A Storm's Lullaby Page 178
Added 2021-11-04 11:28:36 +0000 UTCA promise.
Comments
Click once and then twice to zoom it out; the page is actually pretty big.
2021-11-11 22:46:43 +0000 UTCTempest's dialogue on the last shot is a bit small. I have trouble distinguishing certain word.
Lux The Pegasus
2021-11-11 22:35:29 +0000 UTC^^
2021-11-08 14:09:57 +0000 UTCuuuh interesting ^^
Ironbuster
2021-11-05 21:22:07 +0000 UTCAlright!
2021-11-05 10:08:38 +0000 UTCThistle is bleeding? I knew that whatever the artifact did wasn’t good and that Thistle being unconscious is a serious situation. But despite what Fireweed said, there’s a total lack of blood. Showing Thistle with some gaping wounds obviously wouldn’t fit tone of the comic, but if she’s bleeding it has to be shown to the reader. Maybe have a thin line of blood trickling out of her mouth or put some small blood stains on Fireweed’s clothes?
NTG
2021-11-04 23:34:27 +0000 UTCOps was meant to be restored, will fix!
2021-11-04 11:39:04 +0000 UTC"Resored my life"?
Myrkin
2021-11-04 11:30:56 +0000 UTC
