Lord of the Glass Desert Ch. 50
Added 2024-12-29 04:04:03 +0000 UTCA bit intense imho.
Maybe too intense, considering this will be the first chapter of a new book eventually?
Writing from the perspective of a piece of trash is never easy, especially when said piece of trash's value of other people (particularly women) is so far removed from my own. But it makes watching them get their comeuppance all the sweeter.
Let me know your thoughts in the comments.
-Blu
Edit: Removed "Earlier that day..." From the end of the chapter
Comments
I really like the brief recaps of the present characters. That can be really important in the beginning of a new book for readers that only read book-by-book instead of by-chapter, and way too few webnovel authors remember to do that.
Qahlz
2024-12-31 03:26:59 +0000 UTCNo, it certainly will not. lol However, if Kal can get his ass in gear, this may end up being the beginning of the final true "Lord of The Glass Desert"
BluDraygn
2024-12-29 20:45:39 +0000 UTCSince this is supposed to be the next book, I assume it won’t be “Lord of the Glass Desert Ch 50”? The writing is good. As the first chapter of a new book, the gap between ch49 and this one makes sense.
Carcharias
2024-12-29 19:49:31 +0000 UTC
