Thistle & Thunder Page 77
Added 2021-09-04 07:49:24 +0000 UTCNew month, new page!
Let's kick off Book 3 ^_^ Please bookmark this page for the future!
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This is why I wrote "Please bookmark this page for the future" - we will revisit this page once ASL is finished ^^
2021-09-06 14:32:27 +0000 UTCThank you! And I will change the dialogue :] As for the timeline...it indeed is semi-canon. Also please note "Please bookmark this page for the future" remark :3
2021-09-06 14:30:45 +0000 UTC:D ;D
2021-09-06 14:29:22 +0000 UTCProbably, yeah :)
2021-09-06 14:29:17 +0000 UTCTrue.
2021-09-06 14:29:03 +0000 UTCthats an ConveniendStore then xD
Ironbuster
2021-09-05 13:15:43 +0000 UTCYou should have detailed backgrounds in the first page. to set the scene.
2021-09-04 18:31:27 +0000 UTCI have to admit this is a bit of a spoiler. maybe after the drama in ASL it could predict what it will put back together.
Lux The Pegasus
2021-09-04 17:10:05 +0000 UTCI would have thought it was Tempest that it was custom made.
Lux The Pegasus
2021-09-04 17:05:40 +0000 UTCI get that T&T is only semi-canon with some liberties in regard to the ASL timeline ... but, if this is punishment for her spying, does that mean this takes place between ASL and ASS ? Great first page, love their expressions. (my inner grammar naz! compels me to suggest "how many nights DO I need to..." and "but when WILL WE play again" ^^) Also, saturday night stream HYPE !!!
2021-09-04 16:28:47 +0000 UTC^^
2021-09-04 15:29:03 +0000 UTCBetter view coming soon!
2021-09-04 15:28:58 +0000 UTCFrom the Chastity Belts & Sofas store in the nearest town! :D
2021-09-04 15:28:36 +0000 UTCWhere did they even get a chastity belt?
Double R Forrest
2021-09-04 13:31:27 +0000 UTCMaybe also give it a different angle like maybe wearing it earns her the right. Just like with children earning privilages can often work better than taking them away. Also maybe give a better view of Tempest. Is she lying on a couch or something?
2021-09-04 09:41:22 +0000 UTCNot very pleasant for Thistle but it seems amused Tempest. she is posed like a queen surely dragging herself to think about what she could do well this time. it is not the idea that is lacking.
Lux The Pegasus
2021-09-04 08:16:32 +0000 UTC
