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A Storm's Lullaby Page 158

The Orb reveals its plans for Tempest.

 A Storm's Lullaby Page 158

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I suppose it is a bit mixed up indeed >,<

Shh, let me be lazy with bg this one page ;-)

'Tis true.

it's up to her indeed

Something I noticed when I was staring at Tempest's legs for no particular reason: Her gait in the these panels is all over the place. She's kinda shuffling in the first panel, trotting in the second and walking in the third panel. All perfectly possible of course, but this feels more like a "continuous slow walk with monologue" scene so it seems a bit off and is hard to unsee.

Interesting development. The storm queen, huh ... I like the armor texture. Looks sparklier than before. But I think you could've done a bit more with the background. Maybe just some trees, blurred out to different degrees as a visual representation of her mind fading in and out of that of that monologue/dialogue.

That evil spirit is like a bad friend, always encouraging Tempest’s worst behavior.

NTG

I have the impression

Lux The Pegasus

Is it really the orb though? Tempest seems to have been thinking these thoughts herself for quite some time.

I was right ! WE ARE ALL FUCKED! Thistle's family not only condemned Equestria but the whole world. now there is Tempest to try to make up for it and stop such an idea

Lux The Pegasus


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