Children of their Fathers, part 5.
Added 2018-04-27 15:50:11 +0000 UTCSorry if all this prep bores you. But Sherman has become an effective leader precisely because he does his homework.
Comments
Nothing like a good detective story to back up the bone-breaking . . . makes nice balance of brains to force.
Sonicrailin
2018-04-28 19:14:28 +0000 UTCI have a tendency to write the same way, with my characters figuring it out on the fly.
Perfesser Bear
2018-04-27 20:07:18 +0000 UTCPrep is always good.
A Patreon of the Ahts
2018-04-27 19:49:30 +0000 UTCIf you are worried about boring us, you could always have him do his deducing in the middle of a senseless fistfight and/or car chase. In your favor, you didn't have him figure it out off-screen and then monologue the results into the story after your lead villain asks him how he knew. The big deal against talking heads is that it's easy to draw static scenes, but you've got visual interest happening in here. I'm cool with this.
Mark Ashworth
2018-04-27 18:08:10 +0000 UTC
