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Early Access: Emergency Contact | [M4F] [Hospital] [Comfort] [Exes to Lovers]

Hey Lovelies! It's time for another sweet little SFW experience. Have fun listening to it before anyone else!

This lovely script was written by Lupinstolemyheart on Reddit.

(reposting because I forgot to label this as early access)

Early Access: Emergency Contact | [M4F] [Hospital] [Comfort] [Exes to Lovers]

Comments

I definitely can understand what you mean. I think that change of rhythm in the delivery can be particularly noticeable considering virtually every audio I share here on Patreon is written by me, so it makes sense that it may feel like it flows a bit strange or differently since this was written by someone else. Thanks for the feedback!

Dominic

Is it alright for me to give some constructive criticism of this one? It's not giving quite the same natural delivery as your other work. It's your mastery of changes in tone and how you interpret the scripts you choose or write to flow naturally along with the beats of the conversation that make it appear effortlessly in character and suspend disbelief even when you're a minotaur or being snarky working on the underside of a car. The sound design for the sound effects is great as always. I just felt that if I didn't say anything it would be disrespectful to you as an artist & actor to never give you any constructive criticism. The only reason I guess I haven't before I realise now is because it's so rare that there is room for any. I'm probably being bad at the whole constructive criticism thing if it ends with a testimony to how fucking good of an actor you are, because well that would be news to no one πŸ˜‚ but yeah. I hope this was helpful and was in any way coherant if not well you never saw me and im very sorry also I was never here, ok? 🀐 Ok, sorry and uh bye ~ α••(ᐛ)α•—

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