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Hearth's Warming Eve Special Page 01

We're taking a break from the main storyline for a short Hearth's Warming Eve story, about 12 pages long. Hope you will enjoy this slice-of-life interlude :)

Hearth's Warming Eve Special Page 01

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A carrot :D

I wonder what the horn of the snow pony is made of. The color kinda reminds me of that Orb of Pure Evil. And while it would be no doubt funny if Lulu nonchalantly used a broken part of that thing as horn, it’s obviously something else. Come on Tempest, both your daughter and girlfriend are looking forward to this. Try to show a little bit more excitement than just “Fine.” 😉

NTG

It took a moment, but I spotted the shading around Tempest’s eye. Nice touch. Although, as much as I hate to break it to you, I’ve just noticed that in the top panels, the characters call it ‘Heart’s Warming’, instead of ‘Hearth’s Warming.’

Double R Forrest

If it's too much of an issue, there's always Grandpa.

Steve Lynx (Boulder)

Fixed, thanks! Although "grandad" is fine. We jumped a couple of weeks ahead ^^ I now added one detail that can hint it.

I can’t help but wonder how far we’re jumping into the future in this holiday special. Also, in panel 6, it should be: ‘Granddad Chadron brought it from Canterlot when I was little.’

Double R Forrest


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