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Sorry for not posting anything in a while! Been so busy with this piece haha, took forever.

Also I'm not sure about the last bit of dialogue, as it does kinda imply kids coming in. Any suggestions are welcome! ;Þ

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Oh, sorry, I mean the way it goes hands, butt, legs, udders, face, final :3 Love the order and proccess

Sam and Kara

Hmm I'm not 100% sure what you mean?

Unidentified TF

I'm glad to hear :D

Unidentified TF

Oh, if I may This is a truly outstanding TF, and well I am looking into doing a Christmas Reindeer TF my self this year. If I may, could I replicate your proccess? As the order and assets that TF is spectacular Np np if not :3

Sam and Kara

Glad to hear! :D

Unidentified TF

haha for sure, thanks! :D

Unidentified TF

AWWWWW AMAZING :D Also, he he, I guess he's going to bite someone his own size now >:3

Sam and Kara

This comic is gorgeous! I love, love, love the movement, the introduction of changes, the dialogue, and the eye work is always so telling. I mean...WOW. You combined a lot of things that are dark and balanced, and I just love the movement and changes of everything. Fantastic work. I sent you messages about the dialogue but can paste here depending on the mood. As for the ending, not sure what you mean for help, but you do suggest that families are coming in and that Ashley was the helper who is supposed to be the Christmas jingle. So you did that well. If you want more conversation, or where the story would go. I could see it going several ways. The first is the nice way implying kids and the lighter tone. Ashley would say: "Eager? The only thing I'm eager for is changing back! What's the cure for a reindeer bite that turns you into a reindeer?" The Deer in the pen would say, "I'm eager to show them something... if you know what I mean!" If the premise is that the owner wanted and knew she would become a reindeer, then here would be the dialog. Ashley: "Eager? What am I eager to show them as a reindeer? Oh my god? Are they going to ride me? The Reindeer Response 1: I can think of a few things you'd be "eager" to try in that form! The Reindeer Response 2: Oh, you'll be going for a ride in more ways than one my ReinDear Ashley!" If you are looking for the naughtiest version and the manager knew, then this is my take. Ashley: "Whew, ooh feel hot and bothered, what's happening? I am feeling eager for... hmmm no that can't be The Reindeer: Or you are Ashley! I'm sure they are eager to see us make some beautiful Christmas music together, if you know what i mean!"

blueberrycowz

Love it! ❤️

Digitalneo


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