A Storm's Lullaby Page 154

Oh well ^^'

Indeed, indeed.

"turns his back and who goes far away to disperse in the landscape" I can see it, yes :) "unless it's a quick or abrupt movement" It's quick, yes! A suprise kiss ^^

Gonna make Thistle and Thunder a little awkward

Firemane

For once Tempest initiates a kiss. It's a bit of a shame she does it to make a point.

Myrkin

as far as I'm concerned. Tempest's choices made sense and always tried to avoid sentimental tragedy. this is what she probably experienced each time she tried or what she saw in others. to say that "the love story ends badly" in the case of Thistle we could say that she will at least have to try. she is clearly found in a position of nothing that can be done. she does not stink to kill Fireweed, nor Rusty, she can no longer trust Thistle and she can no longer see Lullaby. what she could do other than partire.

Lux The Pegasus

The worst kind of corruption is subtle corruption. The kind where you think you're still entirely in control, and in fact ARE mostly in control. But you've got that subtle influence, twisting your thoughts ever-so-slightly. Not directly controlling you per-se. Merely influencing, in the subtle thoughts it puts into your mind. Tempest will likely not be able to realize she is being influenced. Even though she is. But she retains enough free will to be able to convince herself that all of her choices are her own, and hers alone. She will not able to see herself. Even worse, the crystal gave her something that made her feel "complete". She will incorporate it into her identity as a unicorn. Because it fills that missing piece. That will make it very difficult for her to ever step away from it. Once you incorporate something into your identity, it is very difficult to ever be free of it.

emo ??? well it's a storm. it ravages by stupidity almost everything in its path.

Lux The Pegasus

Oh for Celestia’s sake, stop being such an emo Tempest. XD

NTG

the devory pony who gets the hell out and the lover on his knees it must hurt. its erects me a page without dialogue with Tempest who turns his back and who goes far away to disperse in the landscape. small criticism on the drawing on plate 6 I think you should remove the effect of movement. unless it's a quick or abrupt movement.

Lux The Pegasus