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Beyond Worlds: Mis-taken Hero Ch. 10

A couple of small changes in this chapter concerning names.

In the comments of the last chapter, I mentioned a possible name change for the receptionist and decided to make that official. Li is now Lin for little more than the sake of sanity while editing. Word and Grammarly both seem to ignore two-letter words).

While writing this chapter, I kept spelling Beri's name Berri. When I went to change it, I realized that I like the look of Berri a lot more (Beri kept conjuring images of beryllium in my head. It's a beautiful metal, but didn't feel like it fit the curvy and lusty dog-girl). I'll go back and change the previous chapters at a later date.

I'm not sure how this appears to members, but if you see a price next to the title, that doesn't apply to you. It only affects non-members and unlocks that particular post for them.

Lastly, Patreon is still pushing pretty hard for everyone to switch to subscriptions instead of per-creation since international iOS users can't join unless it's a subscription (because Apple is a bunch of money-grubbing dicks). Your thoughts on this would be appreciated.

I have a few more pages of the next TRC chapter to write and some editing, but I should have it out later tonight.

Enjoy!

-Blu

Comments

I mixed up Beryllium with Bismuth when I said beautiful metal. Beryllium is just toxic unless in a gem form (Emerald = Beryllium aluminum silicate)

BluDraygn

Using the phone's browser would probably suffice. That said, if you might get more Patrons by switching, it doesn't sound like a bad idea.

CG

Im not on Apple, but get them to buy on pc? Lol

Light Archon


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