Smoking Hypnosis Season 2 EP.15
Added 2025-11-04 11:30:00 +0000 UTCHello dear subscribers! Episode 15 has been released. While writing this episode’s scenario, I spent too much time revising it, which made the schedule extremely tight. Since starting my Fanbox series, I don’t think I’ve ever been this pressed for time. Because of that, work on Episode 16 also began later than usual. Normally I take a 2–3 day break after finishing an episode, but this time I had to jump straight into the November schedule without any rest. I’ve learned an important lesson — I really shouldn’t add new scenes at the last minute. Because of that, my replies to your comments will be a bit delayed, and my work routine got completely disrupted, which also affected my condition. Maintaining one’s health is a basic duty for a creator, and I feel quite sorry about that. The WIP for Episode 16 is planned to be uploaded on the evening of the 13th. If time runs out, it might first go up as an uncolored version, and I’ll reupload the fully colored version on the 14th or 15th. Thank you so much for the warm support you gave to Episode 14! I’ll do my best to repay you with even better work. 亲爱的订阅者们，大家好！ 第15话已经公开了。 这次在编写剧情时花了太多时间，导致整体进度非常紧张。自从开始在Fanbox连载以来，好像从未像这次这样被时间追着跑。 因此，第16话的制作也比平时晚了些。原本我会在交稿后休息两三天，但这次连一天都没休息，就直接进入了11月的工作安排。 我从这次经历中学到了一个教训——以后不能再这样临时增加剧情了。因为这样不仅导致回复读者留言变慢，也让我的作业节奏完全被打乱，连身体状况都受到影响。保持状态其实是创作者的基本功，实在感到惭愧。 第16话的WIP预计会在13日晚上上传， 如果时间实在不够，可能会先上传未上色的版本， 等到14日或15日再更新为正式上色版。 非常感谢大家对第14话的热情支持！ 我一定会用更好的作品来回报大家！ 구독자 여러분 안녕하세요! 15화가 공개되었습니다. 이번 에피소드 시나리오를 쓰다가 시간을 너무 많이 허비하는 바람에 일정이 너무 촉박해졌습니다. 팬박스 연재를 시작하고 지금처럼 시간에 쫓겼던 적은 없었던 거 같아요. 덕분에 16화 작업도 평소보다 늦게 시작했습니다. 원래는 원고를 마감하고 2,3일 정도 휴식을 취하는데, 이번엔 하루도 쉬지 못하고 바로 11월 일정으로 돌입했습니다. 앞으로는 이렇게 급하게 시나리오를 추가하면 안된다는 교훈을 얻었습니다ㅠ 독자분들의 댓글에 답변하는 것도 늦어지고, 저의 루틴이 완전히 꼬여서 컨디션도 저하되고... 몸 관리는 작가의 기본 소양인데 참 면목이 없습니다. 16화 WIP은 13일 저녁에 업로드될 예정이지만, 시간이 정말 부족할 경우, 먼저 채색되지 않은 버전을 업로드하고 14일이나 15일에 밑색 버전을 업데이트할 수도 있습니다. 14화에 뜨거운 성원을 보내주셔서 대단히 감사합니다! 꼭 좋은 작품으로 보답하고 싶습니다. 購読者の皆さま、こんにちは！ 第15話が公開されました。 今回のエピソードはシナリオ作業に時間をかけすぎてしまい、スケジュールがかなり逼迫してしまいました。 Fanboxで連載を始めて以来、ここまで時間に追われたのは初めてかもしれません。 その影響で第16話の制作開始もいつもより遅れてしまいました。 普段なら原稿を締め切った後、2〜3日ほど休むのですが、今回は一日も休まず11月の作業に突入しました。 今回のことで、「急にシナリオを追加してはいけない」という教訓を得ました。 読者の皆さまのコメントへの返信も遅れ、作業リズムが完全に崩れて体調も落ちてしまい…… 体調管理は作家としての基本なのに、本当に申し訳なく思います。 第16話のWIPは13日の夜にアップ予定ですが、 もし時間が足りない場合は着色前のバージョンになるかもしれません。 14日か15日に着色版を再アップします。 第14話に温かいご声援をいただき、本当にありがとうございました！ これからもより良い作品で恩返ししたいと思います。 ※ ¡Ya está disponible la versión en español! ------------------------------Download link------------------------------- 1. Google Drive https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/11XA_3PYTnGXGSOX84En_x82KCPPJwbu3
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작가님. 제가 작가님 작품을 시즌별로 병합해서 한개의 파일로 가지고 있는데,이번 회차는 pdf 병합을 하려고 하니까 비밀번호가 걸려있다고 뜨거든요. 혹시 병합이 안되게 비번을 거신 어떤 이유가 있는건가요?
chung6921
2025-12-03 15:21:47 +0000 UTCWhile there are high-ranking officials who cooperate with the cartel and receive slaves, they are not the majority, nor do they have enough power to control the entire government. However, they can provide high-level information to the cartel. Before Alex took control of the police station, there were no police officers with connections to the cartel within the station. Therefore, there are still no police officers who have been bribed by Alex's superiors.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-18 00:04:04 +0000 UTCIs the cartel actively infiltrating government organisations and institutions? If so, is there a possibility that the police station already had corrupted members before Alex took it over? Or now, after his takeover has the cartel re-corrupted a few of the police members to keep an eye on his actions? I mean, a cartel which deals with such a drug how do you know that those you have corrupted haven't been corrupted by a different cartel member?
Ruz
2025-11-17 11:04:43 +0000 UTCye it would be a fresh start
Sam Benson
2025-11-13 16:43:41 +0000 UTCYou mean the rosemary that appeared last time, right?
Dr. Stein
2025-11-13 11:02:11 +0000 UTCはい. 私もそのような場面を想像しています. カレンがハヤトに対抗する組織を一人で粉砕してしまう...
Dr. Stein
2025-11-13 11:01:43 +0000 UTCafter this finished you might start a new manga using military female officer a fresh start and new idea to explore and setting for the reader
Sam Benson
2025-11-12 22:59:20 +0000 UTC花蓮の極悪化、悪堕ちメイク、刺青、喫煙に期待です。対立する組織の人間を平気で殺戮する残虐な性格になってほしいです
かみら
2025-11-12 20:06:13 +0000 UTCスミレの二面性も素敵ですね。 有能な警察官として表向きの治安は抑え、敵対組織は権力を利用して潰し、一方でハヤトのカルテルには便宜を図る。 ハヤトのカルテルを告発しようとした善意の市民が洗脳されていったり、カルテルの一員に取り込まれて行くのは興奮しますね。 堕落した女性警察官たちが勤務外ではハヤトのクラブで売春婦として働いているならば、性犯罪者は良い金蔓になる客ですから、留置されている間に自分の虜にしてしまうのではないでしょうか。 性犯罪者はお金を持っていなさそうですが、カルテルや警察の情報網なら、金になる危ない仕事も斡旋できそうですし。 洗脳された女性警察官たちがクラブの売春婦として働かず、ただ堕落した警察として暗躍し続けるのならば、性犯罪者は彼女たちにとって仕事の中のレクリエーションでしょうね。 取り調べと称して、好きなことをやって性欲を発散させる。もちろん性犯罪者側にとっても楽しみは大きいですし。 その性犯罪者がカルテルの人間ならば、基本的には女性警察官たちよりも上位の存在ですから、熱心にご奉仕するのでしょうけど。 そんな勝手な想像をしてしまいました。 続きが楽しみです！
inaba
2025-11-12 06:41:04 +0000 UTC描いていただく内容をそのままありがたく拝読させていただくだけですので、以下はあくまでひとりの読者の空想としてお聞きください。 洗脳後のカレンは最初こそ仲間たちの嘲笑を受けますが、やがて悪として覚醒すると伺いました。 そうであれば、意志も格闘も強い正義の警察官をちょうど反転させた、意志も格闘も強い悪の警察官としてスミレの指揮どおりに暗躍し、またハヤトから命令を受ければ警察の仕事から離れて工作活動や暗殺を行うエージェントになると思われます。 ハヤトのカルテルの紋章が蛇ならば、カレンのそうした２つの働きは、双頭の蛇の刺青がイメージにぴったり合いそうです。 蛇を離れて刺青を考えるならば、孤高な狼でしょうか。 いずれにしてもカレンの場合、堕落して売春婦の文化や意匠に感化されると言うより、生まれ変わった自分のあるべき姿を刺青として体に刻み込む、強い戦闘的意思の表れのような気がします。 衣服もまた単に扇情的で卑猥なものに憧れるのではなく、女としての強さを感じさせるようなボンテージなキャットスーツでしょうか。 そして大きく開いた背中に双頭の蛇の刺青、大きく開いた胸の谷間にナイフの刺青などがあり、それを他者に威嚇として見せつける攻撃性もまた備わっているのではないでしょうか。 あるいは丸く切開かれた胸元から乳房が露出しているくらい過激でも良いかも知れません。 生まれ変わったカレンは性や裸身に対して恥じらいもためらいもなく、他者を威圧するかのごとく開放的になっている・・・気がします。裸の体に刻み込まれた刺青こそ、彼女にとって真の戦闘服なのです。 それでもハヤトには従順な女にはなるのでしょうね。もしかしたらカナに対しても・・・。
inaba
2025-11-12 06:39:28 +0000 UTC네 있습니다. 다만 지민을 제외한 다른 캐릭터들의 타락 과정은 소설 형식으로 다루게 될 거 같습니다
Dr. Stein
2025-11-12 05:14:41 +0000 UTC조금 애피소드 내용을 서두르는것 같은 느낌이나요. 이번에도 behind scene 있나요?
Catherine Bay
2025-11-11 23:47:54 +0000 UTCカレンにどんなタトゥーを入れるか、深く悩んでいます。それから、彼女にどんな服を着せるかも。まだ16話で彼女が着る服を決めていません。 スミレは都市の治安が通常通りに戻るように管理していますが、一方でハヤトの事業拡大を助けるために最善を尽くしています。主要な人物を取り込んだり洗脳したり、カルテルの敵対組織を粉砕することに全力を尽くします。そして、ハヤトのクラブが盛況に営業できるように協力します。 残りはあなたが言ったことと似ていますね。堕落した女性警察官たちが性犯罪者をどのように扱うかもかなり興味深い部分です。
Dr. Stein
2025-11-11 21:13:27 +0000 UTCIt's not because of production costs, but because animation is a field I've never worked in, so it's unclear how to plan production. Even securing voice actors and animators right now isn't easy.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-11 21:01:25 +0000 UTCSexual shame disappears and erogenous zones become much more sensitive. There are no severe addiction symptoms or side effects like with conventional drugs. There are no other variants yet, but cartel researchers are developing new drugs. The cartel has a clear leader, and he is very displeased with Alex's careless actions. However, if Alex is caught, the entire cartel could be at risk, so he gave Maladea to Mia to save him. Mia or Lin is active as an executive in Alex's cartel. The cartel's goal is to stably expand its business while avoiding surveillance from various governments and intelligence agencies. However, by directly attacking the police to rescue Alex, their plans went significantly awry. There are no organizations dealing with similar drugs, but there are rival cartel organizations opposing the cartel.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-11 20:54:49 +0000 UTCThank you! I have several ideas, but nothing specific yet. I plan to finish Season 2 first and then take my time to think about it.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-11 20:44:47 +0000 UTC다음 화 초반부에 등장합니다!
Dr. Stein
2025-11-11 20:42:22 +0000 UTC레즈씬이 있으면 좋겠어요. 점점 동화되는 느낌을 내주는 장치로 적합할거 같습니다.
doc jay
2025-11-09 13:27:14 +0000 UTC非常期待
milan13nesta
2025-11-09 12:32:43 +0000 UTCコメントありがとうございます。 これまでの常識もプライドもすべて剝がされて、無垢で無抵抗となった花蓮が新しい文化の中で性的なコミュニケーション、肌を露出した制服、濃い妖艶なメイク、そして喫煙に快楽を見出していくのも、ダークヒロインとして覚醒していくのも楽しみです。 本来の強固な正義感は、隼人とカルテルへの強い忠誠心に変換され、冷酷な殺人マシーンへと生まれ変わるのですね。 その時に花蓮はどんなタトゥーを自身に施すのか、興味を抱きます。 芽依は腕のタトゥーの位置まで、佳奈を模倣していますものね。 背中の龍は彼女のオリジナルですが、その大胆な紋章の取り込みに、悪へと覚醒した芽依の心境が伺えるようです。 カルテルの女性幹部たちの一日は、すごく興味があります！ クラブでは凛が取り仕切って、女弁護士や佳奈のクラスメイトたちを働かせ、警察署では菫をリーダーに、百花やユン・セリをサブリーダーにして秘密の売春宿として営業もしながら、カルテルの犯罪の証拠を隠滅したり、敵対カルテルを摘発したりするのでしょうね。 その際には芽依が不都合な目撃者の記憶を消したり、花蓮が敵組織の要人を暗殺したりもするのでしょう。 大地は記憶を消され、すべて忘れてもらった方が、彼にとっては幸せかも知れません・・・。
inaba
2025-11-09 00:31:52 +0000 UTCHellooo, I have a few questions. What are the effects of the drug except the corruption part? Is it for example increasing the sexual sensitivity? Is the drug like heroin etc. damaging the body of its consumer? Are there different variants of the drug? If yes, are more in development? Is the cartel aware of Alex's actions? Are they monitoring him? Does the cartel have a leader or a group of leaders? Are parts of the cartel led by female members which joined without being corrupted? What is the goal of the cartel? Are there organisations with a similar drug? Thanks in advance for the answers!
Ruz
2025-11-08 17:35:03 +0000 UTCAwesome i love your work after this History you already have ideas of which topic you follow next
Hboy
2025-11-08 05:03:03 +0000 UTC是因为价格嘛，如果需要钱可以众筹试试
海の襟
2025-11-08 04:48:18 +0000 UTCThank you. Such scenes will continue in the future!
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:37:16 +0000 UTC마지막에 정아가 한번 더 기회를 주겠다는 장면으로 끝나나요?
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:36:30 +0000 UTC노출의 야릇한 쾌감에 젖어드는 장면이 17화 즈음 등장할 거 같습니다ㅎㅎ 시나리오 쓰면서 빨리 그리고 싶었던 장면 중 하나였어요. 지배하는 쾌락에 눈 뜨는 장면도 그려보고 싶은데, 이건 에피소드 하나가 더 필요할 거 같아 살짝 고민이 되는군요. 여튼 저도 매우 끌리는 씬이기 때문에 적극 고민해보겠습니다!
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:34:54 +0000 UTCもちろんです. EP.16の見どころは、EP.12と似た状況に遭遇しても、全く異なる反応を見せるカレンの姿です. EP.15は、スミレとカレンのレズビアンシーンを見たい方々、カレンの洗脳過程を見たい方々の意見を積極的に反映しました. 私の体を心配してくださり、大変ありがとうございます. この作品をうまく導き、立派に完結させてゆっくり休むのが私の願いです. 最初はただ断片的なアイデア一つに頼って始めた作品でしたが、これほど多くの方々が私の漫画を心から好きになってくださるので、本当に良いものを作りたいと思うようになりました. 体調管理に特に気をつけながら、残りのエピソードも最善を尽くして制作してみます.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:32:55 +0000 UTC目前还没有计划。制作第一季动画的工作室似乎不太愿意与我进一步合作。如果想制作第二季动画，我需要寻找新的工作室和配音演员，但我从未做过这些，所以不知道从何开始。
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:27:42 +0000 UTC我想在休息的时候把米林的堕落过程出版成小说。 美林和智旻像贤贞和瑞渊一样,从高中时期开始就有着深厚的缘分和叙事。 以后想讨论一下。
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:23:47 +0000 UTCAs of now, there are no specific plans. However, I did once have an idea where, after Kate's corruption is complete, the two of them would raid a rival cartel group and annihilate its members.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:22:05 +0000 UTC타락을 빨리 보고 싶으신 분들도 많을텐데... 제 이야기 노선을 이해해주셔서 감사합니다! 만약 휴재 하게 되면 미리 말씀드릴게요!
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:20:29 +0000 UTCThank you very much for your warm encouragement. Originally, I was going to take a break after working for more than six months, but due to the backlog of work these days, I quickly lost my stamina. I couldn't think of a good idea because of my physical strength, so the vicious cycle of delayed manuscript work has repeated. Still, thanks to the people who support my comics, I'm always working with a happy heart.😊
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:18:46 +0000 UTCThank you very much. The scenes where Kate faces challenges will continue from here on, so for readers rooting for Kate, it seems like a rather unfortunate storyline will persist.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:16:29 +0000 UTC我认为会更接近前者。但是作为卡特尔的能干干部活跃的同时，会发展成为拥有不亚于郑雅的重要性和魅力的女王。
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:13:06 +0000 UTCThank you very much for catching such details! Since brainwashing was impossible without instilling a perfect sense of defeat and despair in Kate, Mae made her experience a devastating defeat in Kate's dream.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:10:28 +0000 UTCThank you very much! I'm very happy that you carefully reviewed and loved all the scenes I created. I put a lot of effort into every scene, not just roughly drawing a single panel, so receiving such praise makes me feel great. Showing Kate's hair color in multiple versions... that's a good idea. I'll try uploading it later. It might be good to decide after seeing the readers' reactions. Actually, I want to write Mei's story, and I want to finish the NTR 3 drawing, and there are so many things I want to do when I get a break. Haha!
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 03:06:50 +0000 UTCThank you! I paid special attention to Jane's costume design. Haha! I personally like that outfit, so I plan to have Jane wear it again later. In the next episode, Kate will return to reality. Perhaps a changed daily life awaits her.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 02:59:36 +0000 UTC第14集是智敏陨落的序幕。 非常感谢您的鼓励！我同意您的观点，讽刺的是，金龙可能成为救世主。对于智敏来说，与其像现在这样保持局外人身份或处于边缘，不如跟随所有人走上堕落之路，这可能更幸福。
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 02:57:33 +0000 UTCThank you. Please send me a personal message. I will send you the tattoo files.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 02:54:17 +0000 UTCThat's good. Hearing that gives me an idea. One day, a picture emphasizing breasts without a face appeared on Mia's Instagram. A surprised Carter asks Mia what's going on, but she replies that she was hacked. Carter couldn't refute that because he couldn't tell if the person in the picture was Mia.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 02:53:40 +0000 UTC사실 미림의 배신만 아니었다면 저렇게 무기력하게 당하지 않았을 수도 있고, 반격의 모멘텀을 마련할 수도 있는 캐릭터였죠...ㅠ 감사합니다. 건강 잘 챙기면서 16화도 한번 잘 마무리 해보겠습니다!
Dr. Stein
2025-11-08 02:50:33 +0000 UTCそうです。次回の舞台は警察署です。
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:55:48 +0000 UTC저도 지민처럼 강인하고 의로운 캐릭터가 망가지는 모습을 볼 땐 상당히 복잡한 감정이 듭니다ㅠ 에로틱하면서도 한편으로는 안타깝고 미안한... 내면 묘사와 에로틱한 요소를 모두 잡아내려고 상당히 고민을 많이 했는데, 호평해주시니 매우 다행입니다ㅎㅎ
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:55:24 +0000 UTCKate's brainwashing still has many stages left. Her personality's corruption won't appear until after episode 20, and her complete physical corruption will likely take a bit longer than that.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:52:32 +0000 UTC当分の間、カレンは皆から嘲笑され、弄ばれるでしょう。しかし、それは訓練の一環であり、悪として完全に開花した後には、ハヤトの右腕でありカルテルの幹部として活動することになります。ハヤトのために他のカルテル組織員を殺戮することも厭わない冷血漢になるでしょう。 メイは元々眼鏡を描いていましたが、妖艶な感じが薄れたため眼鏡を外しました。ハハ！予想通り、カナから強い影響を受けましたね。メイはリンと共にカルテルのブレーンとして活動するでしょう。 後で全ての物語を終えたら、カルテルの女性幹部たちの一日をビハインドストーリー形式で描きたいです。 いつもありがとうございます！
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:43:21 +0000 UTCNo falta mucho para que eso suceda. Probablemente verás esa escena a principios del próximo año.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:36:34 +0000 UTCRin will only appear for a very short time and will not play an important role. The reason she was included is because she could be an important key to the happy ending route. She has complex feelings about having corrupted Mia. She wanted to destroy Mia, but her heart was swayed when she saw Mia apologize. That's why she asked May, who was destroying Kate.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:34:52 +0000 UTCDebido a la situación del traductor, la versión en español se subirá a finales de noviembre.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:30:28 +0000 UTC2년동안 변치 않고 꾸준히 응원해주셔서 대단히 감사합니다! 앞으로도 동공 없는 장면들은 종종 나올 거에요ㅎㅎ 제 작품이 일상에 작은 보탬이라도 될 수 있다면 그만큼 뿌듯한 일이 없을 거 같습니다!
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:29:40 +0000 UTC¡Gracias! Estoy pensando en vestir a Kate con un nuevo uniforme de policía, pero todavía estoy indeciso sobre qué atuendo sería el mejor. Lo que está claro es que será mucho más atrevido que los uniformes que llevaban las policías en el episodio 12.
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:26:04 +0000 UTCThank you for your kind words. If I do take a break, I will let you know in advance!
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:23:50 +0000 UTC고맙습니다!
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:22:00 +0000 UTC你好！
Dr. Stein
2025-11-07 23:21:47 +0000 UTC스탠다드 결제했는데 다볼수있는게 아닌가요 설명좀 적어주세요 내용이 보다 끊긴거처럼 짧은데
수밍
2025-11-07 22:52:58 +0000 UTCGreat job so far, absolutely love this series, imo I think it would be great if we have more scenes of Kate being trained into a regressed obediant broken slut.
Lewd Bringer
2025-11-07 16:19:59 +0000 UTC지민의 타락과정에서 노출의 야릇한 쾌감, 야한 옷을 입은 자신을 보고 흥분한 모습, 지배하는 쾌락에 눈을 뜬 모습이 있으면 좋겠다는 개인적인 바램도 적어봅니다! 언제나 화이팅입니다!!
LJSSJ
2025-11-07 14:48:42 +0000 UTC15話のアップロードありがとうございます！強い女性だった花蓮が追い詰められていく様子と完全に堕ちきっている芽依、最高です。 次回からは警察署のシーンになり、EP12とは異なる価値観の花蓮が見れたりするのでしょうか。いづれにしても楽しみで仕方ないです。 今回、私たち読者の意見を反映していただいたエピソードだったとのことですが、私はあなたの描く漫画が大好きです。あなたの考えたエピソードであれば、絶対に楽しめる確信があります。コメントへの返信等はとても嬉しいですが、それよりもあなたが健康で創作的であることが一番の幸福です。どうか、ご無理なさらずに。 引き続き、応援しております。
hyuha
2025-11-06 16:11:18 +0000 UTC不知道视频版本还会更新吗
海の襟
2025-11-06 13:03:31 +0000 UTC非常完美的一章，知敏的恶堕应该会非常精彩，而且加入了机械洗脑，内容更加丰富了。在这里能不能期待一下美琳的恶堕过程番外呢？
milan13nesta
2025-11-05 15:53:42 +0000 UTCDo we get a reality action with Jane as well? 🫡
Poomandhu
2025-11-05 14:03:14 +0000 UTC“鼻祖”应该是笔误，我也笔误了😂
雨月云
2025-11-05 09:52:39 +0000 UTC항상 잘보고 있습니다! 지민이 타락된것도 빨리 보고 싶지만 과정도 잘 쓰셔서 지금 연재되는것도 너무 맘에 드네요, 몸이 안좋으시다거나 여러이유로 연재가 밀린다싶으시면 미리 공지해주신다면 대부분의 구독자분들은 이해해주실거라고 생각합니다, 파이팅!
ㅋㅅㅋ
2025-11-05 02:45:32 +0000 UTCI believe I am echoing a lot of your fans when I say that we wouldn't mind a delay. There is no need to get anxious, please take care of your health and rest, so that you can continue to enjoy this journey as much as we do. Your work ethic and your consistency in delivering such high quality content every time and on time is unparallel, we wouldn't think less of you if you delayed things to give your body and mind the time to relax. Also every chapter just gets better and better!! Thanks a lot for your hard work and dedication to this story!!
Udong
2025-11-04 22:03:30 +0000 UTCThe scenes are incredible, Dr. Stein, good job. Although I still feel sorry for Kate.😞
Wizard EinS
2025-11-04 20:24:44 +0000 UTC感谢您的辛勤创作，非常期待之后几话的内容！很好奇知敏最后会变得像瑞妍那样对金龙百依百顺，还是变得像廷雅那样成为组织头目的比较强势的类型。感觉第一种的反差会很大很有趣。
apricot
2025-11-04 17:22:06 +0000 UTCAmazing new Episode...the outfits and the whole scenario are currently more as 10/10 :o and nice small detail how Kate still fight even in her dream that "Jane" needs to hold her down and that also Mia and the other two are still worried that it won´t be enough to break her.
DesiLu
2025-11-04 16:56:14 +0000 UTCAnother excellent episode! Plenty of heat to be had especially with the outfits and Jane being her best bossy bitch self! I wasn't quite expecting them to go for the breakdown route rather than turning her into a loyal soldier. Don't worry about us, while I agree it's best to have all your ducks in a row when you sit down to finish a chapter I can't think of any scene in this chapter I wouldn't want and am happy to have added! Without being greedy, I've been perfectly happy with your output as a member and would prefer a polished product you're happy with even if it comes a bit late. Perhaps (especially with the holiday season coming up) think of some potential filler content and plan out future breaks to lessen your burden and keep yourself healthy and stress-free. For instance, since it seems everyone gets a dye job maybe show us a Kate headshot with different colors to drool over. Again though, excellent work! Look forward to Kate's future outfits!.
The_Stork
2025-11-04 15:44:40 +0000 UTCTake care of your health! Health always comes first! Saying that, Jane's is very sexy in the end of this episode! Again, we all gonna get excited for what kind of things they are going to do with Kate's in her deeper dreams! And Kate dreaming all of this stuff's while in a statis tank with empty eyes are amazing too, reminds me Mia while she was in the process of brainwashing by Rin!
Lestatos Lestat
2025-11-04 15:39:28 +0000 UTC最后文案里写的14话我猜可能是鼻祖？可见Stein老师创作实在辛苦了。注意保重身体🤒 到目前为止的旅程，一切都是那么不可思议，下一话应该就能让智敏感受到深深的无力感，智敏渐渐意识到她救不了任何人，陷入深深的自我怀疑，而金龙却成为她的“救赎”，也许会有这样一个心路历程的转变？期待下一话～～
雨月云
2025-11-04 14:49:14 +0000 UTC感謝作者創作!! 這次的劇情很吸引人，讓人非常想知道接下來的發展。 作者畫圖之餘也請注意健康。 我每個月都期待著您的作品。
FB
2025-11-04 14:48:40 +0000 UTCI think it will take until Ep 17 or 18 for kate to be completely brainwash
Kitty
2025-11-04 14:23:28 +0000 UTCI want see things going slower the tattoos coming one per time
Pornhwa
2025-11-04 14:03:15 +0000 UTCthank you for the new art. I will see the tattoos. I come here because it
Pornhwa
2025-11-04 13:57:38 +0000 UTCI mentioned the scene with Carter in a previous post, and I imagine it goes something like this: Carter checks Instagram and finds Mia posting pictures of herself in revealing clothes again. He calls his already brainwashed sister, who tells him that someone has taken over her Instagram account and there's nothing to worry about.
greggg
2025-11-04 13:25:03 +0000 UTC친구만은 살리려던 미림이가 아주 적극적이네요 ㅋㅋㅋ 무서운 세뇌의 힘...! 그나저나 저도 왜인지 지민이가 이겨내길 바라면서 저도 모르는 사이에 응원하고 있네요... 강한 정신력을 너무 잘 표현해 주신 것 때문인지도 모르겠지만요. 어차피 결말은 정해져 있겠지만... 쉬엄쉬엄 하셔도 좋으니 건강 우선시 해주셨으면 합니다. 이번에도 감사합니다!
gh di
2025-11-04 13:21:11 +0000 UTC次のエピソードから警察署に戻るのですか？
xxxvza2
2025-11-04 13:04:16 +0000 UTC내면 속에서의 세뇌를 이겨내는 자신과의 싸움과 갈등을 정말 잘 표현한 것 같습니다! 그로인해 가벼운 접촉 역시 아주 자극적이게 보여지는 면도 있네요. 다른 캐릭터들은 세뇌에 빠져도 상관없었는데, 왜인지는 모르겠으나 개인적으로 지민이는 저걸 이겨냈으면 좋겠다는 생각이 듭니다...물론 Dr.stein님이 구상하신 결말이 있겠지만요ㅎㅎ 무리하지 마시고, 앞으로도 에피소드 혹은 좋은 작품 기대하겠습니다! 감사합니다!
devil white
2025-11-04 12:59:32 +0000 UTCNext episode Kate will be completely brainwashed or stiil in progress, sir
rainning
2025-11-04 12:42:19 +0000 UTC今回はまず扉絵の、カプセルに囚われた花蓮の姿に背徳感を覚えて興奮します。 あれだけ強かった花蓮が惨めに裸体を晒し、洗脳されようとしているのですから。 自尊心を折られた花蓮は従順な弱者として、カルテルの最下層で奴隷のように生きて行くのか、それとも新しい文化に順応して、強い正義から強い悪へと変貌するのか、楽しみです。 そして芽依の美しい変貌ぶりも素晴らしいですね。佳奈に開発されて妖艶に洗練されたのでしょうか。メガネよりもコンタクトを勧められ、メイクも濃厚に、タバコも吸って・・・と教え込まれて。 芽依には悪用できる学識や技術があるからか、既にカルテルの中でも独特の地位を獲得しているようにも思えます。佳奈の片腕としてカルテルの悪事に貢献しているのでしょうし、本人も警察時代の仕事よりやりがいを感じているようにも見えます。 そう思うと、悪い方向にではありますが、カルテルの人材を育てる力はすごいですね。 佳奈、芽依、百花、菫、ユン·セリそして花蓮と、どんどん優秀なメンバーも増えているし。 メンバーが出揃った後には、「カルテルの一日」みたいなものも見てみたくなりますね。洗脳された警察官たちや佳奈の大学方面、女弁護士なども含めて、彼女たちが普段どんな暗躍しているのか、覗いてみたい気持ちがありますし、私自身も客として、クラブや警察署を訪れてみたいものです。
inaba
2025-11-04 12:37:01 +0000 UTCEspero que en algún punto jueguen en contra su conciencia y utilicen una ilusión de su hermano Carter para romperla y corromperla lentamente.
Alvarez Díaz
2025-11-04 12:16:51 +0000 UTCRin showed up during the brainwashing scene, which makes sense. Will she give any suggestions to Mei, since she has a lot of experience in this area? From what I understand, Rin didn’t undergo brainwashing. Will she have a bigger role this season?
greggg
2025-11-04 12:14:19 +0000 UTCEste capítulo no va a estar en español?
Alvarez Díaz
2025-11-04 12:02:03 +0000 UTC정말 기대했던 장면이라 너무나 잘 보았습니다! 기계 속에서 믿었던 친구에 의해 세뇌당하는 지민이의 무기력한 알몸 상태와 흥분 속에서 멍하니 풀린 눈과 표정이 정말이지 최고입니다~! 앞으로 이런 장면이 더 있었으면 하는 개인적인 작은 소망 하나 가져봅니다 ㅎㅎ 본격적인 클라이막스의 시작부터 몰아치는 꼴릿함이 장난이 아니네요! 기대감에 두근두근합니다! 이 작품 덕분에 정말 삶의 활력을 얻는 것 같네요 ㅎㅎ 고생 정말 많으셨고 다시 한번 좋은 작품 볼 수 있게 해주셔서 감사합니다, 작가님!!
트이나리
2025-11-04 12:01:04 +0000 UTCEl episodio se puso bueno ya quiero ver qué depara el futuro para nuestra heroína ya quiero saber que trajes la hacen utilizar o como la torturan de otra forma. Espero te recuperes de tu salud 👍
Alvarez Díaz
2025-11-04 12:00:47 +0000 UTCHey Buddy, take youre time. If the next Episode is relaxed it dosen‘t Matter. Than just Delay One Episode so youre back on Track but dont Risk youre Health!
Y-Charge
2025-11-04 11:59:38 +0000 UTC고생하셨어요 감사합니다
Puppy
2025-11-04 11:37:56 +0000 UTC来了
john
2025-11-04 11:30:47 +0000 UTC
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