's a spy right under your nose and *not* investigating it would be dereliction of duty, regardless of what Brin has done to defend Dustrim. If anything, the fact he came to bring Brin in with just Mal rather than showing up with an entire honor guard packed with Eveladis shows there's probably at least a little bit of doubt in his mind about the situation.

Ferrin

Didn't they kill a witch his beast mom lead them to during their travels to prove she was in his side.

Rani

Really hope Brin has a plan fleshed out beyond beating up his teammates in a panic to “prove his innocence” to a random unaffiliated Order. Cid seemed to be handling that situation alright so far, so drastic escalation so fast is a little suspect. Do they all fall under an umbrella governance, or are they just linked by general purpose and name? It’s emphasized that Cid greets as an equal, separate party. Curious if this is a ploy into the Wyrd somehow, strengthening an argument preemptively.

Jentry Lange

Now comes the most important part of [Team Building]: Lying to figures of authority!

Jentry Lange

Your mind works in mysterious ways Macronomicon

1536539

Agreed. Mal switched to best bud in a way that felt strange. Ok, we're buds now. Then why didn't you stay to give air support for the illusionist fiasco? If you're trying to screw me over, ok, but suddenly we're friends because we both hate witches, but you ditch me to get dragged in and interrogated?

Matt

The interaction with Mal felt really weird and forced to me. Like he just accepted what Brin said with no hesitation and instantly treated him as a long list friend. Have they met before and I am just forgetting? Also wasn’t Brin the one who sent an image back to warn the knights about the goblins in the first place. You would think they would be apologizing and thanking him. Or at least bring it up in conversation first. But the grand master went right to accusations based on nothing. All of these conversations just felt really off.

1FantasyFanatic

well first switch me places is something people actually say colloquially... second Logrus meant that Mal is probably also a foreigner, as seen by his name being of a different style than everyone else.

MagicWafflez

it's not a medieval setting though. it's another world, and they're not speaking english. would him saying Verdad? sound jarring? they ha e psychologists and indoor plumbing and movies. they just are also inexorably connected to classes too.

MagicWafflez

This story is one of the few that I read and think "the best is yet to come." It keeps building, and that is a great quality to have. Because of that, it is also the only isekai story that genuinely makes me want to try my hand at writing an isekai.

Infamous.Goose

if knights are buried in their armor, that could be a way to convince a piece of armor to fulfill it's destiny as a symbolf of martyrdom, using the Wyrd.

Macronomicon

It's also an anagram of; "aware!, a penis" She could be a trap.

Saltymen

Bryn isn't talking, Mal is. So we're reading how Bryn understood the phrase?

wanderer117

I thought the poor English was purposeful, representing a non-native speaker (like Brin's played up accent)

Logrus

I think it's because Mal's character has many layers.

Wiggles1

Yeah, and she’s an Arch Mage now. It would be weird if she jumped 2 classes in a year.

Douglas Lilley

Yeah, I think she’s a witch too. Brin’s know-what’s-wyrd only picks up on the active use of the wyrd, so as long as she doesn’t use the wyrd, she’s hidden. I’m like 75% sure that the familiar was hers and that she and the grand witch set everything up to move suspicion off her in the event that the Lance got the upper hand in the initial confrontation.

Douglas Lilley

Ahhh thanks @wanderer it seemed like something we had seen before but couldn’t remember

Tom C

Great chapter

Nil

Mal’s definitely a brown coat!

K

Last chapter Cid saw him go invisible without even bothering to drink his potion and was pretty cynical about the potion coverstory when he first heard it.

Monadologist

"Eneuaw Pairs" is an anagram of "arise up anew" Given her fresh start that feels deliberate.

Monadologist

Nope, it's his own lance. If an entire lance of knights think he's innocent he must be right? Solid True Man Prinnash thinking. Literally might makes right as judged by other True Men. Cid does call it a barbaric tradition so it's probably from an even more brutal time in the past.

wanderer117

Question Brin says that Cid figured out he was an illusionist but when did say that? I thought Cid called him a invocationist

Rani

Will Brin have to fight his lance? That doesnt seem very logical, surely he will fight knights from this other order

Gorane

Pls more

Adunn

A full list of the lance as of right now Knight lvl 32 - Cid (prime) Knight lvl 32 - Hedrek Trueworth Glasser > Glassbound illusionist lvl 39 - Brin (second) Rogue > Watchful Squire lvl 26 - Brych Porter > Squire of Burdens lvl 20 - Cowl Smith > Armsman > squire of arms lvl 24 - Merdydd Page > Squire lvl 20 - Govannon Boal Hunter > Squire of Arrows lvl 25 - Anwir Warrior > Squire lvl 20 - Aeron Flint Warrior > Protecting Squire lvl 30 - Rhun

Gorane

The "for real?" is a little jarring in this medieval setting from someone other than Brin

Kendelle Trotter

Anyone else concerned about Eneuaw Pairs? She's clearly been heavily changed by the wyrd and now she's super helpful and doing things that could put Bryn in her debt. Maybe no just an innocent victim but a pre-witch? Or a familiar? Or am I just being paranoid?

wanderer117

I think our author is just hungry when he writes. One blacksmith went by Meaty, and the other was some play on kartoffel (the German word for potato). Now we have the onion. I’m waiting for Gravy to be introduced.

Bobito

I'm wondering if it's an Onion Knight refence. Either to Game of Thrones, where Mal would be the only sane man surrounded by honor bound idiots, or Dark Souls, where Mal is some kind of tragic character.

wanderer117

"A [Witch]-hunting dragon? What is your life? Switch me places!" said Mal. suggested edit "A [Witch]-hunting dragon? What is your life? Switch places with me!" said Mal.

wanderer117

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/69512/bog-standard-isekai/chapter/1999265/book-4-interlude-gurthcid

wanderer117

Butcher and Siphani from Hammon's Bog. The unnamed witch helping monster mom near Black cliff, probably the witch spy with the wisp familiar but I don't think that was ever confirmed. And his bio-monster-mom as the maybe 4.

wanderer117

The interlude with Cid https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/69512/bog-standard-isekai/chapter/1999265/book-4-interlude-gurthcid

wanderer117

We've seen a trial by crucible. Bryn fights each member of his lance starting with the Gov and ending with Cid until he wins, surrenders or dies. If the lance member think's he's innocent they surrender rather than fighting him.

wanderer117

I don't think he killed Balbi the [Laundress]. Maybe he's giving himself partial credit for killing his godmother as well? Or the undead miner guy?

Wiggles1

Thank you!

Andrew

What is it with potential Witchhunters and crazy names ? Scar the Mistaken and Mal Onion ?

Hypnotical

Also: two holdouts Should be: three holdouts Gov, the warrior and the hunter are still with their original classes. Additionally: Lumina was simply a [Magus of the Southern Step] not a high magus Another thing: Brins pretend class is [Glass invocationist]

Sam

Thanks for the chapter, but that cliff hanger was cruel

Sam

Maybe he is counting his fish mom

Sam

Yep. Before brin was in the lance. Ended with 2 dead in the lance

Kevin Neely

Trial by crucible - gotta either be some sort of physical test or a fight between accuser and accused? TFTC!

Tom C

Did he kill the one that was a laundry person?

Tom C

Have we seen this trial of the crucible before? It sounds vaguely familiar

Obran

He establishes a strong reason in the previous 2 paragraphs, plus, demanding the secrets of everyone Brin has been associated with, as he does, is rather clearly seeking a war - Brin doesn't want that; at the least, he wants Arcaena taken down. (Plus, there's the mention of the men appearing to doubt him, so he can't be sure everybody will stand behind him on the matter...)

Abbi

The Trial of Trially Triles!

Kevin O'Malley

It in *no way* matters if Caradawg is an agent of Arcaena. Brin would have the stronger case here if he made that one. And it's extremely clear Caradawg doesn't care about the truth of the matter, quite frankly - so he has no way to prop things up there, either.

Abbi

A really great chapter. I feel like Brin has gone from about twenty to a hundred really fast. Unless he said that for a reason which I think is likely.

Nomad

... "With his determination to sow conflict within the coalition, Caradawg is obviously an agent of Arcaena."

Abbi

Learning disability HedriK! Yes! Bring your weak witch shit at Brin, he’s killed more witches than youv’e had hot meals.

Kevin O'Malley

Which [Witches] did he kill? There was the butcher lady, the girl who was wearing her mom, and Brin's mom was kind of a [Witch] still. Who am I forgetting?

Wiggles1

In short: by saying that he demands the Illusionist by virtue of being an Illusionist - even coated in such foolishness as "may of led the goblins here" - he is in *effect* demanding the secrets of everyone and everything Brin has been associated with. Given Brin's mum, that's downright tantamount to a declaration of war in its own right.

Abbi

That's... Caradawg *probably* shouldn't be seeking a war so eagerly, I'd say. Sure, the stuff about Lothar that should be exposed to as few people as possible. But also, I seem to recall him knowing some of his home kingdom's more general secrets too? And, like - Illusionists are almost certainly better, on paper, for that sort of thing than rogues. After all, rogues are just simply kinda hidey in general, whereas Illusionists are all about choosing what is seen or not seen - or in other words, Illusionists are likely to play nicer with a secret that is meant to be known to a few, especially if that circle shifts over time, and especially if that circle is meant to be seen around... such as in the inner court of a kingdom or most of the knightly orders.

Abbi

Thanks for the chapter :)

Lacey J.J.

Thanks for the chapter

Coindragon

Cruel

luxrus


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