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A Storm's Lullaby Page 171 Inks

Orb's revenge.

A Storm's Lullaby Page 171 Inks

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Oh. Gonna read it anyway^^ gn8 Dsana

xD No worries. Ignore my DM, then lol.

Omg, forget I said anything. I'm such a dumbass. I somehow completely mixed up this page and the last. Somehow in my mind they became two drafts of the same page. And here I thought I'd finally found something to critique again. What a glorious brainfart.

🤘 https://youtu.be/I_IewCt_urs?t=241

It's taking the last final shot.

Hopefully, the final page will be clearer, especially the penultimate panel.

Is the thing blow itself up just to take out everypony around? Talk about a sore loser.

NTG

I’m a little confused with this page, cause as of now, it looks like Tempest doesn’t even notice the big magical explosion(?) at the end.

Double R Forrest

It's chaos

Lux The Pegasus


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